A UFO at School

Tu escritura es magistral como siempre, Ogre. La historia del juego en sí está llena de contenido y opciones, y me mantuvo entretenido hasta el final. No pude evitar sentir curiosidad por todos los posibles resultados y decisiones que están tan clara y maravillosamente ubicadas en esta historia.

Disfruté cada minuto de esta historia. Me siento tentado a decir que te has superado a ti mismo, pero tu escritura siempre es consistente en lo buena que es. Gracias por otra lectura maravillosa. Anticipo con impaciencia el próximo juego de historia que puedas crear. Ya sea una secuela inspirada de esta o algo completamente diferente. El nivel de cuidado y atención al detalle que pones en cada una de tus historias siempre es un placer para leer y disfrutar.

Gracias una vez más por escribir esta maravillosa y apasionante historia.

So, this was pretty good.

It was of course, a bit random, but it probably wouldn't be easy to write a super realistic story about a UFO showing up at school.

I enjoyed the writing style, and the characters were pretty well developed (which is impressive since the storygame had a short length.)

You managed to provide an interesting plot, a setting, characters with personality, and a main problem in just 800-1200 words. Again, very impressive.

The length may have been short in terms of words, but I was glad there were at least a few choices and a couple paragraphs on every page.

Some of the situations seemed very, uh, convenient and unrealistic. Sort of like they just happened for plot convenience and weren't really thought of very carefully before being written.

I did notice a few errors in tense, grammar, and spelling, but not anything too major. All in all, a good read if you're looking for something short and simple.

4/8.

We liked that it had aliens. The ending was shocking! The aliens that landed their ship on the field. Their teacher got missing.

This was great for the stereotypical genre of little green beings from outer space. It gives some choice of action. It obviously wasn't meant as a serious work of fiction. There's not a deep level of character or plot here, but it's a short, after all.

Does the author mean to keep swapping tenses, or did he write it like that to keep us off balance? We will never know now, since those green blobs disintegrated him, along with his ordinary, everyday school and its pupils and staff.

i like aliens

Great short story; need to follow up with choices of destinations and choices of what to do once there

I went through all the options, its still short. But not bad.

It was a little short but ill go through it again, my rating may change you little green man

not good

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