Awake

cute little story, but there were a few spelling and grammar mistakes.

Well to be fair this was better than most of the recent shit that's been posted, but still very short and with a couple of weird grammar issues here and there.

The first sentence being the worst offender:

"Nooooooooo!" You say, running at what almost seemed completely not at all, towards him attacker.

If it really wasn't intended for the rest of the community though, you could've just left it unpublished in sneak peek and shared the link instead of making it public on the site. You can still unpublish and do that, as a matter of fact.

You know, you could just link your friend to the page and not have to publish this xD
They'd still be able to see this and I wouldn't have to worry about missing a point.
Just saying.