Awesome

Not so awesome.

Hi,
I suggest you try to learn a lot more of the English language before you write another storygame.

Stunt this stunt that this game sucks 0/100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Must you make a game just for the sake of making a game? Or did you just want the 10 points? I barely read any of the 10 sentences of text that was on there (at least those that I could actually read), because I knew that all I was going to read was junk. Try playing some of the other popular games and see what people like. Or, go with something original. And yes, there is a reason some things are left "original". This is one of those ideas that are better left alone.

WHAT KIND OF STUNT WAS IT?

I had to play it again after I saw my comment! I'm very sorry for all the words I spelt wrong, but I'm using my damn IPod touch screen for this!

Look, I ise the wrod awesome a lot too, but you realy need to have an awesome story before you can call it awesome. Try adding some backstory to your characters (or any story at all)! Also, have a link on every page. If you want, add me as a co-author and I'll try and help!

Somehow I feel Mr. Awesome is another account of EricDrewCents.

Specific reasons:
1- English is 3rd language of Eric and Mr. Awesome also.
2- In the story the guy named Drew; same name as of Eric full name.
3- Horrible grammar; (Eric=Mr)

you

Awesome Does Not Approve!
Sorry, where are you from? Beause either:
1. You're from outside of here, or
2. You weren't there the week they taught English.
The story was also pretty linear, because what you had to do was never give up, obviously. Simple and dull, I'm sorry.
1/8.