Chillin' in the Park

A modern storygame by Bezro

Player Rating1.86/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 10 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty3/8

"Trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably be between PG-13 and R.

Player Comments

The time I spent correcting grammatical errors on this storygame really went to waste, it seems.

If you're retarded enough to even consider publishing this, an heroing yourself is the best thing you could possibly do for the gene pool.

— TypewriterCat on 9/9/2024 3:11:35 PM with a score of 0

Bad. Just very bad

— DBNB on 9/9/2024 8:29:58 AM with a score of 0

kill yourself

— Ford on 9/8/2024 11:10:16 PM with a score of 0

There is no description of anyone near you on the first page, but you are prompted with "Don't rob him". My brother in christ, I hear a liquid falling or something and a random staff.

— DireRyse on 9/8/2024 10:31:44 PM with a score of 0

Man I know you never wrote romance before, we've all seen the thread, but holy shit this has got to be the worst romance storygame I ever read. I know the advice might not have been helpful to your situation, but goddamn, I'm not sure the people posting in that thread were even aware this was what they were working with

— ISentinelPenguinI on 9/8/2024 10:02:36 PM with a score of 0

Slamming down on that publish button was not one of your better decisions, but thanks for the point.

— Mizal on 9/8/2024 9:54:51 PM with a score of 0

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Chillin' in the Park

Player Rating1.86/8

Story Difficulty3/8

Play Length2/8

Maturity Level6/8

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