College Romance

I noticed many grammatical errors in your book, and some dialogues which you added in weren't exactly necessary. I noticed that whenever you turned down a guy, there would be a brief paragraph about April cribbing about Eric dumping her, and that basically is the end of the game. I would change that if I were you, since that makes the game short and uninteresting as we would want another candidate to date. Like, when April was crying underneath the tree, another man could have comforted her, and then they could have fallen in love and you would have another ending. You see?

This game was somewhat amusing to me, and I liked it. Just work on your grammar, add more intricate details, and the plot wasn't really that strong nor did you develop your characters that much, so I would work on that if I were you.

I see that you put some effort in this, so well done. This certainly isn't the worst nor the best, but if you put more time and sweat into this game, it can certainly be better.

3/8.

this needs to more like beeter and longer

Literally 2 pages bro

Not many choices and just blocks of text... has potential tho

WHY DOUG WHYYYY???? WHY COULDN'T HE STAY YOUNG AND HANDSOME :(
THAT'S WHY ITS 7/8 (nice story and writing though:)

blud i made like one decision this took me less than a minute

Nice and sweet story, i think i got the happy ending!

Way too short. Ended before i fully processed the story

useless writing, boring, way too short, could be spicier

it was kinda short and you missplelled some words. i dont really like it