Don't Be Broke

Simple little game but more detail needed

too easy

Gee... I normally refrain myself from being negative, but... even though there were also positives in it...
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The writing was fine on a technical level as far as spelling and grammar and punctuation goes, it's just...nothing happens here. You get short paragraphs telling you that you ate or hung out at various places and then the game ends.

I feel like the author could be a decent writer, just please include a plot next time.

Also, don't sit there praising your own story and transparently being the only person to give it an 8. I'll never understand why people think it's a good idea to do that, but all it does is make the people the site is actually factoring in for ratings want to give you a lower one to make up for your inflated ego.

i wish i could rate this a 10/8 because i spent less than half of my weekend budget and i feel like a star.