FNAF Night 2!!!

Wait... whoa whoa whoa. I'm normally a very reasonable person, but this makes Society look bad. Really bad. Mods! Just... just please, delete this game before I gouge my eyes out, then my heart, then my very soul. Ah! It's soooo bad. I mean, I've seen bad story games, but this? Are you trying to be the biggest loser on CYS? Because you're on a sure path there!
I enjoyed the game very much. Good Job. 0.1/8

Okay, so I've noticed many spelling errors and many punctuation errors. I don't think it's necessary to have more than two exclamation marks after one word. Plus, it's WAY too short. There's barely even one sentence on each page. And there should probably be more choices. The game is also way too easy. I get that Night 2 should probably be easy, but I don't see very many ways to lose the game. Also, it's not a very serious game. I don't know if it's intended or not, but oh well.
I suggest you add more choices and more description to each page. Make it actually interesting to play. Also, try going through the game yourself and try to find errors or things you can improve. It feels to me as if this game was rushed. DON'T RUSH THE GAME. It turns out much better if you take your time on it. Sorry, but I gave this a 1/8.

Complete and utter rubbish. This is something I'd expect from an elementary school student.

Its too easy, and the whole game depends on what you think about yourself, and you spelled doubt wrong.

No...just...no...

At least there weren't too many grammar/spelling errors. But still, this isn't anything like the actual game. I mean, WTF?!

Wow.... This is even worse than the first one.....
1/8

Again...Sunpaw, I suggest you get a coauthor to help you with this. Two choices and my reading time was over. I diid not enjoy it as much. FNAF is getting old, and nobody really wants to read the storygames. If you are to make the third, coauthor, please.

I rated this a 2/8, because 1/8 would have been too harsh.

Well, at least I experienced the joy...of reviewing this game.

<You walk out of your house, you go into your car. You press the gas pedal, Nothing.>
Well, this was a fun game, I'll certainly won't replay it.


<Give Up (Are you joking?!?!?)>
I never joke!
Great game 1/8!
Nope, it just isn't fair. I'll replay for a fair rating. Unless that was a fair rating...


<The place is a long way>
No reason to do it the short way anyway. The place is far away, so we have to do it the long way!


<You wake up... in your office? You check the clock, 1:23! >
Dangit! I got too drunk again!


<You walk out of your office, and come back in at the sight of Chica, you take some kfc and throw one at Chica, you duct tape Freddys face, and give Bonnie a mustache. You'll survive, as boss as Larry in Night at the Museum!! >
Yup, I'm freakin' wasted!


<DONT MESS WITH THE PIZZA QUEEN!!! >
Don't get drunk...Don't mess with the pizza queen...
Yeah I got it now.


<theres a man in the dining area with a knife, hes stabbing children...>
Again? The ninth time this month!


<Go straight up and smack dat guy in the face.>
Dave! What did I tell you about stabbing children?!


<YOU LIVED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>
Yaaay...This game was bad.

I gave it a 2/8 because 1/8 would've been too mean...or would it?

This was full of random humour, and FNAF is old now, no need to try squeeze any more life out of the franchise. 1/8, try to make a storygame that:

1. Doesn't leech off another franchise (it's unoriginal, and is rarely any good)
2. Random ? Funny (Does not equal)
3. Is not just crowding up the site. I see so many unoriginal, half-assed storygames on this site. I really think we need moderators, because we just end up with repeats of these.

Thank you for your time.

This game sucked. What the hell is wrong with you?