Grease

class comment:

I thought it was a great read! In some aspects it reminded me about the time when I was in high school.

Perhaps an added background story could support the character's influences and intentions.

Also, when it came to deciding breakfast, I wish I had a little more information on my choices. Maybe "what are my preferences." Cause honestly fruit was my last choice haha. And fruit was needed to continue the story.

But overall, it's a great start!

The story was engaging and interesting. I felt like I had full control of the story and could picture what was going on. I think there was a good amount of information. If the story was to become more elaborated, I think adding more of an educational piece to it will help! other than that, great story

Is this a school project? I'm not sure it really belongs in the Edutainment category either. But just fyi you can unpublish this and just make sure Sneak Peek is checked in the Storygame Properties, then you can share the URL with teachers or friends without making it public on the site. Usually this is recommended for school projects since for various reasons they tend to have trouble getting high enough ratings to stay published...

I wasn't edu-ed, and I wasn't -tained. Not sure if this is in the right category.

I really like this story! I was really dragged in. I like how descriptive this story was and all the options that are provided. I like how the closet was his safe place. when I was reading this I really felt like I could really imagine the setting and everything that was happening.

class comment here,
Really love the story telling narrative! Feels very immersive :) cute concept, looking forward to what you do next.