Jump For Joy

This was honestly pretty random to say the least. I did get a good portion of the pop culture references in this game, so there's that. The story in this was rather silly and nonsensical, but I can't say that the writing in this was too bad, although there were some issues with certain typos and grammar that I came across while reading this. Some proofreading would have went a long way with possibly fixing many of the errors that I came across.

Despite some of this game's flaws, this isn't something that I would call dull or uninteresting, because there's certainly some element of adventure with the choices that are presented to the reader in this storygame. So while this isn't the best in the technical sense, it's not bad in at least being something of a interesting read at the end of the day.

So not bad, but this also has some errors that are rather hard to overlook to truly enjoy what's here in this game. I just think that this could have been a bit more fulfilling if it wasn't a storygame that relied on being so random at times.

Overall, there is some promise shown in the writing of this game, but there's also quite a bit of bad here in this game as well.

Just confusing. I had no idea what was going on half the time and the grammar and sentence structure was not that great. Also, I just did not get the plot of the game and even with the nice amount of options this game provided, it still felt lacking.

3/8

An entertaining read that honestly isn’t as bad as people are saying it is. Sure it was grammatically eschewed and had a bunch not random pop culture icons show up, but for what it was I was amused. Though to be fair I skimmed a lot of it because some of the dialogue was cringey and hard to read.

It’s always interesting to dust off an old relic or remnant of the site or some game that had a promising start but was never finished. This falls in the former category and while it had some moments of random plot that really dragged the rating down since it lacked originality, it still seems like the author had a decent writing style it just needed to be channeled at something with a more original plot idea unlike this cluster of characters.

Overall the grammatical errors were few and the story had some amusing moments, but for me it was just too much at once.

It didn’t make much sense

This story made absolutely NO sense.

"Here we go again Wilma" Fred Shoughts." Ugh.

This story is horrendously bad and should never have been conceived. The only reasons I can think to why it hasn't been righteously erased from the face of this site is because of lacking 2001 standards and the fact the author is literally one of the creators of this site.

Very random, but despite that (or more likely because of it), it's not very funny.

I have... literally no idea what I just read...

I'd give it a 5-6 if it had good spelling because of that I give it a 3

I only actually read about 2 pages all the way through because your grammar was frankly atrocious. This concept could have worked? But... even your description is almost unreadable, before one even clicks "start game." Please consider redoing this with a special focus on formatting, spelling, and grammar...