Jump For Joy

This was honestly pretty random to say the least. I did get a good portion of the pop culture references in this game, so there's that. The story in this was rather silly and nonsensical, but I can't say that the writing in this was too bad, although there were some issues with certain typos and grammar that I came across while reading this. Some proofreading would have went a long way with possibly fixing many of the errors that I came across.

Despite some of this game's flaws, this isn't something that I would call dull or uninteresting, because there's certainly some element of adventure with the choices that are presented to the reader in this storygame. So while this isn't the best in the technical sense, it's not bad in at least being something of a interesting read at the end of the day.

So not bad, but this also has some errors that are rather hard to overlook to truly enjoy what's here in this game. I just think that this could have been a bit more fulfilling if it wasn't a storygame that relied on being so random at times.

Overall, there is some promise shown in the writing of this game, but there's also quite a bit of bad here in this game as well.

Just confusing. I had no idea what was going on half the time and the grammar and sentence structure was not that great. Also, I just did not get the plot of the game and even with the nice amount of options this game provided, it still felt lacking.

3/8

In any case, it was only made to test out the comments feature, so this isn't an accurate reflection of the author's writing abilities as it was created to test a software feature out. That too, an amazing feature like the comments section, which is a huge part of what makes this site awesome, so props for that Chocobot!

I mean... On one hand this was written by Chocobot, one of the founders of the site and author of "Jurassic Fairview Park", a game I really enjoyed, but on the other hand, it's really bad.

I suppose it's funny, but you got Scooby Doo, Shaggy, Gremlins Superman, the Harlem Globetrotters in one place. Events happen for no reason, there's little to no narrative continuity, and there's no way Alyssa Milano falls in love with you just like that.

It was entertaining, but not like entertaining like watching a well-put-together stage play. More like watching a train wreck.

An entertaining read that honestly isn’t as bad as people are saying it is. Sure it was grammatically eschewed and had a bunch not random pop culture icons show up, but for what it was I was amused. Though to be fair I skimmed a lot of it because some of the dialogue was cringey and hard to read.

It’s always interesting to dust off an old relic or remnant of the site or some game that had a promising start but was never finished. This falls in the former category and while it had some moments of random plot that really dragged the rating down since it lacked originality, it still seems like the author had a decent writing style it just needed to be channeled at something with a more original plot idea unlike this cluster of characters.

Overall the grammatical errors were few and the story had some amusing moments, but for me it was just too much at once.

It didn’t make much sense

This story made absolutely NO sense.

"Here we go again Wilma" Fred Shoughts." Ugh.

This story is horrendously bad and should never have been conceived. The only reasons I can think to why it hasn't been righteously erased from the face of this site is because of lacking 2001 standards and the fact the author is literally one of the creators of this site.

Very random, but despite that (or more likely because of it), it's not very funny.

I have... literally no idea what I just read...