Player Comments on Jump For Joy

This was honestly pretty random to say the least. I did get a good portion of the pop culture references in this game, so there's that. The story in this was rather silly and nonsensical, but I can't say that the writing in this was too bad, although there were some issues with certain typos and grammar that I came across while reading this. Some proofreading would have went a long way with possibly fixing many of the errors that I came across.

Despite some of this game's flaws, this isn't something that I would call dull or uninteresting, because there's certainly some element of adventure with the choices that are presented to the reader in this storygame. So while this isn't the best in the technical sense, it's not bad in at least being something of a interesting read at the end of the day.

So not bad, but this also has some errors that are rather hard to overlook to truly enjoy what's here in this game. I just think that this could have been a bit more fulfilling if it wasn't a storygame that relied on being so random at times.

Overall, there is some promise shown in the writing of this game, but there's also quite a bit of bad here in this game as well.

Just confusing. I had no idea what was going on half the time and the grammar and sentence structure was not that great. Also, I just did not get the plot of the game and even with the nice amount of options this game provided, it still felt lacking.

3/8

An entertaining read that honestly isn’t as bad as people are saying it is. Sure it was grammatically eschewed and had a bunch not random pop culture icons show up, but for what it was I was amused. Though to be fair I skimmed a lot of it because some of the dialogue was cringey and hard to read.

It’s always interesting to dust off an old relic or remnant of the site or some game that had a promising start but was never finished. This falls in the former category and while it had some moments of random plot that really dragged the rating down since it lacked originality, it still seems like the author had a decent writing style it just needed to be channeled at something with a more original plot idea unlike this cluster of characters.

Overall the grammatical errors were few and the story had some amusing moments, but for me it was just too much at once.

It didn’t make much sense

This story made absolutely NO sense.

"Here we go again Wilma" Fred Shoughts." Ugh.

This story is horrendously bad and should never have been conceived. The only reasons I can think to why it hasn't been righteously erased from the face of this site is because of lacking 2001 standards and the fact the author is literally one of the creators of this site.

Very random, but despite that (or more likely because of it), it's not very funny.

I have... literally no idea what I just read...

I'd give it a 5-6 if it had good spelling because of that I give it a 3

I only actually read about 2 pages all the way through because your grammar was frankly atrocious. This concept could have worked? But... even your description is almost unreadable, before one even clicks "start game." Please consider redoing this with a special focus on formatting, spelling, and grammar...

What the heck? This was confusing, and there were MANY typos. This is lacked the amount of detail, and I couldn't really figure out the plot. This game is awful. Sorry for the negative reviews, but it is true. 1/8

I actually like the concept of just hanging out in a metropolis and meeting people. Depending on who you hang with/what you do it can be a normal night out or turn into something completely amazing. I can see this being done really well if you put more effort into it.

3/8, poor grammar and lolrandoms turned me off.

boring cant standit

Because chocobot made this, I don't want to give it a bad rating... but seriously, it's kind of a hunk of crap. Okay, okay! It's not that bad... but seriously, the grammar is bad enough to detract from the story and the randomness in funny at first, but ends up just not making sense. Better luck next time.

I just want to tell you that I did not Jump for Joy.

This was painful to read.

The grammar is poor and there is no background or character development or anything. This kind of like a random game.

really stupid

I dissaprove

Bo approves

Okay.

i lold, i lold hard.

cool idea, went too fast though and got kind of stupid

This is awesome, the only problem I can see are the sporadic flaws in the grammar/mechanics etc. Truly a masterpiece.

Ooooookay...

Wow, I felt like I was actually there in an episode of Scooby-Doo for a minute. . .

I freakin loved that. Just completely. Loved it.

A bit linear.. I went to get pictures developed but from there on there were no choices. Decent grammar though, I'll give you that.

Hahah! Quantum physics applied to popcorn butter! This was pretty good, despite the randomness. Another surreal title that makes me feel like I dropped acid.

nice name dropping in this game. lol however, as you said yourself, this is not your best work. so i wont critique it.

Interesting and Entertaining...

..ok..

Snoop Doggy? Cool!

dumb

Humourus. Thats the one word that describes this game. If only the characters were more defined and believable. A plot or a story might help too! 4/8 on the assasin scale.

Okay, I got my sanity back. Sorry. This game was totally hilarious, random, and absolutely awesome. Please make a sequel! I'm begging you! Jump for Joy 2: Back Into The Random World of Randomness!

Pretty fun. It wasn't that serious a game, but it was very entertaining. I liked it a lot.

Um......WHAT THE **** WAS THAT CROSSOVER CRAP???!!!!!

lol, I cant believe it but that was fun. Very fun. Just awesome. One of the best games on this site! no, THE BEST! SHOULD BE WORSHIPPED>!

:) hee hee this game is fun.

This game was so easy. Its for people who like cartoons, I hate cartoons. You got game but your game is stoopid, and not in a god way either. Theres no way the Gremlins would beat the Harlem Globe Trotters.

Fun Stuff! Another classic, george m!