Project Origin: The Unraveling (part 1)
A
fan fiction
storygame by
simplesabley
Player Rating
5.68/8
"#138
overall
, #17 for
2012
"
Based on
272 ratings
since 05/24/2021
Played 225 times (finished 14)
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
3/8
"A nice jog down the driveway"
Maturity Level
7/8
"Anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Tags
Part of Series
Serious
Bringing back this little slice of fan-fiction by Mizal's request. It's old and was written before I really understood how to do a CYOA and it's stupidly linear lol, but enjoy it anyway.
Player Comments
I'd like to give this a better rating but it's intolerably linear. Your writing is excellent (feature-worthy even!) but this isn't interactive fiction.
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 3/24/2014 7:38:03 PM with a score of 0
The suspense is thick and the plot is interesting. I've never played the game this was based on, but <i>this</i> game's pretty great. I can't say much that other comments haven't said before me, so good luck on all of your future storygames!
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Trish
on 7/30/2012 6:02:20 PM with a score of 0
Just found this with the random button and I'm surprised it's not rated higher. I don't know anything about the source material but it's not needed to enjoy this. Very good, very intense.
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darklordfactory
on 11/16/2022 10:35:44 AM with a score of 0
Decent.
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Yummyfood
on 9/13/2022 9:59:01 AM with a score of 0
Cool origin story to a game I played a while back. Very linear but still well written.
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BigRonn77
on 8/15/2016 12:34:00 PM with a score of 0
Creepy but entertaining.
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CurseOfTime
on 4/2/2016 1:14:38 PM with a score of 0
Nice
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XBaconRebellionX
on 3/20/2016 12:07:41 AM with a score of 0
excellently written. Sadly it's very linear but I still enjoyed it. :)
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pixeldip
on 10/23/2015 7:14:30 AM with a score of 0
Its perfect
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nickshetty
on 8/15/2015 11:55:01 PM with a score of 0
So freaking intense! I should have read the maturity level. Btw FANTASTIC writing!
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Warriorstar
on 7/17/2015 12:13:57 AM with a score of 0
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