Romeo's Bad Day

Not the worst thing I have ever read, but there are a few problems with it. While I have met some people who have an absolutely horrendous grasp of the English language, all of the questions you asked are simple enough that anyone capable of reading and understanding your story will have no problems choosing the correct answers. The length of the story is also disappointing. The story ends abruptly and in an odd place, after you have asked only five questions. I was expecting the questions to become more difficult as I went on, but I was disappointed to find that they were all on about the same skill level. Still, this story shows that you have a good command of the English language and I hope that you will continue to take advantage of the tools that this site has to offer.

Interesting. . . This was alright. An educational story that many new writers here must read.

Man, fuck Rosalina. Her is a bitch. :P

It. . . is to easy. I mean it was like common sense. . .

Oh well.

Eh interesting concept.

That was very good

Have to agree with James. No one above the age of three whose native language is English would ever make the errors demonstrated by the incorrect sentences.
Maybe it's intended for ESL? But in that case, the story itself (especially the explanations of incorrect choices) is far too difficult to understand.
Most likely, it's a demonstration of the author's grasp of the vocabulary used when speaking about grammar.
For an edutainment, I appreciate the explanation of incorrect answers. The storyline is cute. Unfortunately, it's not much of a story, and ends quite abruptly.

Well ... I appreciate the concept, anyway.

I'm assuming this is a resource for a non-English class.

This is a good idea and an excellent way to test possessives but you've only used the first part of a very long, very well written story. One idea might be to use the first few scenes to test possessives, the next few scenes (like the dance scene) to test adjectives or whatever and do an overall test like that? Good idea though :)