Substitute Teacher

This is a great idea, but it could use some improvements.

First of all, I'd love to see more detail! Who am I? Who is my friend Monica? What is the school I am going to like?

Second of all, I was really disappointed in the endings. When I entered the portal and saw that I had three different options for adventures, I thought 'Great, now I can go on three different types of adventures! Maybe this is going to be a good storygame.'

Alas, I found out that all three led to endings. I think you could really do something with these three adventures! I would love it if you actually had each of the three options as an actual adventure. It would make it more entertaining and solve the problem of being linear!

Too short and linear, but it was okay.

3/8

Hmm it's pretty nice. They don't all have to be super long.
Just short and sweet.

too short

You made a game with time travel in it and ended the game as soon as the time travel started? Why?

I thought this would be a very good story;
I thought, "Wow! Time travel adventures! Count me in!" but no; 2/3 of the links lead to death. Maybe you could add a little more story?
So, basically, what the featured comment said xD

that was short and boring

short

Really short. Very few choices.

Not many options