Subzero

This story was quite quirky and I liked that. The skip intro option was a bit strange. It was interesting wandering around the Alaskan wilderness dragging my brother by his ankle. I like the face I had a random religious crisis in the middle of freezing to death. I found it a bit weird that a man pointed a gun at my head and told me to calm down. I particularly liked the fact that the one person I met in Alaska happens to be a mad gun-toting cannibal, which gives me a fun new perspective on Alaskans. Overall a decent and fairly enjoyable story.

I was not expecting to be shot in the head by a cannibal in the woods of Alaska. Fairly decent writing overall. This could use more describing throughout.

6/10

There were a couple grammatical errors. I played only the main ending so far but it was pretty good.

I love this story,The amount of options is incredible and how long It got me entertained is stellar also. The only thing that lost my attention was that some pages dragged out a bit too long. and the maturity level should be placed down a level,The content Is not that brutal. Overall A great story line, with lots of options. That is what a good story needs. -_-

I only got the main ending. I can't say at this point if there is a bunch of branching or not, but I did see some stuff that I'll comment about:

1. With minimal spoilers, I had no idea the story was going to go into the direction that lead to the main end. It was a huge shock because I thought this was going to be a simple "survive in the woods" type thing. Not realistic, but interesting enough.

2. There are times where the links will lead you into a circle. Example: the explore the area/ continue to hunt. There is a way to only allow you to click the link once and it will disappear. This will allow the reader to explore and not go to the same pages a bunch.

3. Same type of issue when you're exploring the village. Theres 3 or 4 options to choose from and only one of them give you the link to continue the story. So I had to navigate through pages I've already read to continue on. It isn't a big deal, but could be adjusted with link restrictions and such.

It seems like you really knew what you were talking about, or made it seem like you knew what you were doing. I enjoyed the experience and learning about the tribes. If you have questions about how to do what I mentioned, there are articles in the "Help & Info" section of the site.