Witness

A modern storygame by Anthraxus

Player Rating?/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 9 ratings so far

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level5/8

"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"

Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

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It was just supposed to be a quick run down to the bodega. Ten minutes, tops. Then you saw something in the alley, and now everything has been turned upside down.

This is incomplete. Sorry, I just ran out time.

Entry for Sherbet's Summer's End Synergy Contest

Player Comments

This story seems to be about "couple of young black guys" starting trouble at a convenience store. I couldn't really figure out the plot based on the couple of branches I tried, and one of the variables seems to have been incorrectly used, as the word "ELSE" and two percentage signs are just sitting in the middle of one page.

I'd say the author is correct in that this story is incomplete. But it's short, so that wins it a point in this review.

— Fluxion on 11/5/2024 3:58:47 PM with a score of 0

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