You're Fired!

Very funny! Small grammatical errors aside, this was a rather fun and enjoyable game. I liked the different scenarios that were in this, they were silly, but certainly entertaining to read.

If there was just a bit more polish to the presentation, this would be even better. For example in the first page, I spotted several errors that made me do a double take at what I was reading at times. Still, there was never a dull moment with this story and many things were quite hilarious.

Honestly, I enjoyed the various scenarios I found myself in by choosing different choices. Like running from a Yeti, or dancing with animated stone figures.

I also found the pictures to fit and compliment the scenes nicely, they were a great asset in making this story feel more animated and lively, making my subsequent reads more fun in all honesty. I did notice that some of pictures didn't seem to work, but it's not a gripe that I would hold against the writer as the ones that I was able to view fit the story well.

So, excellent marks on originality for this bizarre adventure. This was certainly a storygame that I enjoyed spending my time reading. :)

I liked it. Decent amount of options made it really fun so I played over and over again. It was a bit silly at times but you made it fun and enjoyable to play. The only thing that held back this game was the spelling and the fact that it was short. I really would have liked to see this be longer with more options.

5/8

3/8
Nice concept, but poorly executed in my opinion. There could have been more choices, and I felt like things were a bit rushed.

YOURE FIRED

Wow. Cool. Awesome. Superb. Totally a wonderful masterpiece. 10/10

I was fun to play but it was over in an instant,But I do appreciate the sheer amount of options.

As others have noted, there are a few different errors in the writing that may just be typos. They take a little away from the story, but not too much. I do like the idea of the story and I really like the options that appear in the story. It might have even worked better if you listed the options in the actual choice links instead of repeating them on the first page.

As this story is clearly quite old, quite a few of the images appear to be broken. The paths were quite short, but that is a feature of the story with lots of options. I did have some fun trying all the different pathways and finding different endings. There certainly were a lot of different choices and ways to go through the story. It maybe could have had some more descriptions in some places, but overall this was a neat, wandering, sort of random quick story. Thank you for sharing it with the site.

I like the idea! Fun short story to kill time

It's a good story, there were a few grammer mistakes and it was a bit short and random. But random was to be expected XD although not my style it's good for a sliy story!

i'm going to miss phil