Dead Inside

that was interesting

wow

Given the constraints of the "Tiny 'Topia Jam," this isn't half bad. Each page provides a little nugget of information, leaving enough room to string out a narrative of sorts over multiple branches.

Reading the story, however, inspired several questions:

1) Does the current pandemic really count as a "dystopia"? I suppose it could...

2) If people are reaching the conclusion that the population needs to be culled over toilet paper, then why fret over a deadly virus in the first place?

3) Poisonous wild potatoes...?

Really good work, Max! I really enjoyed the different choices you set, the Covid reference was pretty realistic, I had fun toggling with the choices seeing what do I achieve. Overall, awesome work!

Enjoyed it. Great pace. Good writing. I liked the "visual" style.