Go Get The Mail!

Player Rating3.91/8

"#458 overall, #36 for 2014"
based on 129 ratings since 11/25/2014
played 1,554 times (finished 161)

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Humor

You have a simple task -- go and get the mail. Oh, it sounds easy, but could you ever imagine how many different things could get in your way?

This is my first attempt at a storygame. It's a very basic "Choose your path" story. Let me know what you think of it in the forums!

Player Comments

I don't know what to think...

So, we definitely have some good humor here, but in the mixture we have heavy doses of lolrandom. Lolrandom humor can be good, but using it extensively (to cover plotholes and leave gaps) is a big no-no for storywriting.

The storygame itself was rather illogical at some points, and a lot of the choices didn't make much sense. The storygame uses a type of reverse psychology, in which doing the exact opposite of what you should is the best option at some points.

The neighborhood did seem like one of a kind. A bully that doesn't mind killing you, murderous rabbits, dogs that can result in your death...

It was a good plot. I loved the idea of making such a simple task into a storygame. Not many authors can do such a thing.

The setting could have been fleshed out a bit more as well.

I liked the character development (although there wasn't a lot), but I was able to feel for these characters I suppose, in a humorous sort of way.

The grammar was nearly perfect. One quick proofreading can fix this.

3/8, pretty average.
-- MinnieKing on 5/18/2017 8:55:35 PM with a score of 0
Getting the mail has never been more difficult. This story was quite random and humorous, whenever I was making my best attempt on surviving the horrors of the neighborhood. Between the kiler rabbits, dogs, and pretty much... Well, everything else.

This game was rather fun.
-- TharaApples on 10/18/2016 11:38:25 AM with a score of 0
Hilarious, ridiculously funny, and very puzzling. It took me a long time to solve, but it was very fun!
-- ArtsyGirl38 on 1/28/2020 11:39:43 AM with a score of 0
Funny! I enjoyed the game even if the mailbox was empty
-- Axxius on 1/24/2019 2:05:22 PM with a score of 0
*Sigh* I couldn't get the darn mail.
-- CYOAmaster on 12/31/2018 4:09:12 PM with a score of 0
This wasn't all that great. It's supposed to be funny, but I just found it to be really random. And it's really linear too, but granted that isn't very important for a joke story. To someone who likes random humor, this isn't all that bad, but for me, it felt like a waste of time and frankly boring as you really dig into it. 3/8
-- Master_of_All4 on 9/29/2018 3:43:41 PM with a score of 0
Got to the point where I didn't care enough to get the mail and just killed myself by walking through the construction site to end the game. There is no motivation, there is no reason, but at least you've visibly improved in writing since 2014.
-- AzBaz on 4/29/2018 7:17:13 AM with a score of 0
Okay...

Interesting, a little funny, but also super confusing. Killer bunny? Murderous bully? Construction site of doom... Sewers? Good idea, but some of the paths don't make much sense. Like, why go in the sewers at all? Why not go all the way around the house to avoid having to take the grossest swim of your life? Though that is a lot of stuff to do, for you in the past.

Still a fun game, though.
-- BunnyCatMouse99100 on 2/2/2018 9:23:32 PM with a score of 0
I really enjoyed the humour with this one, you want to go down every path apart from the objective just to get more laughs.

After a while intentionally killing myself in funny and random ways, I then hilariously won the game in a pretty clever way, that I think was quite deeply and well hidden for this very reason. GG
-- Vinnykin on 1/23/2018 10:19:31 PM with a score of 0
This is the best mail getting adventure ever!
I just love every part of it.
-- LeoCaesar on 1/23/2018 7:57:01 PM with a score of 0
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