Inseparable

The following sums up what the core of the story is: ... warm memories of the time you had together flood your brain. You take them with you when you go.

Visiting the detailed locations in the story's setting, each location told a story of its own and you can appreciate the detail that went into crafting how each piece fit together to form the whole.

The search mechanic rewards the player by allowing them to discover even more in each location and this is a good devise to impart the little details that make such exploration worthwhile.

I do think the story would benefit by having the ability to circle back around each location, in case the player wants to revisit some of the warm and caring memories that all come together in the end.

If I had to go negative, it would be that I wanted more. More about the procedure done, more about the debt collectors and more about the special relationship between mother and son-in-law.

This might have made the story a bit larger, so I realize this suggestion may be out of the scope for its intended audience.

I can just imagine the angry puritans from the church, all gathering outside the poor men's house with torches and pitch forks, chanting, "It's Mork and Mindy, not Mirk and Mondy!"

Got to say, I was very surprised by the twist at the end. I congratulate you for giving End a run for his money in terms of edginess... Still, I found the relationship between the two men to be very sweet, and for some reason I couldn't really think badly of Mirk, even at the end. Poor little bugger. :(

Also, incredibly impressed with Mirk's stamina, since at the beginning, you have the option to just repeatedly make love to Mondy as many times as you like in a row without stopping... I guess when you love someone that much, your passion just goes on forever. (Also, very impressed with how well he was... "preserved"... Both inside and out. They must be some potent embalming oils.) ^_^

I think my favourite part what the abandoned building in the woods... By the third time I had to click on it, I was practically ripping my hair out with anticipation. I was like... "What? What's in there? What happened? This had better be fucking good!" ... And it was. I definitely didn't see that coming.

Reading through the comments has got me having second thoughts about the whole story now. I mean originally, I assumed the church and the mother turned against Mirk and Mondy's relationship because "God hates fags" and all that... But now I'm wondering what order everything happened in... I mean, after your son brings his recently embalmed lover over for Sunday dinner, even the most understanding mother is going to raise an eyebrow. :p

Any way, to sum up... Not exactly sure if it's what you intended, but this was a really sweet love story... I mean, yeah, it was incredibly fucked up, yet still, while the relationship wasn't described in a massive amount of detail, it came across very nicely just how happy the two of them were together... And I'm sure Mondy would have appreciated knowing that their love was strong enough to transcended even death itself. ^_^

WHAT. I laughed, cried and was kicking my feet all within like 10 minutes?! that- that was art.

🥀

7/8 - I really loved the sad ending which I got.

The writing was relatively simple in this story, the chapters were short, but everything which was said was efficent, i feel like mizal put her soul into this one. It like like this story was personal to her, like she can identify with some of the themes within the story, the writing wasnt complex, but i could just feel mizals energy and seemingly state of mind which she wanted us to feel while writing this, and maybe the one she was in while writing it, ooze through the screen and into me, which is what writing is all about, and she accomplished that perfectly here, grammar, writing style doesn't matter, if you can accomplish that, affect the guest emotionally, you've perfected your art.

This story wasn't really a choices matters story, despite whatever you pick to happen, they all end the same, with you with mondy. Oddly enough, i wont take any points off this story for that, as it feels like it shouldn't or couldn't have been any other way. This is my favourite story by mizal so far. The themes presented in it, of social rejection, the poem which represents perfectly peoples fears of going home, not feeling like its home anymore, so so beautiful.

overall, it was a short story, but i think that ended up being in its favour, it wasnt dragged out, it wasnt anything but it was meant to be, a story about two guys in love, loving each other to the end. Overall i gave it a 7/8

Mizal made me feel things from this story, it affected me emotionally, and for that it gets a 7/8. Best romance story ive read!

I think I read this on Wattpad one time.

amazing

Does it only have 4 endings?

not a good book