Out Alive

Player Rating4.00/8

"#436 overall, #44 for 2013"
based on 79 ratings since 10/08/2013
played 1,007 times (finished 88)

Story Difficulty6/8

"wandering through the desert"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Tags

Horror

This story is a thriller that will keep you wondering about what's around every corner. Each step brings a new level to the story. It is sure to keep you on edge the whole time. The story might get graphic in some parts but as long as your not a wimp you'll be fine.

Player Comments

This is one of the most cliche horror stories I have ever read. The plot was okay, it wasn’t really subversive at all. If you were to build up the suspense, instead of hearing the moan about three pages in, then it would be slightly better. It really wasn’t too immersive for me. The length made it not as good as it could have been.
The pictures you had made no sense, not even the first one where he is going to live in a house so derelict a sneeze would blow it over. Then you show pictures that make it look like the inside of a mine, not an actual house.
The grammar was okay, but you had a lot of mistakes that only a fifth or sixth grader would make. You didn’t use a lot of commas, which represent pauses when reading, so it could make it seem like there is at least a little bit of length.
Overall, a 3/8 (but it has potential).
-- The_Broken_God on 5/22/2019 1:40:36 PM with a score of 0
This story was certainly quite spooky, you did well in creating such a ominous and oppressive atmosphere for the reader as they try their best to brave the horrors that are in this, hoping for survival.

The entire time that I played this, I couldn't help but be reminded of some classic horror stories, especially the cyoa stories that I had played when I was much younger, with the many ways that I found myself meeting my own demise.

All in all, this was a solid horror game amongst the others that are in the horror section. I only have one minor complaint with the minor issues in grammar that I came across, but it didn't ruin my experience with this game by any means.
-- TharaApples on 10/10/2016 2:23:09 AM with a score of 0
OK story.

Good:
1. Pictures
2. Mood
3. Creative plot

Bad:
1. Shortness
2. Spelling
3. Inconsistent perspective (you, my)

Ugly:
1. Lack of paragraphs
2. Run-on sentences
-- urnam0 on 10/8/2013 10:51:04 PM with a score of 0
The story is not bad, it has good atmosphere. But the pacing is weird and fast. Each scene is too small to build more robustly the error. The terror begins just after first choice, it will have been far better build that slowly and have more choices that bring a game less railroad.
-- poison_mara on 2/8/2020 3:36:57 PM with a score of 0
There is no way to "win." Just a feeling of why did I play this if it only ends this way!?? I was disappointed. You have great potential, but I think you have relied too much on old cliches.
-- LuvLee on 7/16/2018 7:51:43 PM with a score of 0
In my opinion, this story jumps too immediately into the "horror" aspect to be engaging or scary. Additionally, all choices ultimately lead to the same outcome. It doesn't feel like there's much "choice" involved.
-- Jester on 3/27/2018 10:22:35 PM with a score of 0
I wish there would have been a better ending
-- Iquarius on 7/8/2017 9:15:46 PM with a score of 0
man what is with my character dying because I refused to toy with the Ouija board? In real life my family experimented with one, and me and my brother burned it after odd things began happening. After we torched it, the odd occurences persisted, and I still get demonic activity 27 years later. No joke.
-- crusader on 6/3/2016 1:30:36 PM with a score of 0
A decent horror game.
-- betaband on 5/28/2015 12:55:29 PM with a score of 0
typical horror story with little to no plot line, and uninteresting endings. it was bit fun but i got bored dying over and over. still not the worst writing I've ever encountered. 4/8
-- mokaevans on 11/8/2014 1:41:22 AM with a score of 0
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