The Castle Escape

The game mechanics are alright and work smoothly without bugs, even if it is a little easy. It was, for the most part, well written. But the story, or lack of it, left me feeling meh. It might also have been nice if there were endings where you leave the castle but with a different outcome where you gain something or something unusual happens.

A waste of time for all parties involved

It was good writing, but ended a bit short. If you had tried to extend this story a bit more, or flesh it out, it could have been an amazing story.

Well, as far as stories go, this isn't the worst thing I've read while I've been here, so there's at least that going for you.

As for the rest, it's pretty boring, there's nothing to catch my interest that much and to add to it, it's pretty short, both in number of pages and of the pages themselves.

As far as first stories go though, this was ok, so good job with that.

The game is great. It made me think about more than just reading it.

Seriously, I searched the dresser and found a dagger and get to keep it while I escaped. Doesn't that count as 'something?' ;)

It's the experience that counts in the end! >:D Lol, well this was interesting so good job, I suppose. ^^

congratulations! i won nothing! ok...

I WON NOTHING! YAAAAAYYYYY! Seriously though the pictures were hilarious.

It's well written but a bit short.