try #2

A fan fiction storygame by computersuresrex

Player Rating1.22/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 27 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length1/8

"Make sure not to blink"

Maturity Level1/8

"Appropriate for all ages"

Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Player Comments

Please tell me this is a troll game.

— whoyougonnacall on 5/1/2016 5:17:21 PM with a score of 0

What the heck was this?

— Creature on 4/15/2015 12:41:24 PM with a score of 0

Um, okay... another free point for me I suppose...

— FazzTheMan on 9/25/2014 11:22:12 AM with a score of 0

Oh, yes, the die option may be horribly stupid and pointless and also insulting, but it is by far the best option to choose if you play this game and don't want your eyes burned out.

— Death on 9/22/2014 2:01:40 AM with a score of 0

Trust me, Briar. You saved yourself a world of agony, by just hitting die.

— Malkalack on 9/21/2014 6:22:57 PM with a score of 0

Im sorry but including a "die" option is just about the dumbest thing anyone can think of doing.

— HugsGoodbye on 9/21/2014 4:05:40 PM with a score of 0

... Yeah, I just picked "die" at the beginning. Saves a lot of time. ^_^

— Briar_Rose on 9/21/2014 3:46:10 AM with a score of 0

This was just... horrible. What is wrong with this? Everything. What is wrong with you? Everything. Seriously, take this down. Horrible grammar, horrible story, horrible ideas. I am sick of people like you, writing crap stories like this. If you are going to write a story, write a good one!

Firstly, your grammar and punctuation is horrific. I didn't see a single comma, and there were only full stops at the end of a paragraph. You is spelt you, by the way. To me, it looks like you wrote this in your sleep. While having a nightmare.

Secondly, the plot line is just nothing. Same old Cat clan game, same old horrible plotline. I would be surprised if I saw a good one of these games.

I have no more time, so this game is just horrible. Please take it down. ASAP. 1/8.

— Death on 9/16/2014 11:10:31 PM with a score of 0

I don't even know what to do at this point...except for this:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

NO NO NO! KILL IT WITH FIRE!! DIE UNHOLY BANE!

Excuse me for my rudeness.

try #2

Player Rating1.22/8

Story Difficulty4/8

Play Length1/8

Maturity Level1/8

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