A Confused Criminal!

Player Rating3.64/8

"#378 overall, #42 for 2011"
based on 170 ratings since 09/26/2011
played 3,721 times (finished 196)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length4/8

"A well spent lunch break"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

Tags

This is a serious game with a twist if you pick the right ending! You'll be the criminal and will have to think like a criminal! Make sure you do not get caught!

Player Comments

Okay, so...aside from the fact that you never find out why the police are after you (they just are), almost every path leads to a bad end. Or if it doesn't lead there, it leads to a junction where EVERY path is bad. It doesn't matter whether you fight the security guard or not. Every path in the corresponding 6 links is bad.

The character's behaviour seemed a bit out of place as well. You've just managed to escape the rock concert, you immediately tell a stranger that the police are after you? Why would you do that? And it turns out that the stranger wants you to rob a bank for him? You just told him that the police are after you and he asks you to commit a real crime? It just doesn't make any sense.

There's a lot of decisions but most of them are on the same linear path. That's my biggest gripe, really. They pretended to lead somewhere, and they just ended up with you being captured. That definitely needs improvement.
-- Saika on 8/9/2017 5:08:44 AM
'Your standing in the middle of a rock concert. Your getting pushed and shoved into people.' Errors in the first two sentences, a huge red flag and indicator that a story received no proofreading whatsoever.

And if you're running from the police, why do you have to sit there and think a few minutes to remember that? Did the character have some head injury you forgot to mention?

Rough start aside, this wasn't terrible or anything and the writing is pretty decent (though I'd appreciate it if there weren't quite so many sentences starting with 'You'...) I feel like a reasonable amount of effort was put in, and all the pictures were a nice touch.

A few more details about the character, their thoughts, anything would have gone a long way to flesh this out though. In the paths I saw at least, the entire plot was just one long chase jumping from one escape to another without any explanation.

And then 50 police officers jumped out of no where and all pointed guns at me. Okay. I'd have appreciated the story at least continuing to the actual arrest so I'd know what the character is supposed to have done...
-- mizal on 10/23/2016 12:46:44 PM
The story had great visuals, and that's about it. The plot had no sense of urgency. It was just one moment you're being chased by police, and in the next you're deciding to do other random and pointless things. It's disappointing too, because the character that you come across could've really been developed further if you took the time to write more. This story felt underdeveloped and while better than other stories on the site, it really needs improvement.
-- AppDude27 on 4/16/2014 1:00:21 AM
Great Game!
-- CollinFrantz on 9/10/2017 5:41:42 PM
I finally won on my 300th try. Continuously leads to routes where all choices are wrong. And policemen are available at every corner. 3/8
-- JohnPaul on 8/26/2017 7:38:53 AM
This game is terrible I can't win no matter what don't waste your time on this game i recommend zombie survival
-- Justin on 3/22/2017 11:17:33 AM
This was a good read. You can see you put effort into this and the pictures added to the story. However, there were quite a few errors in the writing, and some of the choices result in exactly the same end game page no matter what - I must have been arrested by 50 policemen three times before I finally escaped.
This was a decent attempt, especially for your first game. Next time just make sure to proofread everything before you publish which will hopefully iron out those small errors, as well as adding more depth to the story and its characters. For example, we never found out why we were on the run.
-- tjwilliams555 on 2/27/2017 4:45:57 AM
Awesome thanks
-- AlexTERRARIAN on 10/25/2016 3:45:06 PM
interesting game. i enjoyed that.
-- annaisawesome on 7/18/2016 12:49:35 PM
I was wondering how the police could find me so fast?
-- crusader on 6/27/2016 5:03:36 PM
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