Player Comments on Bacon Wars
Well, it is something that this was finished in such a short time, but I’m not impressed with the uses of the English language on the first page with all the swears. Sure, I guess that’s the way you talk and all, but usually that’s just not needed in the written word. Perhaps you can find some other ways to present that information without all the additional swears. For example, swears can work as part of dialogue when you have a character who uses it all the time. That makes sense. But when it is part of the title and directed at the reader, that’s not nearly as effective.
Beyond that, well, at least there are choices in this story. There are indeed options that lead the reader off in different directions and the choices do appear to have a clear effect on the story. Beyond that, well, there’s just not all that much to this story. Most of the story seems to be focused on trying to kill police rather than actually trying to get some bacon. So sure, this was written in 76 minutes, but perhaps it would have been quite a bit better if some more time was spent on it.
on 8/4/2018 10:37:33 PM with a score of 0
Literal Peice Of Complete Fucking Shit
-- Thanos on 7/10/2019 10:20:21 PM with a score of 0
nice way to pass time without getting overly obssessed and wasting 12 hours!
on 6/2/2019 12:23:16 PM with a score of 0
It's very good. It's funny, I can tell the Author has a great sense of humor. Being very short, it kept me clicking through the whole thing. Sometimes I just click through a bad story game to tell the Author to proofread it, but this had very few mistakes.
However, I feel like the maturity level may be low? Just by one. It's not that big a deal, though.
Also, you think you could lend me some bacon? I want it now....
on 5/4/2019 9:43:23 AM with a score of 0
This made no sense whatsoever, but it was kind of entertaining for being a "joke" game. It did make me crave bacon though....
on 1/16/2019 6:46:12 PM with a score of 0
-- Anonomus on 6/17/2018 1:38:11 AM with a score of 0
Oh shit son, I killed Morgan the Owl. And then I killed some other people and run away, and I don't even know what became of my goddamn bacon.
on 9/28/2017 4:57:07 AM with a score of 0
Lol. Never knew bacon can be so magical.
on 6/24/2017 12:13:49 AM with a score of 0
holy shit.phsycortic answer
-- sly on 5/1/2017 4:07:55 PM with a score of 0
And that's the true ending...
on 8/6/2016 9:39:40 AM with a score of 0
Stupid owl xD
on 7/17/2016 10:21:16 AM with a score of 0
That gave me a little to much humor for a days
on 3/29/2016 7:27:58 PM with a score of 0
Laughed my ass off to this. Thank you.
on 11/13/2015 2:31:05 PM with a score of 0
I just killed everything I could kill. Hehhehheh.
on 11/13/2015 12:31:02 PM with a score of 0
This was way fun.
on 11/6/2015 11:44:03 AM with a score of 0
well.....I burned to death and wrecked a car lol
on 10/12/2015 7:46:07 PM with a score of 0
This. This. This was gold. This was pure gold. Bravo. 7/8
on 8/24/2015 8:14:53 PM with a score of 0
This game made my day. Brilliantly shocking and mischievously funny. 8/8 would r3pl@y m8.
on 7/3/2015 8:53:16 PM with a score of 0
this is my humor
on 6/26/2015 5:20:36 PM with a score of 0
That was much better then I thought it would be
on 6/10/2015 2:45:22 PM with a score of 0
That was actually better then I thought it would be.
on 2/7/2015 8:32:08 AM with a score of 0
This isn't great. You say you made it quick and it shows.
-- Jordi P on 2/3/2015 12:59:19 PM with a score of 0
This story makes me love bacon more than I already do.
on 12/28/2014 5:50:16 AM with a score of 0
I thought this was hilarious... it made no sence and was completely random/creative. What really made it a kick was no matter the choice, the result was never something you'd expect. I enjoyed it c:. Even though i ended up in jail and being butt raped for the rest of my days. (apparently the burnt bacon made it hard to keep a firm grip on my sanity... and the soap xD)
-- Britany on 11/29/2014 9:25:05 PM with a score of 0
And remember kids: knowing is growing.
Kudos for an understood reference.
on 10/10/2014 11:05:41 PM with a score of 0
on 9/14/2014 4:29:51 PM with a score of 0
on 9/10/2014 11:12:57 PM with a score of 0
I'm impressed that you managed to make an entertaining read like this in 90 minutes. It's pretty abrupt and could do with some more detail in places, but it's got a coherent story and writing. Pretty funny, too. I liked the appearances of site members which were somewhat accurately portrayed.
on 9/9/2014 5:51:14 AM with a score of 0
I am enlightened... apparently I also taste of bacon?
on 9/1/2014 8:54:50 PM with a score of 0
Interesting. Cool incorporation of the other users. LOL
on 8/31/2014 6:19:37 PM with a score of 0
Nice, short and funny
-- Terrablade on 8/31/2014 7:37:36 AM with a score of 0
This was pretty funny, I never thought that one day I would be called a perv for making Briar cry, killing Killer, Killing a demon Jew and a transgender Owl. It has truly enlightened me.
on 8/31/2014 4:49:06 AM with a score of 0
Why was I not in a game about Bacon? I am disappoint
on 8/30/2014 2:05:03 PM with a score of 0
An interesting story. Nice writing style, but I would enjoy something a little bit less random. 4/8
on 8/30/2014 1:54:33 AM with a score of 0
*sniff* This was amazing. Thank you. :')
on 8/29/2014 8:24:55 PM with a score of 0
Well I liked it.
on 8/29/2014 10:24:03 AM with a score of 0
Well, I see no one has said it yet, soooo...
Bacon is love. Bacon is life.
on 8/29/2014 9:55:42 AM with a score of 0
I killed Aman and Morgan. I feel like such a horrible human being. Capybara. Such a horrible Capybara being.
on 8/29/2014 9:49:52 AM with a score of 0
Kinda like Madglee's "A Day In Hell" only with bacon. Lots of it.
on 8/29/2014 9:23:40 AM with a score of 0
... It's so beautiful! ^_^
on 8/29/2014 9:21:27 AM with a score of 0
Oh my god. This game was brilliant. Playa, you are a god among men.
on 8/29/2014 9:18:49 AM with a score of 0