Frameshift

a Modern Adventure by AzBaz

Commended by BerkaZerka on 9/24/2017 5:43:28 PM

Player Rating6.23/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 24 ratings since 07/05/2019
played 115 times (finished 6)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

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When all that's desired is to do good in a cruel World with so little power, what measures might be taken to create change? Afflicted by something more than just psychosis, one rogue hero seeks a path of getting that power to help people in need. Henle's getting rougher by the day and it's starting to look like Bast isn't the only problem on the streets. In the end, it all comes down to Frameshift.

Parts of this tie into my main project, though they're only minor things that are neither particularly easy to find nor important to the plot. In context of the main story, however, anything you might feel is left unexplained can be understood from the information coming to a CYS near you sometime in the sort-of-near future.

Thanks to all of those who patiently helped me as I stumbled around the merciless world of scripting, especially BradinDvorak.
NOTE FOR READERS: Any number works to unlock the passcode at the start; I originally added this to prevent people accessing the story while editing and kept it because it ties into other stories I'm working on.


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Player Comments

NOTE FOR READERS: Forgot to put this in the description but any number works to unlock the passcode at the start; I originally added this to prevent people accessing the story while editing and kept it because it ties into other stories I'm working on.

Enjoy!
-- AzBaz on 7/15/2019 11:19:46 AM with a score of 14043
It's well written, though most choices seemed to lead to the same ending, and once it did give me a different ending most of the page was a massive error message.
-- Killa_Robot on 9/23/2017 6:18:09 PM with a score of 0
Nice story, but is it only me or that there was really only one ending?. Overall it interesting to read and great characters.
-- futurehero97 on 9/23/2017 9:05:44 AM with a score of 0
Holy shit is this story good. It's long, intriguing, and well written. The voice in the head is a nice touch, and the fake ending was very intuitive. 7/8, for sure.

Although, I felt like there wasn't that many choices, and if the time restraints weren't set on the story this would have been tremendously better. Still, a great addition to the site. I'd vote this to win the contest.
-- RoyalGhost_007 on 9/21/2017 12:09:12 PM with a score of 0
This was one of the best of the newer stories I've read in a while. The way the characters develop and the ending was bitter sweet. All in all a good story.

-- corgi213 on 9/20/2017 11:01:59 AM with a score of 0
Great story, I especially loved that fake ending. You have a pretty good shot at winning, except that I haven't looked at the other entries yet. :P
-- TheSpectricRat on 9/18/2017 6:53:01 PM with a score of 0
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