They murk in the darknes...

Player Rating3.07/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 71 ratings since 11/13/2012
played 822 times (finished 81)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level6/8

"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably between PG-13 and R.

A horror CSY adventure I made.Please take notice that there are 3 endings medium difficulty to get,and 1 special ending,which is the hardest to obtain.I suggest you first play as what you would do in real life,only after you finish it once,proceed to finding the other endings.

Player Comments

I can't even begin to list the errors in this storygame. I'm a bit worried. You do know that you're supposed to out a space after a period and sentence stoppers, right?

The spelling and grammar errors seriously made me rate this lower then I would have, because even the TITLE is spelled wrong.

However, the writing was actually really good. If you'd fixed the grammar and spelling and added more detail and character development, I would have given it a five, maybe higher.

I loved the endings and finding all of them, but it was very easy in this short storygame. If this didn't have quite a decent amount of writing on each page, I would have put it under very, very short.

It was quite illogical at many points in the storygame and some events and choices didn't make much sense, and sometimes the actions didn't relate to the choices all that much.

-- MinnieKing on 3/21/2017 9:31:02 PM
Really big grammar, spelling, and punctual errors were frequent throughout the story making it very irritating to read through. The big one was the lack of spaces after a period. Editing and/or proof reading would boost my rating up. But will probably not happen since this was made such a long time ago. 3/8.
-- SonicTurboTurtle on 3/27/2016 4:53:20 AM
So I decided to read the whole thing and the story was understandable, though you really should put spaces between words as well as commas and other punctuation marks. The story wasn't bad but I think one thing that could be a draw back for people who only play it once is that the path where you choose to kill the guy goes on a lot longer than any of the paths where you choose not to kill him, which would make the game really short for a whole bunch of people, since loads of people would choose not to kill the bully.
-- Briar_Rose on 12/4/2012 4:52:15 AM
Good plot and storyline; however, there are numerous typos, grammatical errors, etc. I mean, just look at the title. I would have rated it higher if not for all the errors, but if you fix everything, then you've got a good storygame.
-- AstralEmbers17 on 4/24/2018 10:03:40 AM
Just realized this was the author of the Aether Frost story, which I liked quite a bit more. He's really improved in the years since writing this one. (tbf even this one might have been somewhat salvageable, if it had been proofread and edited. The basic idea is fine.)
-- mizal on 3/22/2017 12:13:37 AM
My God this was bad. Even the title is misspelled.

So glad this site eventually started having standards. 3.25? This would be an immediate one and done situation if posted today.
-- mizal on 3/22/2017 12:08:54 AM
I liked the story
-- GigaKnight on 10/4/2016 1:40:04 PM
Very good ending for me, since I was acting like I normally would(Except for the pocket knife thing)
-- GigaKnight on 10/4/2016 1:31:39 PM
Ditto on what Psycho kitty said.
-- Jimmysutton on 4/6/2016 12:04:41 PM
So 'Murk' is a verb too... Huh...
-- ISentinelPenguinI on 5/14/2015 10:12:30 PM
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