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Yes, You are right, we are both Poles. Thanks for listening and feedback.

This is dark fantasy/horror story, stylized as an ancient oral legend, which tells the story of a simple man's journey and gradual descent into darkness - and ascension to power. We tried to give our villain protagonist some psychological and philosophical deep, not just "HAHAHA I am evil and will rule the world!". Here is the audio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KCdlph835qc If You prefer to read: https://adeptusrpg.wordpress.com/2022/12/14/tale-of-the-necromancer/ I am an author of the text, other guy read it and recorded. We are very interested in Your feedback and discussion.

Thanks, I will take a look at Your stories.

I am from Poland, so my experience with school assigned books are very different than American one. Altough I can tell that I was reading all of them nicely, until I had to read Goethe's "Sorrows of young Werter". Hated every page of it and was not able to finish it. From this point I read only those compulsory books which I was interested in, in other case I was reading only summaries.

I think that Lewis storytelling is limited by his intention to make stories as much "Christian" as possible. Which means that heroes are so often powerless on themselves, there must be focus on how Aslan is only one who can solve anything.

Interesting study of obsessions people can get. I myself very often feel compulsion to tear small "protruding": objects, so it was relatable.

I am not sure if I consider it good or bad, but I am sure it is inevitable, especially in long perspective.

"And now you got one responsive post on here at least, which is already one more than you got at IF Hub" Heh, thanks ;) "No feedback on the actual game since I haven't played it, but glad to see more people going full tilt on the dark overlord protagonist concept" Didi You make such game too? Can You give a link, I would want to play it (if You are not afraid of stealing Your idead of course).

"Dominion of Darkness” is a strategy/RPG text game in which the player takes on the role of a Sauron-style Lord of Darkness with the goal of conquering the world. He will carry out his plans by making various decisions. He will build his army and send it into battles, weave intrigues and deceptions, create secret spy networks and sectarian cults, recruit agents and commanders, corrupt representatives of Free Peoples and sow discord among them, collect magical artifacts and perform sinister plots.Note – one game takes about 1 hour, but the premise is that the game can be approached several times, each time making different decisions, getting different results and discovering something new. Feedback is very much welcome. Very, very much. Altough game is playable and winnable now, I am still working on improving it, so all suggestions are appreciated. Here is the game: https://adeptus7.itch.io/dominion And here are reviews: - Indie Sampler (video): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LM6f4UCEgWU - Dad's Game Review (podcast): https://www.dadsgamereview.com/blog/ - [BOKC] BlancoKix (video): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lgNpSKToOSg