SpitefullyInnocuous, The Reader
Hey there! My name is SpitefullyInnocuous, you can call me faggot, noob, pleb, cunt, or anything else that suits you. It'll happen anyway. I'm currently attempting to write my very first story game, so I won't be reading/rating much, though I'll try to help some of the newer ones get the ratings they need to be ranked. My favorite genres are SciFi and realistic fiction, though I by no means dislike the others. Feel free to message me, if for whatever reason you get the urge. I can be a pretty decent person sometimes. Yes, I've been on here before, but that was a year ago and things were different. Now I'm looking forward to being a contributing member. That's sort of becoming my motto at this point. I like to think I have a good sense of humor and can take a joke, which is a skill I lacked on my last venture into this site. Thanks for reading y'all.
Years have passed since the Retopia General came to restore peace and order to a damaged world. The start was rocky, to say the least, but now Earth is a utopian world with enough resources for everyone... however, as is the case with all science fiction stories, this "perfection" comes at a cost.
Recent PostsDead Woman’s Child: a prologue for maybe a story on 4/21/2022 8:12:21 AM
Thanks for your help. I'll definitely use it when I rewrite it for the story.
Dead Woman’s Child: a prologue for maybe a story on 4/20/2022 10:06:33 PM
Here, I'll try to explain what's happening so you can help me get that point across, even though it IS supposed to be a "what's going on here" moment that you figure out as you read. Actually, it's modeled after one of my favorite books. After a scene in "Matched" by Ally Condie.
The Retopia General is a potential oligarchy attempting to overtake the world after it has descended into virtually The Purge. All that's left of humankind is gathered before them to protest, hence the woman and her child. They are prone to violent outbreaks because of being raised in a lawless and anything-goes environment. Fighting breaks out because of their heightened emotions and predescribed violent tendencies.
Eventually, the riot gets out of hand, with one of the mob brandishing a gun. They pull the trigger randomly, perhaps even accidentally, and it hits the mother of the child.
Though I think the idea of it being from her perspective is intriguing.
Dead Woman’s Child: a prologue for maybe a story on 4/20/2022 11:36:31 AM
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Dead Woman’s Child: a prologue for maybe a story on 4/19/2022 9:40:12 AM