oh cool another bot story
Decent. Mayana is of the few that I believe that I'd be able to overcome in a fight.
That last line of dialogue was gold lol
As was the last little paragraph
I like it
I always wondered why no one ever shoots the other person mid sentence in stand offs
Ah, yes, very intriguing and good. Is this setting something up? And no, I'm not just saying that because it's Thara-centric.
Wow. that was all well paid off. I feel so flattered by Ford's surprisingly descriptive writing and world-building.
Now if only I had a head maid for reals. That would certainly make both life and my time on CYS easier, time-management wise.
Well Ford finally managed to get my attention with his fanfic.