Hi i'm kinda new and do you think that a game where you send troops bombs and stuff to other countries to take over the world a good game?
Matters how well you write ^_^
What Tans said. You can make a lot of things into a story, but whether or not it will be good is less about the concept and more about the execution.
If you have good grammar and have a really good storyline, that could be a good game. It has good potential.