@Sentinel- so much for spoilers XD
But I did note the run-on sentences in the book, that annoyed me a little (Admittedly) haha.
Just disliked it since the author created male characters who we're either... Wannabe macho men? (But really weren't?) and poetry liking hippies.
And the female characters were just utterly undesirable, detestable and bitchy. Which I don't think was what the author tried to do, but was still annoying.