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Sorry for posting but does any one want to duel

Nobody believes you have "Learned", Harper.

Oh come on please

I'm going to let the Discord vote on this.

Ok I won’t post anything weird or that I just want to have fun and be in the community here

Proof?

Just trust me I won’t

I don't wanna

Please I won’t do anything wrong

Proof NOW

How would I give proof I won’t do anything wrong

GIVE US PROOF 

How would I give proof

What are 12 examples of normal things you would post

Things that are going in what I have been up to thanking staff chatting about story’s how I’ve been

That is a nonsense sentence

 

You are insane

Sorry

Since you mentioned chatting about stories, what's your favourite storygame on the site and why?

Smart, he's got to stay quiet now at least as long as it takes him to actually read one. Could take years.

Back I went to see the open house for [fucking doxxes himself] high school

Hey Harper,
If you want to get back in the good graces of the site, and join the community, why not write a review of a storygame? A little sincerity goes a long way.

Read a storygame, write down what you liked about it and what you didn't, and then leave a comment.

That way, we know you're here to actually be a part of the community, and not just to troll.

Thanks I will do that

Cool! Once you finish Terror of the sea, check this one out:

https://chooseyourstory.com/story/polaris

That a hard one their is a lot of story’s here so I can’t pick any one

This is a good one:

https://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-terror-of-the-sea

Thanks Î read them both

I think I found my favorite The Price of Freedom: Innocence Lost it has a lot of choices and options it is fun for me

Good job! Now, we're going to work on creating a detailed review. You'll get points and maybe even a shiny commendation!

First, let's talk about choices and the plot. You mentioned there being lots of choices. What was your favourite choice? Why was this choice so meaningful to the story? Were all of the choices important to the story? Or what was a choice you might have changed or added?

As for the storyline, what ending did you get? Did this tie up the story well for the main character? What were some things about the story's world that you enjoyed?

I think the pepole and the lore being shown over time the choices length all where really great

That's a start. Could you expand on your answers? Name a specific person you found interesting in the story. What particular part of lore did you like? Can you remember one choice that you found to be great?

The person Alexis the lore where it real,s you are slaves you can lie and fighting back and helping

Now, let's work on using punctuation and proper sentences. Write a paragraph about the story (at least ten sentences) and I shall award you five points! But you have to provide details and specifics about the story.

What specific character traits does Alexis have? Why do you like her as a character because of this? Tell the reader more about being a slave and the choices you make. What effect does lying have? What about fighting back and helping?

Alexis has the bravery to help us . So we help them the overall lore of us helping and of us being doomed. Is really fun the choices and replaying that is possible from this. And the strength and ways of back ground is great the whole game should be the top

Could we make it 5 and I wish for a commdeatiojn

Final offer: you write five paragraphs (each with five sentences) as a review of the storygame. Make sure every word is spelt correctly. Expand on what you have written here by asking yourself questions: why do I like this specific thing?

You have mentioned Alexis' bravery. Think of another character and what role they played in the story. Think of a third character, I'm sure this story has a few of them. And you mentioned replaying the storygame: what different endings did you get? Which one do you like the most? After replaying, do you like the story more? 

Here are two articles to help you: link 1 and link 2.

Do all this and I'll commend your post, as long as it is genuinely good. No loophole exploiting (e.g. repeating sentences) will work. Remember, a commendation is worth 1,000 points!

     ...commendation? Also to get one it needs to be really good. Unless it's favoritism or something else, but I doubt you're getting that considering how the mods think of you. Actually, it's probably going to be harder for you. Probably not sure.

Also the ones where you earn things and it effects your overall it is super funny and cool I love the game the person should get their own thropy