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Questions about a storygame? Thoughts on Eternal? Any other IF you're playing out there?

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one month ago

I wrote my first ten reviews :o) How is it going for you?

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one month ago

Who are you asking?

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one month ago
Whoever wants to share their progress. It's not too busy today, so thought we could share some updates.

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one month ago

     Oh ok. I've rated all the stories already (I had most of them rated before the contest started lol), and I have a few reviews although I rated some of these when my account was even younger, so they suck and are a paragraph long so I'll have to get new ones for those.

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one month ago

I don't think I have any, I've been stuck on the Tower of Riddles for a while lol

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one month ago

     You don't have to read the entire thing, if you're stumped on the puzzles you can rate it (I'm sure you can already tell it's great!), start on this contest, and when you're done here you can go back to trying to do the puzzles. Or maybe puzzle whenever you're not reading.

EDIT: Oh wait you did rate tower of riddles- so you're probably just trying to solve it then?

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one month ago

No I've finished it, I have been stuck on it in the past though. I'm gonna go ahead with As Ink, lol

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one month ago

     Oh ok. I was stuck on the last page a while too lol, I misinterpreted the clue and so looked in the wrong place.

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one month ago

Same thing I did XD

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one month ago

How would you know you misinterpreted it unless you figured it out?

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one month ago

I did figure it out, I've been stuck on it earlier though. I finished it already XD

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one month ago

     Oh, ok. From the clue, I thought they changed the color of a link to default and removed the underline so I was wasting time tracing my mouse across ALL THE TEXT IN THE STORY trying to find a link. ... ;(

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one month ago

LMAO

Couldn't be me, honestly. /j

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one month ago

It's one of the bad parts of being a tryhard...

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one month ago

*pat pat*

Tryhard is good. 

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one month ago

Nevermind that that was cringe. ><

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one month ago
I finally did a count and turns out I only reviewed 10% of the games listed before this, which is somewhat surprising and means I still got 90 to go if I want to get them all done. At almost 8 a month it doesn't feel like much given they're mostly on the shorter side, but I have other plans for next year that might eat into what time I will have.

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one month ago
Doing all of them is a hell of an impressive goal. Given your work with the Review Bored, however, I'm sure you can do it.

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one month ago
I'm not actively aiming to do them all, but I expect to inevitably do a few and then see since I will be continuing my reviews in 2026 anyway, but under a different schedule.

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one month ago
Going pretty good. I'm at 5, not counting all the other stories I've read before the contest started.

How are you doing Fab? How was your sabbatical? Hope everything's going well with you!

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one month ago

Rating or reviewing 5? Or both? Just wondering.

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one month ago
Rating and reviewing, so I'm sure it'll take a bit of time. But that's ok!

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one month ago

      Well if you do 5 in the amount of time since the contest began, and do at least 5 within that amount of time over and over, even if you didn't have ones already rated and reviewed I think you'd finish in time.

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one month ago
Thanks for the encouragement Avo! How is your progress?

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one month ago

Eh, I've rated all the stories but I'm pretty dead on reviewing.

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one month ago
Nicely done! Any standouts from the list that made you go, "Damn, that's a really great game"?

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one month ago

I think probably As Ink, although it's hard to remember them all.

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one month ago
Well you're reading through them pretty quickly to be fair. Looks like you read Shadow of a God King in about 30 seconds and are averaging 3-5 minutes on some of the others.

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29 days ago

LOL over 130,000 words in 30 seconds. That would even be hard for an AI summary, which I'm assuming you can do.

Actually, I went and did that, just to see if it could work. Took some work copying and pasting every page in a PDF and uploading it. But this was an interesting exercise. On several occasions the AI was making things up and getting some things wrong. But I finally did get one coherent summary.

AI generated review:

Shadow of a God-King is a dark, emotionally demanding political fantasy that combines espionage, psychological horror, and moral reckoning inside a vividly realized imperial world. What begins as a high-stakes infiltration story steadily transforms into something more personal and more devastating: a deliberate dismantling of power from the inside, carried out not with armies or blades, but with patience, intelligence, and an intimate understanding of cruelty.

The story’s greatest strength is its commitment to interior experience. Azalea’s perspective anchors the narrative, and the reader is never allowed the comfort of distance. The pyramid is not merely a setting but a mechanism of oppression—beautiful, ritualized, and relentlessly dehumanizing. The Brides are not abstract victims; they are individuals whose fear, coping strategies, kindness, and despair are carefully rendered. Characters like Evette and Mona give the story emotional gravity, grounding its political stakes in human cost.

Azalea herself is a compelling protagonist precisely because she does not begin as a crusader. Her initial goal is pragmatic and limited: steal intelligence, survive, leave. The gradual erosion of that restraint—through exposure to systemic abuse, accidental discoveries, and irreversible loss—feels organic rather than heroic. By the time she turns her focus fully on Amun-Ka, it does not feel like a genre pivot so much as an inevitability. The story understands that endurance has limits, and that moral clarity often arrives too late to prevent tragedy.

The handling of Amun-Ka is particularly effective. He is not a distant tyrant but an intimate one, whose power operates through humiliation, ritual, and emotional dominance. His downfall is satisfying not because it is spectacular, but because it is earned. The trial does not hinge on a single piece of evidence or a convenient confession; it hinges on pattern, habit, and arrogance. Azalea’s decision to expose his blasphemy—by letting him be exactly who he always is—feels both clever and thematically precise. He is destroyed not by rebellion, but by the worldview he insists on enacting.

The story is unflinching in its consequences. Evette’s execution is especially brutal, not for its graphic detail, but for its inevitability and timing. It lands as a moral wound rather than a plot beat, and the ripple effects—particularly the reaction of the children—underscore the story’s refusal to sentimentalize suffering. Victory here is costly, incomplete, and emotionally scarring, which gives the ending a weight many political fantasies avoid.

That said, the story’s density can be challenging. The shift from espionage thriller to moral reckoning is deliberate, but some readers may initially struggle to recalibrate their expectations. The number of moving parts—Resistance operations, independent actors, audits, trials—requires close attention, and the narrative does not always pause to reassure the reader that confusion is intentional rather than accidental. Readers who skim or expect conventional genre pacing may miss key causal distinctions.

Overall, Shadow of a God-King is not a comfortable read, but it is a confident one. It trusts the reader to endure discomfort, to sit with ambiguity, and to recognize that dismantling power often looks less like revolution and more like exposure. It is a story about survival turning into responsibility, about how systems collapse not when attacked head-on, but when forced to confront the truth of what they are.

It lingers—not because it offers catharsis, but because it refuses to pretend that justice is clean.

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It's actually not bad, but that is disturbing, because how many are going to resort to AI? Copying and pasting every page into an AI would probably be very inconvenient for longer stories, but it probably takes less effort than reading them (unless you read for entertainment—which we ought to be doing anyway since that's the entire point of this community). So yeah, I'm a bit concerned.

For shorter stories, it is extraordinarily easy to do. I have this disgusting feeling 25% of all the new reviews from this contest are going to be AI generated instead of from people who actually read the stories.

In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if some people just feed already written reviews into AI and have it make a new one. That was what one person was banned for, right? Either way, I don't like it. Not. One. Bit.

EDIT: I'm not making any accusations to anyone by the way. It's possible someone clicks on a story, doesn't read it, and comes back to it later, etc. I personally have like twenty saves of unfinished reading.

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29 days ago
Why would people even do this? Genuinely there’s no reason to elect to have ai read a story for you, No one is making you be here. Thirty seconds on Shadow Of A God-King, my favorite story on the site which took me an hour to get through one path, is insane. I’m a pretty fast reader too. The AI summary is not only lifeless but takes all the fun out of reading.

I literally cannot get over how people would rather not do the work to get meaningless points on a random internet site than use AI or even just pretend to have read the story.

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29 days ago
I would understand cheating if we got paid for reviews, but you're right: for this? I don't understand it personally (also thanks for liking Shadow of a God-King ;) That took a lot of effort even if it's more story than CYOA, and from a lazy person even more so).

But what makes it even more nuts is this isn't even a true context. It's not like the review contest last summer where it was cut-throat competition. Is there even a winner in this? It's more of a "We all win" kind of contest where you get the points you work for, rather than your team defeats the others. There can be a 100% ultimate winner rate.

So AI reading and reviews makes no sense. Especially when you consider the final line of the contest announcement post: "Do not use AI to write your reviews. I will take all your points and then ban you."

Then again, I suppose the "ultimate bragging & bullying rights" thing, well that can be valuable. Perhaps valuable enough to cheat. \_(-_-)_/

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one month ago
I read a lot of really good ones already. "As Ink" and "Constellaris Court" were on my list anyway and they did not disappoint. "Bright Days" was unexpectedly good---such quick simple fun. I enjoyed "By the light of day", "Blood in the king's court", and "Bird in a cage", but again I expected those to be good. "Broken Bonds" is worth reading because of the super smooth item integration.

P.S.: Just played "The Cult" and man, this game is so nicely written!

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one month ago

I'm planning on writing some over the break! I'll try to rate all the games first before writing my reviews! 

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one month ago
I'm sure I've reviewed a bunch of these already. Just too lazy to check how many. I'm planning to read "Before the pattern breaks" when I get the chance.

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29 days ago
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29 days ago
Ok, I'll bite... What does this mean? :/

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29 days ago
It's a progress bar

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29 days ago

Alternate progress bar design:

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Sometimes the intrusive thoughts win....

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29 days ago
I hope Clayfinger doesn't bite this one.

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28 days ago
Why? Were you hoping to try it yourself?

Ok, I get the thing about intrusive thoughts winning now.

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28 days ago
I mean there's clearly plenty for everyone.

Yeah, definitely intrusive.