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I just got an idea of making a SAW fan fiction and I wanted to know how far we can go in mature content before it is banned. There is a trap that I thought of that may be a bit over the top.

How far?

Try EndMaster far. 

What is EndMaster far?

You'd know if you read his stories. 

Have you ever seen SAW?

Yeah, this guy who went bat shit crazy because he got cancer, so he tried to suicide many times but couldn't. Then he started hating people who don't appreciate their lives, so he trap them, and force them to escape his traps. 

A more adequate question would be "What's the trap going to be?"

I don't have a name for it yet, but this is one of the many that will be in there:

Brian wakes up in a daze. "What's going on? Where the hell am I?" he says. He sits in a room completely naked with a bottle of Viagra and a spiked fleshlight. That's when a T.V. in the room flashes on, and Jigsaw begins to speak,

"Hello Brian, I want to play a game. For years, you have spent your life raping women and young girls. With those hands you have violated and stolen the innocence of many. If you look at the door behind you, you'll realize there are large spikes on it. This is to prevent you from throwing your filthy body on it in an attempt to escape."

Brian's begins to show panic. His breathing picks up in speed and sweat covers his body like rain.

"In this room, you'll notice a fleshlight with spikes outside of it. There is also a bottle of Viagra next to you. They key to the door behind you is within the fleshlight, but the only way to get the key is to use the fleshlight. Oh, and before I forget to mention, the fleshlight has been rigged with blades on the inside. Once a minute has gone by, the blades will slice your penis clean off. You've gotten so used to raping women that perhaps masturbation just won't thrill you anymore. Let's hope your sick mind hasn't gotten you too attached to those habits."

After taking the Viagra, Brian grabs the fleshlight and endures the spikes going into his hands. He manages to get the key, but his penis is cut off before he is able to remove it. He leaves the room, but the Viagra is causing all his blood to come out of his crotch at an alarming rate. He dies from blood lose before he manages to escape.

There will be some more of course but I wasn't sure if something like this would be accepted.

Pfft... That's a hilarious trap! You're a genius, Danaos!...

Although, if you want my honest opinion, I think, while maybe slightly out of character it may be for Saw, it would be less bannable and more serious if you hooked him up to a machine that raped him instead.

I laughed.

Maybe I read this wrong, but if the key was in the fleshlight, how would sticking his dick in it get the key out? Did he also have tape or glue at the end of his dick to fish the key out?

And if he fished the key out with his glue dick successfully from the fleshlight wouldn't it already be safe from getting cut off?

Probably glued to the side with a type of glue that dissolves in semen. Because cancer gives you a lot of free time to make semen-dissolvable stuff.

I might add the "you must use your semen to get it out" part in. I didn't know that there was semen dissolvable glue.

Unless you're going the parody route, I wouldn't suggest using something that laughable.

I wanted it to be a mystery/detective story of trying to catch the new Jigsaw. It's a shame you say that because I just thought of a good name for it. "Dickapitation"

That detracts from the actual funniness and makes it seem cornier. If you leave it without an explanatory name it maintains the shock value it has and adds silliness.

On the other hand if you go the parody route you can probably get away with slightly more graphic scenes.

Humor lessens the horror and essentially turns something inherently evil and fucked up into something the whole family can enjoy!

Ok, does this one sound more serious?

Herald wakes up tied to a chair. There are small metal rings on his fingers, nose, and tongue. There are also small drills positioned in front of his eyes and ears. In front of him is a table with six metal boxes. As his vision clears up, his eyes go wide when he looks at the wall on the other side of the room. Six of his closest friends and family are tied to the wall opposite of him. They each have drills pointed at their heads.

A monitor above his loved ones flashes on. "Hello Herald, I wanna play a game. There six boxes in front of you. Each one has a button inside it and every single one, save the first, is locked. When this tape ends, the buttons will become activated. Press the first box and the second one opens. Press the second and the third opens and so on. This game is pretty simple. Just press all the buttons within three minutes and you will be released. However, every time you press a button, one of your loved ones will die. If you don't press all the buttons before time is up, you will lose all of your senses. Sight, smell, touch, taste, and hearing. Let the games begin."

Does this sound better?

Sounds fine to me, but doesn't Jigsaw usually pontificate about how the victim wasted his/her life or was a horrible person in relation to the puzzle?

I was rushing here. Jigsaw was to say, "Throughout your whole life, you have done nothing but take from others. Whether or not they are friends or family mattered little to you. All these years, they have been willing to sacrifice for you. Are you willing to do the same? You can repay them all their years of sacrifice, or you can take the only thing they have left to give. Let the games begin."

Dude, that sounds hardcore. I would actually like to see that.

I kind of wish Danaos would've continued his Aeternus idea, it sounded pretty cool.

Aeternus? What is that?

What made you think I stopped making it?

He want you to post all your premade, unfinished work here, before you get to finish and officially publish it. 

What?

Chicken's butt! 

Seriously what are you even talking about?

You should know to almost never take me seriously. ^_-

I don't usually, but I was being open minded on the situation. (I know. Dangerous stuff to do on the internet.)

Stranger danger. 

It wasn't in your list of stories on your profile anymore and you had stopped talking about and starting talking about various other stories to possibly work on so I figured you lost interest.

I took it off my storygame list (amongst others) just because I wanted to remove the sneak peaks. So far I haven't encountered a part in which I needed assistance yet but I'll soon look for play testers. On top of that, I have a lot of ideas go through my head and if I don't get those out I can't make progress on what I'm currently working on. Aeternus is still my main focus though.