Falling Asleep

Pretty good game, I did a bit of exploration and I think I found all the paths. It's not very long, and I loved the jump at the end, and it's kind of cool how this could be a reality for someone. Not the best thing I've read, certainly not the worst.

This was pretty good but definitely could’ve had something more interesting happen at the end.

mixed feelings

Pretty good for a first game.

The story has a very nice atmosphere, although a couple titles seem a little silly and out of place.

You got a nom! on the nomnom scale! You did a great job describing the scenes/setting, but my only complaint is that it's kinda short and didn't grab my attention. Good writing skills and keep up the good work!
Conversion Chart:
yuk!=0-1 stars
eh!=1-1.9 stars
meh...=2-2.9 stars
nom=3-3.9 stars
nomnom=4-4.9
nomnomnom!=5-6

It was good. I liked the writing style; it was very engaging. But that's the reason for my low rating. Nothing I chose to do mattered. It all ended with rape and murder. Because I suffer from PTSD from an incident I won't discuss, the subject matter was particularly triggering for me. If I was warned before playing, I wouldn't have (although I didn't need to finish the game, but I also have OCD issues). If you made a game that was less traumatic and dark, I'd play it. :)

It's alright, it's quite detailed... I'll be sure to play it again!

Interesting with a confusing ending. Did I beat the game???

Wow, this was very interesting.