Finding Lillegard Castle

It's a good beginning. If this was an actual story I would be more interested and give a better rating. However, this was just a beginning.

The main problem for me is that this whole thing feels more like an advertisement.

It was a really good story. I liked it. But I would have rated it 2 more levels if you would just continue the story in just this one story game. I hate it when there are a bunch of different parts of a story all over this website!

i started getting into it then it turned out it was a intro and i got dissapointed

I want more. XD

Nice intro, but it doesn't have any information about the academy. I suppose that being thrown into it is a fun way to start.

I've been asked to spy before, but never so blatantly in public...

I thought this was really good! The plot was unexpected: a man asking the new student to spy' and it really gave me a chance to work with Riven's personality and thought process before starting an rp in the forum, which was really nice since I have never used him prior.

It wasn't good.

I refuse to participate in whatever this stupid "AAC" thing is.

Keepin' his eyes open. ^ ^;