Never coming home, mate!

Boy do I love almost every option making me reset to the very beginning of the story!

Does that sound fun to you? It wasn't for me, and it really tested my patience with this.

No, just no.

Oh right, and renember, if you're traveling and suddenly come down with a fever, get on a crowded train immediately! Or else you're some kind of pussy who doesn't DESERVE to travel.

I think the highlight was when my Japanese tourist was forced to either convert to Islam, or go home and end the game for "disrespecting another culture" by not being Islamic.

Oh, sorry? Did I say end the game? I meant just hit another forced reset link. This thing is plagued with them.

Only good thing about this story was its maturity setting.

Somehow exceeded the expectations the title set to get a 2.

Come on. This is very linear and each page is maximum 3 lines. Not to mention that it’s extremely boring to click through. This is a rare case where the length of the story is a bad thing, because it got boring after about 4 countries, not 18 or however many there were.

And don’t use reset game links on every bad ending! You obviously don’t know much about the site if you think that’s good.

Also, why is the maturity level 1/8? There was a page called “smoke weed”.

So why did I rate this a 2 and not a 1? Well, firstly, unlike some other authors, you tried. That’s good, isn’t it? But mainly because because there was potential. If you reduced it down to about 5 countries but made each one have a larger, more interesting and more exciting plot, then this may have been a good story.

There are a lot of problems with this, One of the good things that is about this Is that you can use the storyboards to wipe your ass, Now for the cons
1, There is no literal way to lose,If you put reset on the game it makes you restart from the beginning. This took so long to to because it kept taking me back to the start.
2,There are literally two words on each page and It is so unrealistic, NO OPTIONS what so ever.
3, This is one of two story games that I rated a 1.
I see that you have made it for your class, but other than that who would want to play this game? Also there is some inappropriate material such as smoking weed, UP YOUR MATURITY LEVEL PLEASE. This game probably took two hours, normally games take half a year, and In some cases more.

Like Eternal, But I'm not even going to talk about Eternal in the presence of this horrendous story game, I don't have hate on you personally. I'm only angry that you decided to post this,"It should have stayed in the drafts.

And If you ever fix this game... You need to add more words, more options. And Most of all more fun!

I'm sorry about this terrible review but I do think If this game is going to stand, It needs more to it...

I created this game to submit for my class.