Pushing A Desert Army

I have to agree with some of the other comments. You need details and a storyline. Where are we exactly? I thought we are on a desert island, but all of a sudden there is a castle. Maybe if you tell us what is going on, like what the war or battle is about and why people are fighting, then maybe I wouldn't be so confused. The person in the story probably has some motive for fighting- give some background and tell his story.

I generally write more than the 948 words of this game on most days and I'm surprised it even counts as a 3/8 for length to be honest. This 'story' was so short, undeveloped, and pointless that I don't really see why you published it. I think you need to put in more effort before you publish anything like this. Who's the main character? Why are you even in the desert and who are you fighting? None of this is explored and it all just seems like an excuse to have some barely written action crammed into less than a 1000 words for the sake of action.
1/8 Poor effort

It could use more detail

Psychosis....cool story line, needs more development though

I feel that this game was not explained very well. It was short and ended abruptly...

Terrible. What's the point?

I can understand your effort, since this was made in 2005. But this is crappy.

It's good, but a little bit short

Seth says MEH! A lot of ways to die but it was still sorta fun. 4/8

Not that bad... abit more detail would have been appreciated.