The Church

This has long since been unpublished.

hahhahhahha - stop making games.

Needs more stuff in it. Needs to seem like a church too.

What exactly is this story about? And how did I get locked in a church?! I've gone to relieve myself after most of the congregation has left before, and no one has ever locked and chained the doors (from the inside, by the way! How is that?!?!) of the church on me. I am at a loss.

Okay, that was an interesting ending, about the Shadow Realm and becoming a millionaire- but I would have liked to actually play that stuff out instead of just clicking one link and reading about it.

This game was written with correct grammar, and would be a good plot, trying to escape a church and all, but it was written poorly. It has no effort and is probably less than ten pages long.

Another run on sentence story. Please learn how to use punctuation. Also, the story is far too short. I chose one link and then just read how I used a crowbar to get out and live happily ever after. How would one even get locked in a church? There is no rational explanation.

Um.........how did I get banished to the shadow realm and how did I become a millionaire? If you ever make another game make one that doesen't suck.

Crapadapoledoo-Crapadapledoo

It was ok