Find Coco the Elephant!

This is a cute little story. I’m guessing that it was indeed intended for children. However, even children could use a bit more to the story. The items were also really neat with excellent pictures included as well. I liked that there were so many items, some had uses, and when they weren’t able to be used, there weren’t error messages.

I do wonder a little about the target audience. With it aimed so low, was the intention for the smaller child to actually read this story? I’m not sure that would happen too often on this site, or actually anywhere on the Internet. So I’m guessing this would be more towards someone reading it to a smaller child. If that’s the case, it works well, but could have perhaps just a little more in the descriptions area of things and places.

I found Coco, and I had fun doing it. The different choices were nice, even if they ended up leading to the same ending. Thank you for sharing this with the site!

Only three or so year olds and under will find any point in this game; I found it amusing enough with the use of the advanced editor but boring in terms of the plot. My eight year old sister is on this site, just telling whoever remarked that there are no five year olds here.

The writing was quite good, and it would be interesting enough for a toddler if they knew how to read and use the computer. :) 4/8.

This storygame would be fun for its target audience (children), so I've rated it a little higher accordingly. Certain things that would detract from a regular storygame, such as a short length, are positives for this storygame given the attention span of young children.

On the other hand, there were some weird spacing issues in some places, and you hadn't accounted for certain situations (for example, when I visited the carpet after receiving the yoyo and then returned to the Toybox, it said I tripped over the yoyo again even though the yoyo was in my inventory at the time).

I liked it, but felt like it is for a younger audience. It could also be a bit longer, I see potential in this story and it could be a lot better if it was longer and explored different lands.

Honestly, that was really cute. I loved how you could interact with different items for different reasons.

Although this was a good storygame, what would've made it better was if there were more steps we would have to take to find Coco. Maybe different lands, different people. That would've been fun to see and really make this story even greater.

Definitely a good story, even if it wasn't aimed toward people my age. 6/8!

D'awh! That was adorable. After all the terrible 1/8 length games I've just been binging, I think I like this game a hell of a lot more than it deserves on the basis of being not shit. :p

This was ok. I would have liked it to have been longer. I feel it would be better for a younger audience. The overall plot was fun though. Good job!

Great and fun and pretty entertaining. A little simple, too. I think you could really expand this to become something awesome.

I really liked this cute story! Good job!

I feel like a toddler now...
Interesting concept, wished it was longer.