Find Coco the Elephant!

This is a cute little story. I’m guessing that it was indeed intended for children. However, even children could use a bit more to the story. The items were also really neat with excellent pictures included as well. I liked that there were so many items, some had uses, and when they weren’t able to be used, there weren’t error messages.

I do wonder a little about the target audience. With it aimed so low, was the intention for the smaller child to actually read this story? I’m not sure that would happen too often on this site, or actually anywhere on the Internet. So I’m guessing this would be more towards someone reading it to a smaller child. If that’s the case, it works well, but could have perhaps just a little more in the descriptions area of things and places.

I found Coco, and I had fun doing it. The different choices were nice, even if they ended up leading to the same ending. Thank you for sharing this with the site!

This storygame would be fun for its target audience (children), so I've rated it a little higher accordingly. Certain things that would detract from a regular storygame, such as a short length, are positives for this storygame given the attention span of young children.

On the other hand, there were some weird spacing issues in some places, and you hadn't accounted for certain situations (for example, when I visited the carpet after receiving the yoyo and then returned to the Toybox, it said I tripped over the yoyo again even though the yoyo was in my inventory at the time).

Don, a 10-year-old orphan, is often underestimated because he has a large body. Don has a storybook inherited from his parents, which is full of illustrations and magical stories. The book is not only a souvenir, but also a source of inspiration and escape for Don from a world that feels unfriendly because he is often underestimated by his friends.

Don tries to prove his ability by joining a talent show, where he plans to perform a stage play inspired by a storybook his parents left him, but a friend steals the book, leaving him in despair. Luckily, Don always has the support of his Grandma and his friends, Nurman and Mae. In the midst of despair, Don meets Meri (a mysterious little fairy) who asks for his help in finding her parents. He then tries to get back the book he inherited. This meeting begins a magical adventure that begins, changing Don's view of himself, teaching him the meaning of true friendship, courage, and self-confidence, and strengthening the bonds of newly formed friendships so do you want to watch jumbo or not

it's a preschool CYOA

its actually really good, I don't know why people wouldnt like it. The storyline is really for much younger audiences, but the mechanics are cool and i find it interesting that you can pick stuff up, because in most CYOAs .you cannot do that.

This story is very fun because you can pick up items and when you make a mistake it doesn't end the story.

Great for my ESL classes!

I enjoyed te story about the stuffed animals.

Amusing and well put together. Short but I enjoyed it.

This was cute. It really brings me back to childhood memories of imagination and stuffed animals.