Find Coco the Elephant!

This is a cute little story. I’m guessing that it was indeed intended for children. However, even children could use a bit more to the story. The items were also really neat with excellent pictures included as well. I liked that there were so many items, some had uses, and when they weren’t able to be used, there weren’t error messages.

I do wonder a little about the target audience. With it aimed so low, was the intention for the smaller child to actually read this story? I’m not sure that would happen too often on this site, or actually anywhere on the Internet. So I’m guessing this would be more towards someone reading it to a smaller child. If that’s the case, it works well, but could have perhaps just a little more in the descriptions area of things and places.

I found Coco, and I had fun doing it. The different choices were nice, even if they ended up leading to the same ending. Thank you for sharing this with the site!

Only three or so year olds and under will find any point in this game; I found it amusing enough with the use of the advanced editor but boring in terms of the plot. My eight year old sister is on this site, just telling whoever remarked that there are no five year olds here.

The writing was quite good, and it would be interesting enough for a toddler if they knew how to read and use the computer. :) 4/8.

This storygame would be fun for its target audience (children), so I've rated it a little higher accordingly. Certain things that would detract from a regular storygame, such as a short length, are positives for this storygame given the attention span of young children.

On the other hand, there were some weird spacing issues in some places, and you hadn't accounted for certain situations (for example, when I visited the carpet after receiving the yoyo and then returned to the Toybox, it said I tripped over the yoyo again even though the yoyo was in my inventory at the time).

This was ok. I would have liked it to have been longer. I feel it would be better for a younger audience. The overall plot was fun though. Good job!

Great and fun and pretty entertaining. A little simple, too. I think you could really expand this to become something awesome.

I really liked this cute story! Good job!

I feel like a toddler now...
Interesting concept, wished it was longer.

This is recommended for kids who are learning to read as this uses simple language and has a kid theme but for mature people yeah not so much.

I'll admit, I was entertained, but it was super short.

Short but I like the idea.