Player Comments on fish filet

A fairly interesting puzzle game. There wasn't much here in terms of story content, but this was rather decent in the game aspect of what makes up part of a storygame. Though a stronger emphasis on story aspect would have also been appreciated by myself. I must say that I did find myself curious as to what bore fruit the inspiration for the title of this story, because from what I've read there wasn't any mention of fillet or fish. I guess despite the randomness of the title and the game itself, I didn't find the random nature of certain things to be too confusing or annoying. The story for the most part was at least coherent in a sense that I didn't find what I was reading to be boring when I eventually reached the end.

I found this game to require some patience on my end, as well as paying attention to previous choices that I made and keeping them in memory. The amount of items given and the correct choices needed to be chosen was a good challenge, a challenge that wasn't too difficult and fair enough in the way that it was presented. I only wish that things made a bit more sense as to what and why things were happening the way they were happening. For example, the entire box deal that while entertaining, was somewhat random.

There's not many issues I had with this story, though for something that is tagged humor (at least in the moment that this comment was being made) actual humor wasn't something that I felt was really explored. Unless the randomness of certain things was supposed to provide the humor in this?

For a puzzle game without much in terms of story, or much of a clear and present goal to be reached for the matter... I found this to be something that was serviceable, and certainly not anything which I would call a terrible experience by any means.

So not bad, hamburgerfish.

A great game, the puzzles were interesting although quite random at times. There were quite a few times wear I had no idea what to do and no items seemed to work, it took me quite a while to realize that you need to use another item after using the cardboard box in chapter 3.

It also would have been much more useful if the items that you no longer needed were discarded after when they were no longer needed (although I understand that you kept them in to make the decisions harder).

Overall the aim of each chapter could have been clearer and the advanced editor could have been used more effectively to create a better and more interesting puzzle. On the better side the grammar and spelling was pretty good overall and your writing style was very good. With more writing practice this could be a great story!

I really don't think I've been so confused by a game before. From what I understand, key-cards open walls, lollipops can be used for bribery and somewhere there's a magical box that you can turn into... For a game that has absolutely no premise, that you could do absolutely anything with, you'd think the author would've been able to come up with a slightly less nonsensical object than a magic box that gives you the power to turn into boxes.

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nice

eh

This game is amazing, and i will now apply it to my life. Basically- If you're confused, go get lost in you're local antique shop, retrace your steps, and the secrets to the univers are yours.

The puzzles in this game could by solved most easily by clicking links until I found the correct one. It did not take much thinking on my part. It's not a terrible game, but the lack of a real story combined with the lack of real puzzles made it somewhat boring.

You just have to get really lucky.
1. Go into antique store
2. Use keycard
3. Go on middle-right path
4. if you reached the error, good job.
5. Click "go back"
6. Click the third "go back"
7. Win(i think.)

1/8 If I could rate it any lower I would.

You deserve to be waterboarded for writing this waste of brain cells.

This is a bad click & guess "story" with no substance.

BUT HEY - I'm sure you tried kiddo can't fault you on that.

Nice try but honeslty it's too random. it is meant to be a puzzle game but there is no rhyme or reason to the "puzzles". you get through this by just clicking randomly and going back and trying again. skip it

This is an amusing satire of low-effort CYOA games. Or at least I *hope* it is.

This game is a testament to the fact that cardboard boxes are a practical tool for espionage! Metal gear solid was right all the while!

I liked the game but it was a little weird. You should work on the story plot so it's not so random. Good job for your first try.

You got an ehh? on the nomnom scale! Your writing was so random, and could have been more polished. Also the keycard was used for only the most unrelated stuff... It wasn't very fun, but as I always say good try.

Conversion Chart:
yuk!=0-1 stars
eh!=1-1.9 stars
meh...=2-2.9 stars
nom=3-3.9 stars
nomnom=4-4.9
nomnomnom!=5-6

This friggen sucked, since the puzzle seemed unnecessary contrived and the writing was pretty bad.

What does this game has to do with fish? I thought I was a chef, but turned out that I was a block-head wearing a box. Oh, maybe I should have gone shopping for an X-box. ;D

A decent puzzle game which forces the player to pay attention to what's going. It's touch and go, really, and you really need an End Game link nearer the beginning in case your readers don't have the patience to last through to the end.

Some of the puzzles are just tedious, however (7 doors and no indication about which one you should try?) It could use improvement, and it doesn't make a lot of sense, but that's probably the point here. Thankfully it wasn't too long, or it would have gotten really annoying.

BUT WHAT'S IN THE BOX?????

Somehow this was a fun story, and I might want to have another story like this...

Very good for the first game.
My first game didn't even meet the sites standends

Um... It's a little weird. At some point in the story, there is a "happy box" which you can turn into. I mean, the title isn't even relevant in some small way. I know this is the first story of the author, but it's a weird story with very little plot development.

I cannot comprehend why the title is called Fish Fillet, but this got me laughing:

There is a lone jeep in a parking lot here. It looks like no one wants it. Better take it.

Hmm, I see a LOT of cars around my house. I think i'll just take them all and put them in my pocket :3

an awesome gamr

There was a very crappy error ending at the beginning.
I really do not like this, it just throws you in with no knowledge of what is going on. The puzzles are not very good either.

WHY IS IT CALLED FISH FILLET WHEN THERES NOTHING TO DO WITH FISH!

"He's blind but can only see boxes." - It's that kind of hilarious BS that makes the story more interesting than it already was.

Interesting..... A little random. People do that to much!
But it was fun...

I was going to play this game to comment and tell people to shut the fuck up. Your comments aren't nice. Well after I played this game, I just say, wtf? This story makes no sense. And no, I don't want a sequal. You never made clear what happened, it was random.

I didn't really understand the last stage, but not a bad game

not the best but it wasn't horrib;e 5/8

confusing as all get out

That sucked. Boring as hell. What was with the random walls that were always blocking the way? Too stupid to come up with something better than that? Plus, that "happy box" that let you become boxes or whatever was just fucking stupid. 1/8.

this is good for a first try, but still confusing! but oh well, good job.

good for your fisrt game

Hmm... A few things made absolutely no sense, I got stuck because I never took both boxes, then I ad to use the tractor to get past a gurd who is blind but can only see boxes? All in all, a good game. If you made it longer, gave it more plot, used good characterization, and explained what the point of the story is (Was it getting back your car?), this would be a great game. I give it 5/8. It would have been higher if you implemented any of the above factors.

Interesting. There was no narrative value, but you seem to have picked up well on the conventions of the story editor. Some of the puzzles didn't make sense...actually, little of that made sense, but it was fun and a good test run.

im confused, i clicked a link on the this is an error page and i won

5/8. I could never do anything so... well, you stayed on one topic: good. I really liked it.

Easy to find the error cheat, click the third go back it's fun i guess

there wasn't even a story...

Worth every cent. AWESOME game! 6/8

Ok... few mistakes. I might fix some errors.

I forgot to erase something!

Wow! This is pretty good! Nice game now... make a sequel!

Well, I need to fix up a few broken links, so I'll do it ASAP.

I named it that because in the third sequel, I had planned out that halfway into the level you find a fish filet or something like that.

Not a bad first game. Actually, not a bad game at all, just a few grammar problems. A 5/8 definetely. Don't see why you named it fish fillet though.

Wow! I figured no one would find that. Nice going, madglee and anyone else who found/finds it!

Pretty interesting, nice for a first story. I found the super secret ending with stage 80 billion or something. Also, I got stuck in an endless loop after returning the money.

Wow! Great game! 6/8! As Rodney said, you lack a good storyline, but this puzzle game was very interesting and fun! I really like how you did not put a no link there, and instead put a link! lol, that was very fun! I look forward to the sequel!

Did you find the other ending yet, anyone?

Actually not too bad at all. 5/8

Okay for a first game. You definately got the items thing down. For your next one, try to add more of a storyline to it.

Well, my final review was a success, and I hope you like it.
-hamburgerfish

sorry if it was short and dumb but it's the best I can do for my first game