Marvel Adventure

It was short, but very cute. There a ton of inconsistencies with Marvel, but it's a fanfic so who really cares. Very fun to play, hope you and your nephew had fun writing it.

I want Ace Combat

This was cute

Pretty quick tbh

Adorable. I once offered to write a story for my nine year old nephew... except he wanted me to be the villain in it, so he could beat me up. Good times.

If you saw my last comment, I made a mistake and meant to give it an 8/10.

wow. I never expected Spider-Man to kill someone. Your nephew has talent!

6/10

Very short, but it's kind of nice how you worked on this together. ^-^

HORRIBLE! Boring and obnoxious to play. No creativity at all!

OK. I read through every line and thought that it was okay. As a Marvel critic, I must explain my troubles with this story.
Let's start with Captain America. In his story line, he needs to defeat Black Cat. Black Cat is from the Spiderman line, but you may have wanted to mix things up. In Black Cat's movie that is coming out in Spiderman: The Heist, she has been an enemy, ally, and even a love interest in Spiderman, so again, you may have just wanted to mix things up. But when you are Captain america, there is an option to attack Black Cat. In doing so, you launch your shield at her. This is the point in which I am confused. Why? Because Captain America's shield is made of vibranium, a tough source that is known to be "unbreakable" or "impenetrable," but this was proven wrong when Iron Man cracked the shield in Captain America: Civil War. Yet when he launches the shield at her, she steals it and throws it back. Captain America has a vibranium shield, which means that it would be super heavy. I mean, even he has to direct his body weight into a forward motion just to throw it far, and he has the super-soldier serum! So I find it hard to believe that she could just pick it up, throw it, and kill him. See what I mean?
The next one would be Spiderman. This is just a question. Which Venom was it? There are multiple Venom's. This is because Venom is just a symbiote and latches on to multiple different hosts.
I get that this was just made by a 6 year old (with help from Avery/Briar) so I shouldn't go on to long about every small mistake.
Overall, I enjoyed the story and I think that your nephew has a great Marvel mind.