The Last Teenager (v2)

Player Rating2.13/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 62 ratings since
played times (finished )

Story Difficulty2/8

"walk in the park"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

After a devastating nuclear war ravages the Earth, survivors are few and far between. Unbeknownst to you... you are the last teenager. Will you survive flesh eating water dwellers, acid, mutants and other horrific obstacles in the hope you will be rescued? Come and find out...

v2: I've proofread properly this time, and removed the lazy "Somehow You Died" page. If you notice any mistakes or glitches, please tell me so I can have a look. Please bear in mind that this is my first ever storygame, and it's frankly probably not any good. Have a go! And ENJOY!

Player Comments

I wasn't bad, just a bit short... But how in the world are you supposed to commit suicide with a candle?! Choke yourself to death?
-- KraZKidMJCB on 6/13/2015 11:54:53 PM with a score of 0
"You died somehow!"

FUCK NO.
-- Malkalack on 1/4/2015 12:25:42 PM with a score of 0
That was interesting. I think you could definitely expand on this idea. Thanks for the game.
-- MultipleMinds on 12/31/2014 5:55:28 PM with a score of 0
Hmmm. Too much of too little.
-- nmelssx on 12/29/2014 3:57:18 PM with a score of 0
Thanks for your feedback guys, now I know what I need to do. A) Proofread more B) Make a more complex plot without instant death around every corner C)Be better. THANK YOU, O critic people!
-- Cloudeh on 12/25/2014 6:53:49 PM with a score of 0
This is really good. I only wish it was longer
-- bburger on 12/25/2014 4:14:16 PM with a score of 0
Well,for a first time story on here it was much better than many first time games on here! So Grats for that!

I always leave feedback in any comments I make so here is some.

You had branches which was good and overall there was a follow able plot of sorts. Sadly though many of your choices were simply 'correct choice or die instantly' which are never so good. Your pages were also very short, often single liners.

Next time, and I hope there is a next time, try going for longer, a little more on every page and no insta deaths!
-- FeanorOnForge on 12/24/2014 7:03:10 PM with a score of 0
Uhm.....
-- WarriorCatsRPStories on 12/24/2014 4:17:36 PM with a score of 0
The words "you died somehow" are the last thing that any reader of story-games wants to read, especially when it's random because it gives the 0 incentive to read the story again to try and survive 2 pages instead of 1 :)
-- Will11 on 12/23/2014 7:31:02 PM with a score of 0
You don't explain why we die when we die. That's enough reason to give this a horrible rating. 1/8
-- TheDickReviewer on 12/23/2014 3:14:57 PM with a score of 0
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