Weirdos from Another Planet 2: The goons are here!

I initially rated this a four, but I'm deciding to lower it to a three because this really isn't that good at all. It was too random, and I feel like this is something you did just to have a storygame. It's better to take time on storygames, otherwise they could end up like this and extremely rushed.

The writing was simple, poor, and not captivating in the slightest way. Paired with the plot, you're lucky to even get this very generous three out of eight. It seems like a very branching story at first, but after clicking some I realized that they were just filler links, and did absolutely nothing. I wouldn't be surprised if this dropped down and was eventually destroyed by End.

Overall, it needs to be unpublished and worked on. It was too short, and doesn't belong in a place like this.

Fuck your storygame. Lame as dick

Fun... kinda boring but I'll give u a good rating anyway.... :DDDD

There's pretty much no way to win

It only has two slides. Literaly when you chose your first choice, the game is over.

I just died. . .

Okay... That was random.

I chose one link and then lost the game! I mean seriously, if it's a multi-path story, can you please extend on the 'multi'?

HOW DO U GET PAST THE ELEPHANTS!?!??!

^_^ I likey! MUCH better, you have a better story this time around, and using the items was fun. I got stuck a couple of times but eventually won. I like the random vibe, although a little bit more plot/character development wouldn't hurt. I had more fun this time around than the first one.