Player Comments on Mario's Adventure Island

Mama Mia! This-a game didn't even give Mario an Italiano accent! It's-a stupido!
-- Avery_Moore on 7/14/2020 5:24:57 PM with a score of 0
good but can i meet peach
-- Kylo on 5/25/2020 10:27:57 PM with a score of 0
Short and sweet. There’s a certain charm and humor to this game. I like it.
-- SpaghettiMan on 10/2/2019 5:29:29 PM with a score of 0
This is garbage, and absolutely embarassing. Baffling that it has stayed up for as long as it has.
-- DarkSpawn on 8/31/2019 8:07:11 AM with a score of 0
I don't think there was even one sentence in this that didn't have some sort of fundamental error of spelling, syntax, capitalization, or style.

So that in itself is actually sort of impressive.
-- Gower on 8/30/2019 9:31:07 PM with a score of 0
1/8. Yeesh.
-- 1/8 on 6/5/2019 4:35:25 PM with a score of 0
that was fun...
-- silas123 on 4/25/2019 8:36:25 AM with a score of 0
Yeesh. 1/8.
-- FurryLovingGamer on 9/26/2018 9:51:15 PM with a score of 0
Not what i expected but good keep it up
-- NoobSaibot2000 on 8/28/2018 6:03:00 PM with a score of 0
Can't really judge much because of how short it is. But the "Can you even read? Which one of the two options sounded less stupid?" (or something like that) was funny.
-- jodithewitch on 7/9/2018 5:09:04 PM with a score of 0
The grammar wasn't good. The story has potential though.
-- MusicalNerd7 on 6/7/2018 10:18:05 AM with a score of 0
This was bad for so many reasons...

First of all, the grammar was very bad, there were obvious mistakes in nearly all of the pages of the game.

Second of all, the general story, or lack thereof. I know that the original games don't offer you much of a story beyond simply to go rescue the princess from the evil Bowser, but you could have at least offered us SOME backstory as to why the two plumbers are rescuing Peach.

Third of all, and a bit of a personal problem here. If the player of the game makes a mistake, you don't call him out on his stupidity and allow him to go back, you simply write out a proper end scene for the player, which brings me to another problem... do we have infinite lives? Because I just tested it a couple times and it seemed that I did have infinite lives allowing me to restart the game all over again.

I'd say more, but I feel like the pitfalls of the game will be obvious to anyone who plays the actual game. I rate it a 2/8.
-- Claw2k11 on 1/5/2018 9:05:57 AM with a score of 0
I love this story and Mario, but the grammar is a little off.
-- ????? on 11/20/2017 1:16:09 PM with a score of 0
Okay...
-- Missle0945 on 5/4/2017 8:47:30 PM with a score of 0
it was short and sweet
-- dragonrider123 on 3/2/2017 10:09:58 AM with a score of 0
Very short. It's OK, I guess, but it could use a little more work.
-- PokeMaster451 on 1/12/2017 10:49:39 PM with a score of 0
Love Mario, and love this. Well crafted, short when you figure out how to get the ending( that's not bad ) and just a whole lot of fun!
-- Doodler623 on 1/10/2017 10:36:35 PM with a score of 0
great
-- Daniel White on 11/11/2016 11:50:05 AM with a score of 0
errors, short.
-- kain1 on 9/27/2016 10:32:14 AM with a score of 0
This was both enjoyable and cute! So I adored playing this, excellent job.
-- TharaApples on 8/1/2016 7:02:45 PM with a score of 0
I actually found this really cute ^-^
Maybe it was the pictures
Or maybe the writing.
-- Seto on 7/18/2016 2:51:41 AM with a score of 0
This is a great adventure book
-- DomenicTheEnchilada on 9/29/2015 9:58:27 PM with a score of 0
it was okay
-- Davykins on 9/5/2015 3:21:08 PM with a score of 0
The backstory is cheesy...
-- SuperMario on 8/1/2015 6:04:39 AM with a score of 0
Cool
-- DiamondCoder on 7/30/2015 5:23:00 PM with a score of 0
Linear, but at least you had a go. 3/8
-- PortalSpartan on 7/14/2015 11:55:00 PM with a score of 0
At least this story seems happy about itself.
-- MadHattersDaughter on 7/9/2015 1:09:45 PM with a score of 0
It really made me think about my next move, but sometimes involved a bit of trial and error.
-- Blade on 5/25/2015 10:02:22 PM with a score of 0
So boringgggggggggg *falls asleep*
-- AthenaT on 5/19/2015 12:09:45 AM with a score of 0
Gvvr
-- Isanshan on 5/18/2015 12:29:40 PM with a score of 0
eh.....
random great rating! 8/8
-- jaystarthecat on 4/28/2015 11:29:01 PM with a score of 0
Meh, I could use work. otherwise OK.
-- Alexisfly on 4/4/2015 7:52:39 PM with a score of 0
Woo. we're forced to use extra life for an ending. Well unfortunately i did not like how i was told 'stupid'. This site named ChooseYourStory for a reason, you know. 2/8.
-- dehandima on 11/29/2014 3:08:46 AM with a score of 0
okay
-- guyy on 10/29/2014 2:59:37 PM with a score of 0
This was just disgusting. Completely linear, some branches you just wheeled right back around and made me choose the other one. Completely boring, same old save Peach and stop Bowser. Bad grammar and spelling, every sentence was horribly thought out. Bad detail, absolutely nothing had any sort of context or detail. Gosh, I have so much to write but so little motivation. Your method of writing switched every two or so pages, from script to common text. Make up your mind! Scripting was a horrible idea, though, so I don't recommend it. You need to unpublished this atrocity! I don't even believe it can be fixed. You really need to improve on your writing skills if this is all you can come up with. 1/8.
-- Death on 9/22/2014 2:13:19 AM with a score of 0
Okay ! This is a good one !
-- ChibiChu on 8/10/2014 4:25:59 AM with a score of 0
3 words. Linear And Boring
-- bjhovey on 6/21/2014 9:01:08 AM with a score of 0
This is incredibly linear. The grammar is also quite bad.
-- Madbrad200 on 6/19/2014 12:00:29 PM with a score of 0
cool game
-- pie lord on 4/10/2014 1:37:58 PM with a score of 0
It was 'okay'. The description sounded a lot better than the game itself, and there was too much jumping around. I did like the "Extra Life" idea to replace the "Go Back" buttons.
-- AppDude27 on 2/28/2014 12:01:04 PM with a score of 0
Meh it's ok
-- Pluslez on 11/28/2013 11:58:31 AM with a score of 0
Not challenging or original or even all that interesting. *sigh*
-- Kiel_Farren on 9/27/2013 7:22:22 PM with a score of 0
awsome
-- owalton on 4/29/2013 11:18:40 AM with a score of 0
I think it was too easy, but it could be improved by making deaths a little less random and maybe you could make the game a little longer. I finished it in like, literally a minute and 30 seconds.
-- miss_natalo on 3/11/2013 1:53:44 PM with a score of 0
Nice game!
-- danmin on 12/17/2012 8:35:27 PM with a score of 0
... This is a particularly angry Mario >.>
-- Briar_Rose on 11/17/2012 1:45:42 PM with a score of 0
Awesome Does Not Approve!
Really linear, and horribly short. I also falt like it had a lack of action and adventure, and all you had to do was:
1. Fight Bowser. If you die, you keep getting random 1-ups.
2. Save Peach, which really wasn't a task at all, considering we didn't need to do anything, the game did it for us. 2/8. Nice pictures.
-- awesomeness1242 on 6/21/2012 6:50:12 PM with a score of 0
ok I guess
-- betaband on 2/23/2012 9:27:14 PM with a score of 0
I would have liked an ending where I can actually die, but other than that it was a good game.
-- ThisisBo on 11/25/2011 6:29:59 PM with a score of 0
a little fun I quess...
-- Danzis on 8/31/2011 8:21:30 PM with a score of 0
That's A Great Mario Game!
-- meowflash123 on 8/17/2011 12:48:48 PM with a score of 0
pretty good.
-- Killer999 on 5/18/2011 11:36:04 AM with a score of 0
awesome
-- skullkid2802 on 5/15/2011 1:00:32 PM with a score of 0
Short, but it was fun. The pictures were good too.
-- Xoshi on 5/2/2011 12:17:53 PM with a score of 0
Um, even though it was called Mario's Adventure, I realized this time, that Luigi does more in the end,lol! The plot needed some sizing up, it's impossible to follow. S*** just kind of comes out of nowhere.
-- Leon101 on 4/27/2010 4:58:26 AM with a score of 0
The story was rather generic and awfully short. I loved the pictures you chose to go along with the story. Make sure you describe what is going on in fuller detail- people like to be immersed in the story and that helps. Keep up the good work!
-- SoarHighBeFree on 4/11/2010 2:01:51 AM with a score of 0
Eh...erm...ummm. Pretty weak plot there. I...*cough*
-- Melike on 1/4/2009 6:28:34 AM with a score of 0
umm...
-- pickle on 7/25/2008 7:01:33 PM with a score of 0
It was a very good game. Keep it up. However, I found a few spelling mistakes, but that's OK.
-- Conneth on 4/10/2008 11:53:15 PM with a score of 0
I liked the pictures, but otherwise... see all the other comments.
-- Expander on 12/29/2007 1:11:08 PM with a score of 0
Far too generic. The writing is bad, as well as the gameplay. Needs serious work.
-- Waluigi_Freak_99 on 7/4/2007 7:44:26 PM with a score of 0
Fantastic
-- Locky on 6/2/2007 12:45:04 AM with a score of 0
Man... how linear can you get? THERE IS NO POSSIBLE WAY TO LOSE! yeah, mr. infinite extra lives. unoriginal, no detail, crappy descisions, but good pictures. 2/8
-- Rommel on 3/11/2007 6:06:25 PM with a score of 0
You're lucky I'm rating this 3/8. The events were too far apart, the game was linear... the only reason I did'nt give you a one was because of the great pictures.
-- Rommel on 3/11/2007 6:04:06 PM with a score of 0
it sucked [darthvader,s little brother]
-- DarthVader_13 on 3/2/2007 3:31:26 PM with a score of 0
Being a casual Mario fan myself, I found this a bit disappointing. The second and third ones are probably longer and more detailed, though, so I may try them.
-- Sir_Lancegalawain on 12/30/2006 5:14:04 PM with a score of 0
A very easy game that a 7 year old could figure out. I'm sorry if this offends anyone. I'm just saying what I truly feel about the game.
-- SirJustinian on 12/15/2006 9:28:16 PM with a score of 0
Pretty short and unoriginal. I just jumped on a turtle and blasted bowser - a couple links and I was finished.
-- madglee on 12/7/2006 4:08:42 PM with a score of 0
It was alright, make another one and use a really cool original idea.
-- DarthVader_13 on 12/6/2006 10:16:32 PM with a score of 0
It was okay. Needs a few grammatical adjustments though.
-- October on 9/27/2006 9:07:30 AM with a score of 0
Hmmm, some game. Nice pictures.
-- hamburgerfish on 9/15/2006 6:15:52 PM with a score of 0
EASY EASY EASY.
limit the extra-lives next time
-- jorose on 9/10/2006 12:35:17 PM with a score of 0
It's not too hard,fun,but TOO EASY.
-- Nooguhnier on 8/26/2006 8:27:25 PM with a score of 0
Fun game, though a little linear and pretty short. It was still a pretty fun game!
-- Anubis on 8/26/2006 3:13:55 PM with a score of 0
there was very little choice. but it was a decent story.
-- nate on 7/10/2006 5:11:15 PM with a score of 0
Okay for a game about Mario, I guess...
-- Miccy2000 on 4/29/2006 6:44:13 PM with a score of 0
This was really fun... and funny!
-- Dennis on 4/25/2006 9:01:14 PM with a score of 0
It was fun... But dangit, it was TOO short!
-- UltraPhobia on 4/25/2006 1:44:12 PM with a score of 0
Hey this is good. There are multi-paths to go, I didn't know so now I see where bowser cusses. Weird, I don't think he would do that, nor does he have the voice to.
-- leon101 on 3/27/2006 12:50:06 AM with a score of 0
Fun game, and I suggest it. I hate reviews though. Bye.
-- Kevin on 3/25/2006 1:29:47 AM with a score of 0
Played it agained, just because it was that good...well, not the best, but still pretty cool. 5/8. I never saw bowser curse in anyway, I must be blind.
-- leon101 on 1/28/2006 8:55:23 PM with a score of 0
The other 2 are good, but this one is kinda meh
-- Paul on 11/23/2005 11:57:08 AM with a score of 0
This is a very funny game and has many references to other Mario games - i.e. when Mario spins Bowser around, which is from Mario 64, I think. Anyways, a brilliant game - definitely worth a look!
-- Andrew on 10/28/2005 3:32:16 AM with a score of 0
Lovely Game Now Im Going To Play No 2!
-- Yasser on 10/5/2005 3:58:44 PM with a score of 0
it was ok but good job!!!!!!!
-- on 9/26/2005 11:28:31 PM with a score of 0
I rated this down a bit to help the site.
-- Havacoman on 9/25/2005 2:26:22 PM with a score of 0
Hey, that was a great game! I really liked the sprites that you put in. I'm a big fan of Mario personally, so I had to try this game. No Offense, but I think if you're not a Mario fan I wouldn't recommend it. ABSOLUTELY FREAKIN' AWWWEEESOOOOME!!! for mario fans. E-mail me back plz.
-- Casey J. on 9/6/2005 12:39:30 AM with a score of 0
Not bad, especially considering I don't like Mario Games!
-- Sam Jones on 9/3/2005 5:05:15 AM with a score of 0
THIS WAS AWSOME
-- david on 9/3/2005 4:37:50 AM with a score of 0
really easy and childesh
-- richyg92 on 8/19/2005 10:50:58 PM with a score of 0
Cool
-- on 8/15/2005 5:45:33 AM with a score of 0
That was sorta fun
-- Fletcher on 7/22/2005 12:33:51 AM with a score of 0
kinda easy...
-- 1345678987654321 on 6/19/2005 9:07:35 AM with a score of 0
Thank God for extra lives!!!
-- Badger on 5/30/2005 11:22:14 PM with a score of 0
Ok, I LOVED IT! I think it could have been a little longer though. Just a little. Oh, and no offense, but I HATE THE IDEA OF BOWSER CURSING!!!!! Seriously. I mean, what if like a nine-year old played this??? They would see all those asteriks and dollar signs and either they would know Bowser was cursing or they would think it was pretty. And I know that you're free to write whatever you want, but still. Come on. Anyway, good game, gonna play the sequels, and I give it an eight out of ten.
-- Jami on 5/10/2005 10:48:19 PM with a score of 0
Wow. Would've been good if I liked Mario
-- Al on 4/29/2005 3:25:53 PM with a score of 0
Oooh I wish I still had my old school nintendo!
-- Mina on 4/20/2005 9:33:10 PM with a score of 0
That was fun. the animations were great. Mabey you could get a picture of the place they're at.
-- Havacoman on 3/4/2005 11:56:26 PM with a score of 0
The sotries could have been longer and it would be nice to have more options.
-- Gabrielle on 2/19/2005 10:02:44 PM with a score of 0
Lol...
-- MarioVg on 2/6/2005 1:48:33 AM with a score of 0
It was so Awsom Pleas make another one but next time make it more chalenging.

P.S
MAIRO RULESS!!!!!!
-- Jacob on 1/26/2005 8:02:56 PM with a score of 0
fun and short, but that is a good thing becuase i haved to mowe the lawn.
-- leon101 on 8/28/2004 1:58:56 PM with a score of 0
This game was easy but it was fun to and I hope to have others do it. The bowser battle was really fun and it had pictures to show what you did that was cool.
-- Justin Sundgren on 6/26/2004 1:23:08 PM with a score of 0
That was a cool game
-- Joshua on 6/22/2004 10:08:05 AM with a score of 0
Hey! graet game you made a great game great job!
-- Ari on 6/11/2004 8:14:15 PM with a score of 0
I really love mario
-- Ari on 6/2/2004 8:43:34 PM with a score of 0
Funney game and oh yea BLAH
-- grim on 5/26/2004 9:49:40 AM with a score of 0
Way too short and way way too easy.
-- Klecko on 4/30/2004 2:08:17 PM with a score of 0
I like anything with Mario in it.<br>
-- me on 4/3/2004 4:12:15 PM with a score of 0
yay i win!!!!!!!! umm i would probly have to say that this was the stupidest thing ever, it would kind of help if you actually made more than one choice.
-- P FIZZ on 4/2/2004 1:43:45 PM with a score of 0
Jasmine: &#34;Great game! I really loved it!&#34;<br>Kim:&#34;It was just like the gameboy game! It was fun!&#34;
-- Jasmine&Kim on 3/21/2004 7:51:35 PM with a score of 0
Um, sorry, but that was lame.
-- Tom Boot on 2/12/2004 4:43:38 AM with a score of 0
I like the use of sprites but the game was blah!
-- Kidnarc on 2/7/2004 8:12:47 PM with a score of 0
one word, easy!!
-- lildevil0749 on 1/26/2004 12:00:20 PM with a score of 0
a little short. but fun nonetheless
-- steve on 1/7/2004 8:13:41 PM with a score of 0
oh man, i was so sweet at this game.
-- jakeypoo on 12/15/2003 6:00:17 PM with a score of 0
STILL A CLASSIC AT THIS SITE!
-- Daniel on 10/15/2003 7:25:07 PM with a score of 0
KIK ASS! GOOOO LUIGI!
-- Jon on 9/29/2003 9:29:53 PM with a score of 0
Devin just go to my games make an account and the rest is self explainatory later dude<br><br>oh and devin check out my game Shadow X
-- Julious Jay Bradford on 9/21/2003 10:33:51 AM with a score of 0
That was awsome keep it up that was the mast challenging game ever <br><br> P.S. everyone check out my new game Shadow X
-- Julious Jay Bradford on 9/21/2003 10:29:55 AM with a score of 0
Its OK! Good Work.
-- Chris on 8/20/2003 5:53:07 PM with a score of 0
This is the best choose your own adventure of all time. I like Mario more than any other series and I'll never stop liking it!
-- Deven D'Addario on 8/2/2003 5:49:42 PM with a score of 0
Wow....realistic, but not enough choices. Great game :)
-- Alicia on 7/29/2003 1:03:12 PM with a score of 0
Its a nice game. MARIO RULES!!!!!!!!!
-- Nikki on 7/22/2003 1:16:27 PM with a score of 0
I Love Mario This Game Is Cool
-- Zack on 7/4/2003 4:45:49 PM with a score of 0
Your game was too short.
-- MegaManEXE on 6/17/2003 10:29:36 PM with a score of 0
Weird. Just like Super Mario Bros. Where did u get those pictures?
-- sam d on 6/15/2003 12:56:25 PM with a score of 0
that was a cool game. i managed 2 complete it :). 1 thing though. if u do another 1 then make it a bit more longer lol.
-- kieran on 6/5/2003 3:57:18 PM with a score of 0
Kinda short, but wahoo! LUVED IT!
-- Izumi Himiro & Nene Mouri on 5/28/2003 8:40:49 PM with a score of 0
That was a fun game. (I love nintendo)
-- Evil Casio Man on 5/28/2003 6:18:43 PM with a score of 0
I like it
-- speedy on 5/17/2003 2:47:32 PM with a score of 0
Cute game
-- Neeca on 5/10/2003 12:47:32 AM with a score of 0
It's kind of cool, but make it like the games a bit more, and have mazes, and puzzles.
-- Marc on 4/27/2003 4:06:45 PM with a score of 0
great pics but the game was no better than the crono sword...if thats what it takes to be featured tp 5 look out!
-- Billy again on 4/11/2003 11:19:28 PM with a score of 0
if this is one of the best war games...with no guns...guess work....no...
-- Billy on 4/3/2003 10:37:00 AM with a score of 0
Nice Game! Your site is cool too!
-- Stanley the Bugman on 3/28/2003 8:59:52 PM with a score of 0
? This is the game ppl have been raving about???
-- ESRTIOKNE on 2/27/2003 6:09:51 PM with a score of 0
this game was fun. but i think you should make an advanced mario game! like trying to find mushrooms and stuff...
-- zeldaura on 2/24/2003 4:56:50 PM with a score of 0
Good game. Well set. Nice fighting.
-- Blueiniti8er on 2/23/2003 11:49:42 PM with a score of 0
pleas tell me how to make a game
-- devin on 2/21/2003 11:47:00 PM with a score of 0
Very Fun
-- Evan on 2/20/2003 9:20:27 PM with a score of 0
Very Fun
-- Evan on 2/20/2003 9:19:46 PM with a score of 0
this was a nice game but the seconds ones better because it was more challenging for me
-- Golem9633 on 2/20/2003 8:11:17 PM with a score of 0
KOOL! Awesome, too short though. Make a longer one, a #3, i played 2, good job man...
-- jonny on 2/20/2003 4:41:03 PM with a score of 0
Cool game... loved the pictures, awsome game hope you make anotherone<br>
-- Gabi on 2/10/2003 4:00:57 PM with a score of 0
You're game is good as! Can you please E-mail me how to get moving Mario pictures? Thankyou! My game is ISLAND QUEST:Coming soon! From Finn the yoshi freak.
-- Finn the yoshi freak on 2/10/2003 1:58:29 AM with a score of 0
yo! awesome game...make another one! i love maro stuff
-- miachel on 2/4/2003 5:04:47 PM with a score of 0
love it, lil too short
-- Jonathon on 2/3/2003 10:58:07 PM with a score of 0
Great game.<br>I love Mario and Luigi. Where'd you get the pictures?
-- solostrike on 2/3/2003 5:25:41 PM with a score of 0
GREAT GAME!! well thought out and fun! Try this one!
-- march5th00 on 2/2/2003 1:08:00 AM with a score of 0
great game! LA little too short though, make it longer, i love it!
-- David on 2/1/2003 9:10:38 PM with a score of 0
Great Game, i love to see a classic character in a home made game! Nice pictures! Youve defenetly got a skill for this Game Making stuff...
-- Jon on 2/1/2003 8:12:45 PM with a score of 0
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