Player Comments on Mommy, Can I Go Out and Kill Tonight?
General Recommendation: Highly recommended, for its plot and mechanics, and the masterful way in which they are weaved together.
Preview: How will your actions in your daily life and your decision surrounding the return of a ghost from your past affect your destiny?
=SPOILERS BELOW=
General notes:
This is an excellent game on just about every level. The plot is enticing and the concept is original, the characters are all compelling and well-developed, and the game mechanics are excellently coded with virtually no bugs and they work to add to the game’s overall narrative rather than distracting from it. This is one of the few games on the site that has truly mastered balancing story and game elements in a way that make each of them stronger.
Playing as a quasi-reformed cop killer is an intriguing idea, particularly in the CYOA format. We have a character whose life can very easily spiral in a wide variety of directions, perfect for the format. He exists in a state of flux, simultaneously holding onto his past and trying to escape it, with the decisions the player makes bringing him closer to or further from this goal. The player’s final choice seals this decision, but the duality is clear in every moment of gameplay. Storygames work most powerfully when they hinge thematically on a few key character-based conflicts. This game hinges on the narrator’s struggle to leave behind his murderous ways.
Yet this inner conflict blends seamlessly with the action-based problems and dilemmas the narrator faces. It’s all-too-tempting in a game with scripting to focus on the puzzle-y aspects at the expense of the narrative, but this game does not fall into that trip. Every bit of text, right down to the item descriptions, are dripping with character and weight. The “plot-driving” scenes are written well and do not feel seperate from the rest of the game.
The narrator's characterization blends well with the player's agency. Though it's clear the narrator has a strong and well-developed personality of his own, I never felt like he was infringing on my actions or taking over the story. In many games (particularly more narrative-based ones) you have to slide and adjust yourself in order to work with a protagonist who is different than you, but no matter what strategy I took in this game, I felt like I was working with the narrator rather than against him.
This game is most impressive for the wide variety of ways in which it takes full advantage of the CYOA format. The protagonist is a unique and compelling character who couldn’t exist in the same way as a static one, and the puzzles build towards telling a story that could never be conveyed in a linear format. It’s a testament to the versetility and strength of the format, and an incredibly complex and impressive game.
Specific notes:
-On my first playthrough, I’m putting most of my points in Endurance (60, Luck and Intellect are both 20), and selecting the traits Bruiser, Sixth Sense, Street Smart, and Weaponmaster. My experience with RPGs is that an intelligence-based build is best done on a replay when one is already familiar with the game, so I’ll save that for then and focus on strength for now.
-The background doesn’t waste time, and gets straight to the point. Though a little abrupt, I do appreciate the emphasis on action and not focusing on unimportant details, I think that’s more important than a smooth transition.
-Good characterizing and tone-setting opening scene. We start with the narrator in his raw and untamed form, and then he walks us through putting his civilized mask on in his morning routine.
-Room descriptions set the mood well without being overly descriptive and keeping the focus on the action.
-Oho someone’s getting stabbed with that pen aren’t they.
-I weirdly like the detail of the lime green coloration.
-Had to google what a 2005 Scion Xa was. In general, I recommend just describing vehicles in addition to or in replacement of listing their brand, non-car-savvy readers get pulled out of the story otherwise.
-Though I am tempted to throw the pizza in the dumpster, I will hold onto it for now as I suspect it holds the key to victory in this game.
-I like the way item descriptions add to the narrative rather than being simply functional.
-The flashback to the cop killing is integrated smoothly with the narrative.
-The fourth wall break is intriguing here.
-If the decisions surrounding the patients on your rounds turn out to be important, some informational links might be helpful. As someone who’s not actually a medical professional, I’m mostly just guessing what the best way to treat these people is. EDIT: Found the links on the phone, never mind!
-I like the way the confrontation at the end is set up, and though I’ve only played through it once so far (by unsuccessfully attempting to drug the god), I suspect it can be resolved in many different ways with a lot of flexibility.
-First playthrough: Score of 734, “I Try My Best”. Analysis: Based on how I approached gameplay, I should have maxxed my intelligence stats instead of going for strength. None of my abilities were of any use to me. I’m going to try again with different stats and the same strategy and see if it makes a difference. EDIT: No effect.
-Yikes, no endgame link? Boo! Generally it’s pretty poor form not to include an endgame link once gameplay is over. EDIT: Not so bad since dying gives you an endgame link, judgement rescinded. It would still be nice if the “you tried” ending had one, though.
-Being able to lie about having the cop’s gun is an amusing option.
-I like that getting arrested is actually necessary in order to beat the game. The mop puzzles with the cubicles is well done.
Grammar
All good!
I’m not sure “your mind convulsed” is proper grammer.
Mastery of Language
The language shifts between matter of fact and poetic. This is mostly done in a smooth and impressive manner, the only place it felt out of place was in the very first background page.
Mechanics & Coding
Easily one of the best uses of the advanced editor on this site. There’s using the advanced editor and then there’s using it well; anyone can make an item-and-stat-based puzzle game, but not everyone can make an item-and-stat-based puzzle game with narratively satisfying puzzles that actually serve towards building the story rather than simply providing obligatory obstacles for the player to overcome. The context surrounding the acquisition of each of the symbols is not just a sequence of random events, each is linked to an important part of the narrator’s personality, and it’s clear why each action is necessary for the game’s true end.
The use of the symbols to unlock the game’s true ending works well. Once the player has found one symbol they’ll be aware there are others, and having them be items rather than invisible variables makes the player’s progress clear and tangible.
Simultaenously, the puzzles do not block the player from continuing. If you can’t solve the symbol puzzles you’re not at a deadlock, you just don’t unlock the true ending. People can play through this game casually without the frustration of hitting a wall, then return to explore it in more depth.
Branching
This is a linear gauntlet style game (assuming I didn’t miss any major branches), but the excellent use of scripting and items prevents this from being a drawback for choice-seeking players.
Player Options/fair choice
Of the options actually presented, the outcomes are fair and predictable, but what options are presented are heavily dependent on the player’s stats. If the player chooses wisely at the beginning of the game, they’ll be pleased with the options presented, if not, they may feel limited to certain choices.
Nitpicks:
Did throwing the pizza in the dumpster actually do anything or was that just a bit of flavor?
PERSONAL EXPERIENCE:
After playing through multiple times and getting help from a forum thread to find symbol #1 (found the other 3 on my own), I’ve reached the "best" ending, “Angelic Destroyer” with 0 psychosis, 0 psychedelics, and 100 sobriety. Huzzah!
Clearly the best way to play is to max out luck and forget about everything else.
Though I’m certain I’ve by no means explored everything in this game, I think I’ve found most of the mainstream secrets and paths, and this satisfies me for now. I may return later to ensure I haven’t missed anything big.
CONCLUSION: A well-earned 8/8.
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Gryphon
on 4/26/2022 5:41:47 PM with a score of 1000
MCIGOAKT (That works as an acronym, right?) I feel that this is something that is a classic on this site. The reader is introduced to stats and even traits that can compliment those stats that already lets one know that the story is one that can be experienced in a variety of ways. The writing is both gritty and realistic, but it keeps you enamored. The main character is both a flawed individual, and he can be a blank slate enough that you can fill his shoes in ways. However, he does have his own personality, motivations, faults, those he might love and regard in different ways, and we are only influencing a part of his life at a major turn.
You can feel the plight of someone wanting to live some sort on normally, but constantly feeling the dark tug of their past vices that can still seep in into becoming and staying current vices. What i like about this story is that you don't have to play in a perfect manner, it rewards you for wanting to see and experience the different locations that are in this game. This game rewards proper use of items, and you might even have to think more on how to beat it than you might have initially thought.
At the end of the day this story-game is about a flawed man that can either become a better person at the end of it, or a worse one, or not anything as he fails at either. This story-game deserves its featured spot for being a remarkable marvel of how the advanced editor can lift up a story. Although other story-games might have come after all of the years that this game was released (2007) this story still remains a top tier story at the time of this writing. I don't think it's too farfetched to even say that this will remain a good story despite what point of time one might find themselves experiencing it. Stories that are engaging like this one I believe are timeless after all.
Really this is one that is better experienced than simply told about. Mommy, Can I Go Out and Kill Tonight easily deserves your time if you are looking for a story to pass some enjoyable time with.
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TharaApples
on 4/5/2022 9:03:02 PM with a score of 1000
An old story but still one worth reading.
This was probably the first one I read when I first got here and I wasn’t disappointed by it. The use of the stats and items in the story are done well. The writing of course is good. Lots of different choices available and paths to take. It’s definitely expansive in that regard.
The main problems were sometimes the items were a little glitchy and I got caught in a “loop” but that’s a common problem with the item function on here. The “restart links” found in some portions of the story rather than proper ending links are annoying.
In any case it still has stood the test of time and worth a play through. I’m still finding things I hadn’t before in it.
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EndMaster
on 6/23/2018 4:07:15 PM with a score of 521
It’s good but REMEMBER to always get at least 30 intelligence.
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Joejoemamama
on 6/22/2022 5:24:51 PM with a score of 392
Can I use the magic mushrooms and get a good ending?
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PopGoesTheWheasel
on 4/2/2022 10:31:52 AM with a score of 1000
No matter what I try, leon always kills me. WHY??
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CancerTheCrab
on 10/14/2020 11:43:27 PM with a score of 381
Interesting
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— Cool on 5/4/2020 12:37:14 PM with a score of 1000
Really good story, though I still can't figure out what to do with the talisman.
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Bella1963
on 4/28/2020 9:13:00 AM with a score of 1000
pretty hard......
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— laniya on 12/27/2019 2:42:08 PM with a score of 537
I enjoyed this, Not many different choices that I see
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— Zach on 10/2/2019 2:57:45 PM with a score of 259
Its great I didn't even realize this site existed and it may be an old one, but Ill be on it for awhile.
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CableX21
on 9/13/2019 4:14:41 AM with a score of 392
-POSSIBLE SPOILERS WARNING!!!!!-
One of the hardest games I have played if you ask me.
Now, I slowly had to find out how and what by myself, and trying to get the talisman was a struggle.
I can see that there are a lot of people struggling, so I'll just give a hint:
Why not try to kind and try to be creative?
Anyway, I really thought there would be a difference in the ending when you get the talisman, but well, nope.
Still, a good game that makes you replay it a few times until you figure it out.
7/8
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JonesJay41
on 6/23/2019 6:48:44 AM with a score of 1000
Good game.
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Ambi95
on 3/5/2019 10:56:02 PM with a score of 269
Set in St. Louis I see, good choice
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— Anon on 2/18/2019 3:55:56 AM with a score of 350
had to try several times and read a lot of comments to figure out how to get the symbols. feels good when you manage to get the talisman, but i don't think it affects the ending. Maybe more endings exist where it is relevant?
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Nitherion
on 2/8/2019 3:45:54 AM with a score of 1000
Saw this on the Jenna and Julien Podcast and decided to give it a shot, I did way worse than them for sure but still had a lot of fun.
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— Cat on 10/27/2018 3:22:40 AM with a score of 224
very good story, it's a little hard to figure out at first and find all the hidden things. I wish there was a different ending to the story
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— star on 10/26/2018 12:12:57 PM with a score of 1000
def worth the $19.99
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picklejoslyn
on 8/20/2018 3:39:45 PM with a score of 395
it´s a great game!
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— Vera on 7/12/2018 7:31:44 PM with a score of 290
good
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— des on 7/2/2018 4:14:29 AM with a score of 450
do not... underestimate... your cellphone...
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— jae on 6/27/2018 3:22:56 AM with a score of 1000
Absolutely awesome game! Took a few tries, but it was so satisfying to finally get the best score.
*hint* You need all three pieces of /that one object/ to win. If the first one you get is "(2)" its best to just restart.
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— lau on 6/21/2018 5:35:55 PM with a score of 1000
Cool
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— Fay Debaillie on 6/21/2018 1:04:18 PM with a score of 300
I like it. :)
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PinkTinkelbell
on 6/20/2018 1:14:33 PM with a score of 233
I played this years ago and recently found it again due to the Jenna Julien Podcast. I finally completed all the endings!! So exciting!! This story is so interesting, I really enjoyed it.
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— Jane on 6/19/2018 3:34:43 PM with a score of 1000
Confusion....but in a good way.
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— Sarah Grieb on 6/19/2018 2:58:27 PM with a score of 295
it was alright
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— me on 6/19/2018 2:14:31 PM with a score of 350
it was good, i liked the many details that were added. it was intresting and good.
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— Olivia on 6/18/2018 11:57:32 PM with a score of 225
Really innovative. Thought it had a great storyline.
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Vivid_Dreaming24
on 6/18/2018 9:11:41 PM with a score of 290
I would say this plays a little bit like a mystery. The object appears to be to solve the clues in order to assemble the Talisman / arrive at a 'successful' ending. As far as I can tell, the character build doesn't impact your ability to do that. You can ignore the advice the creator gives to make sure your stats match your traits.
Specific character builds are only needed to open up side plots.
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Symphony
on 5/24/2018 2:14:13 PM with a score of 1000
I think the first half of the storyline is great. A bunch of choices to go with, and a bunch of hidden parts and important choices that really affect the second half. In my opinion though, the second part was really forced and short in length. I may have gotten the best ending that's existing right now, but it doesn't feel like one, you know? The Talisman seems very useless, and I wish it would've had more involvement in the story. If more diverse endings exist, I think I would've liked it. Overall, I had fun. I loved the story, but I wished it had more content, as it felt rushed. I have noticed that other authors on this website do a lot better job at the endings, and I hope to find more improvement in future projects. I would rate the difficulty in excellence, because while the story is short, I loved the amount of attention to detail must be put in your decisions.
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— ZilexRed on 5/8/2018 12:29:50 PM with a score of 1000
too hard, can i request a walkthrough
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— saltyandsour on 12/21/2017 1:11:33 PM with a score of 235
I couldn’t stop playing until I found out how to get the Talisman. Instantly changed the whole game itself.
Very well assembled CYOA novel. A little weird, no doubt, but well assembled indeed.
Rivals that of a Reese’s Cup®
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JonathantheEthereal
on 11/16/2017 12:18:27 AM with a score of 1000
This is absolutely amazing! Every part is short, sweet and to the point, and I played this so fucking many times!!!!
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Jesza
on 11/10/2017 7:59:49 AM with a score of 344
why would you add a talisman option if it has nothing to do with the ploT
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— MegaUltraChicken on 9/27/2017 10:05:44 PM with a score of 551
Still died, damn!
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MrSnuggles
on 9/15/2017 4:18:27 AM with a score of 365
Excellent editing, the visuals were detailed even without pictures the images you portrayed through words gave me the sense that I was seeing, tasting, smelling, hearing, and touching things in person. Well done, you should be proud of yourself!
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MrSnuggles
on 9/14/2017 8:52:41 PM with a score of 1096
Damn that talisman was hard to figure out
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DarkEagle4050
on 8/2/2017 10:47:33 PM with a score of 1000
This book was fantastic! I really liked how I was backstabbed by my friend Leon! Jesus, I swear in my next life I'm going to put poison in his beer. Otherwise, I really liked this book and the plot line was kewl!
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— them action expert on 6/4/2017 1:12:04 PM with a score of 360
The Talisman was arbitrary and didn't change anything. The second half of the story was too forced, it should have changed with your earlier decisions like the first half. Also too short.
Overall it was very entertaining but a lot of potential was wasted.
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— Angelic Destroyer on 4/4/2017 5:44:51 PM with a score of 1000
Yay, best ending and 1000 points. Also loved the Baldur's Gate reference.
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aartbastiaan
on 2/23/2017 12:25:44 PM with a score of 1000
1000 beat that
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zavcex
on 1/12/2017 3:10:44 AM with a score of 1000
Great work. Very complex and enticing.
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SophiaDragonHart
on 11/8/2016 11:14:53 PM with a score of 1000
This is a very addicting game
I really enjoyed it
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DoomTomb56
on 11/2/2016 6:05:39 AM with a score of 1000
I had no idea what the Talisman did, nor did I know how to get 1000 points. Still a great story overall, though. 6/8
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DaHatedHaterdatHates
on 9/18/2016 5:19:49 PM with a score of 930
925 Angelic Destroyer!
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BigRonn77
on 8/31/2016 10:11:52 AM with a score of 925
Played the game many times but wasn't able too get 1000pts. Anyway, my last game score is not bad but I still don't know the use of the talisman. :D
Your total score is 956 out of 1000
Your title is "Angelic Destroyer"
You achieved the best ending.
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SimplyKatie
on 5/25/2016 12:54:43 AM with a score of 956
Best game I won 1000/1000 plz mak longer
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— Marshy on 5/1/2016 1:47:35 PM with a score of 1000
Finally get the best ending. Woot! This is really fun!
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IceQueen
on 4/30/2016 8:16:07 AM with a score of 1000
woot, 1000 outta 1000
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— aadfg on 3/27/2016 3:57:43 PM with a score of 1000
Yay finally 1000 points. 7/8
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CurseOfTime
on 3/20/2016 1:28:07 PM with a score of 1000
I keep getting the worst ending ;-;
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Sakurachan1
on 2/16/2016 12:18:02 PM with a score of 320
That was awesome. It took me quite a few times to find everything and get the best ending, and I enjoyed every one of them. Well done.
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aartbastiaan
on 1/15/2016 2:58:13 PM with a score of 1000
Keep getting killed by Leon at Serge's house...
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drewfus813
on 1/12/2016 11:57:23 AM with a score of 692
A riveting story that constantly picks your brains and beckons you to continue no matter how many times you fail. The devil is in the details
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ketienya
on 1/6/2016 2:53:52 AM with a score of 785
Just finished this great story and now I have no idea what to do with my speeding ticket.
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ario
on 11/29/2015 2:21:41 PM with a score of 1000
What do the 'strange artifacts' do after you get them back from Korgan?
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jason1stlegion
on 11/4/2015 9:39:11 PM with a score of 1000
Please make a walkthrough!!! I can't seem to get the good ending. I played it loads of times and can't seem to get it right. :(
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— Angela on 10/17/2015 2:03:25 PM with a score of 592
it was fun
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— someboody on 10/6/2015 8:38:30 PM with a score of 242
Had to start over multiple times to get the good ending. This was a fun challenge.
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inker2011
on 8/14/2015 2:29:23 PM with a score of 1000
Aww mannn, I know that I'm one of many who have already said this but this game is really a CYOA masterpiece. I mean, it's just the only thing I can say. My only problem would be the presumed uselessness of the talisman, I mean, have I just not discovered its use yet or what?
But otherwise, really great game here. I personally wish that we could have gotten to know Stacey better and to know the possible consequences of the last possible interaction between her and the protagonist,, but that's just me.
8/8, though.
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DashingDeer
on 8/5/2015 10:31:03 AM with a score of 1000
GR8 M8!
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— A guy on 7/22/2015 4:31:26 PM with a score of 245
Yes.
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Tim36D
on 7/19/2015 6:21:46 AM with a score of 1000
Great story,
The Angel of Death
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— apocalypticTsunami on 6/19/2015 6:58:58 PM with a score of 1000
i try multiple time but in the end i still don't know the use of the talisman
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— anontheanon on 6/14/2015 11:34:54 AM with a score of 1000
This game just keeps getting better.
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TheNewIAP
on 6/10/2015 1:23:51 PM with a score of 1000
Well done overall, but falls short of its potential. Several problems: the path of the story seems circumscribed, there was no real decision on weapon usage and tactics (thus not much of a game portion), some traits were a LOT more useful than others etc. Overall it was still a very good story.
However, two real big problems exist, that stop me from giving an 8/8. They are (1) the uselessness of the amulet, and (2) the fact that making rational decisions does not result in a normal/realistic "boring" ending.
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cavalier
on 4/10/2015 7:30:26 AM with a score of 929
It was okay, but I was honestly expecting more.
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nanayoung
on 3/27/2015 7:37:24 PM with a score of 1000
I got Premature Death, and really don't want to go back and redo the story. (Sorry). But hey, I did like the game!
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WaRDude999
on 2/20/2015 3:33:00 PM with a score of 371
Awesome. Tried many times, before looked the comments. Finished, with Merciless Killer.
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Garuda120
on 2/13/2015 4:19:20 AM with a score of 771
Good game
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— Nigg on 2/7/2015 7:59:04 AM with a score of 322
It's pretty good, just too short! Also, I didn't really use some of my skills at all, and it went just fine, but as for other skills, I had to depend on them...a lot. Maybe it should be more balanced? Oh well, that's not my main concern. It really should be longer though.
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EvangelineV
on 1/24/2015 6:31:42 PM with a score of 1000
was definitely interesting, would play again
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— Mario on 1/16/2015 12:19:58 AM with a score of 850
Why is the significance of the talisman not explained in any way?played it loads and i want to know what the dwarf thing was all about. Someone tell me pleeeaaaze!im literally begging here.ok. im begging i hope that makes you happy that iv been reduced to this.
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gravy
on 1/7/2015 7:35:20 AM with a score of 865
Finding the talisman did not give me a different ending. Disappointing as its an otherwise amazing game.
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gravy
on 1/4/2015 9:18:18 AM with a score of 861
I cannot for the life of me find out how to get the talisman. I can tell the dwarf has it, but I don't know what he wants from me. I've tried multiple different things and the furthest I can get is killing or sparing Leon.
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— Natty on 11/28/2014 11:42:29 PM with a score of 450
It was fun
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— Jessie Lydy on 11/23/2014 8:11:31 PM with a score of 264
This was hard, and really interesting, but there are bugs when the policeman searches you, and the talisman was rather pointless.
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— Loki on 11/19/2014 4:22:03 PM with a score of 1000
What an absolutely bizzare game. Great humor, nice puzzle-elements, and just insane overall. The end-scene felt a bit rushed, but the final pages felt very rewarding anyway.
Really glad that I read this over again. Additionally, the website really does put forth an interesting light about the mysterious talisman(s). I wonder if you're ever going to write another story relating to them, since you seem to have several write-ups on them already.
Regardless of association, I hope you write more story-games, since this was a lot of fun.
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Tanstaafl
on 11/11/2014 9:24:58 PM with a score of 1000
Games way too short i think but then again i got the angelic ending
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— Bob on 10/31/2014 11:34:37 AM with a score of 1000
I thought it was interesting. the background story was superb and the plotline decent. However I thought the characters were lackluster, the swearing overused,and the cops unrealistic. No cop is gonna arrest you for swearing at him or my dad would have been arrested long ago. Overall score 7/8. This is probably only my fourth favorite game on the site. Sorry but that's my opinion and I'm not gonna change it.
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mokaevans
on 10/28/2014 12:57:09 AM with a score of 1000
Oh, this was such a fun adventure story. It's very hard finding stories like this these days. You, my friend, are an excellent writer. Job well done! I enjoyed it to no end. In fact I'm gonna go play it again (And again and again... and again and probably one more time... Until my thirst is satisfied) *Grins Devilishly*
ThanQ so much!!!
Keep up the great job!
Take Care, mate.
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— Timmy on 10/11/2014 1:41:32 PM with a score of 803
I have noticed a fandom to which I cannot be a part of due to my inability to get anything other than the worst ending. I don't see, what be be obvious to others, signs of improvement. I just don't. So I suppose I am stuck with my 538 score until I figure out how to not be killed in Serge's house, or at least not have to deal with Leon.
If there are any suggestions, any detailed one for the game, I will greatly appreciate it.
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— MikeNIke sweet on 9/20/2014 4:20:21 PM with a score of 668
Awesome story. But literally took me forever to beat the game. Lol, ten to twenty tries are no exaggeration. But just a question, how do you use the amulet after you finish it?
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Lightmoon54
on 8/29/2014 11:12:40 AM with a score of 741
Very good. I noticed what appears to be an on-page scripting error when you use the phone to call your girlfriend. Aside from that, I have no complaints. 8/8.
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jamescoker1226
on 6/15/2014 2:22:56 PM with a score of 1000
This was really fun.
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— A Ronnebaum on 6/9/2014 9:29:14 AM with a score of 245
great story
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Bak2baraX
on 5/30/2014 3:21:20 PM with a score of 1000
Lame. There was no option not to help leon so no option not to die. Weak.
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trendsexual
on 5/21/2014 1:18:33 PM with a score of 364
Awesome! i finally managed to achieve best ending! the talisman was tricky, but i finally got it!:D if anyone needs help beating this, let me know!
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DarianF
on 5/11/2014 10:10:41 PM with a score of 1000
1000/1000! Best Ending Ever!
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SomeGuyNamedBob
on 4/24/2014 1:50:37 PM with a score of 1000
With a plethora of pathways, this well-written and engaging story was quite fun! Descriptive with interesting characters, plentiful items, and great replay value. Thanks for a phenomenal game!
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mek7
on 4/17/2014 1:03:52 PM with a score of 935
Took me forever (5 run-throughs or so) to find the first talisman...shame on me for overlooking it so many times. Got 1000 on the first try though, just by doing what made the most sense...
Fun game! I loved picking my stats and traits.
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— RainbowPaintbrush on 2/25/2014 6:25:19 PM with a score of 1000
Great story, very fun!
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— Nick on 1/16/2014 1:00:14 PM with a score of 404
Good game. The ending surprised the hell out of me though
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— James on 11/7/2013 10:07:49 PM with a score of 700
Great job! :D
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ssj3gohan007
on 10/15/2013 12:05:40 PM with a score of 1000
The story was just great :O Even though I can't understand how anyone got a 1000, I still thoroughly enjoyed myself with my buddy Mr. Pointy :P
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Niehm
on 7/15/2013 6:41:49 AM with a score of 971
Wow, wasn't expecting it to end like that!! Guess I should have had a drink on the plane, oh well next time.
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mchthp
on 6/29/2013 8:29:03 PM with a score of 375
It is creative but much shorter than I would have liked. It's only long because you have to fund the Talisman which is a 3 piece amulet and you get it through being creative in the world. it was a letdown for me.
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JCool
on 5/29/2013 9:29:46 PM with a score of 1000
Fantastic game! I was a bit disappointed when I realized that having the talisman didn't actually have an effect on the ending, but it was still a very enjoyable play through.
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AspiringAuthorCook
on 5/20/2013 5:27:18 PM with a score of 955
took me a while but i got the perfect ending lol the tirck was the first secret item
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bfkinf
on 5/17/2013 1:32:32 AM with a score of 1000
It was a good story, but I have no clue as to how to get past the confrontation at Serge's house
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Rossatronix
on 5/13/2013 1:48:30 PM with a score of 320
I had the worst ending but enjoyed it, very good game and definitely one of the best I have played on the site.
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Jgraeme1979
on 5/10/2013 1:33:10 AM with a score of 234
pretty legit
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will
on 4/30/2013 5:32:09 PM with a score of 1045
fun. but i died gotta go back.
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mrannihalator
on 4/18/2013 5:36:01 PM with a score of 319
Wow! I finally got the best ending, although it's not as happy as I would've thought.
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— Adam on 4/11/2013 3:05:24 AM with a score of 1000
Nice story. Was less dark than I expected after reading the description, which is both relieving and slightly disappointing at the same time.
However, I don't see the how the symbols affect the story despite getting all 3.
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Telwyn
on 3/11/2013 8:35:18 AM with a score of 1000
I really can't beat this game.
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toni
on 3/7/2013 10:25:20 PM with a score of 394
This game was very fun. Got all three symbols, but I never got to use the talisman. I am curious about its use, but other than that, the game was a pretty fun way to spend 15 minutes.
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Uhebav
on 1/17/2013 7:38:04 PM with a score of 1000
Hooray! Got the best ending ^^ Awesome story =D
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Rayven22
on 1/11/2013 8:00:27 PM with a score of 1000
I loved this game. Difficult, and constantly challenging, it's probably one of the best games on the site. A difficult game, (especially since I needed help from the author) but the difficulty adds to the experience. 8/8
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Aman
on 1/3/2013 9:53:58 PM with a score of 1000
might be some spoilers,so stay away those who haven't played.
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I played through it 2 times and found it to be quite good,however both the time I got sprayed by a mp5. the secondd time I got symble 2 and 3,but no idea about how to get the first one?and the cops gun too.tis a pretty awsome game,although I wouldn't mind some pointers.:D
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grryfindore
on 12/14/2012 12:29:43 AM with a score of 713
Great Game. Took like 10 tries to figure out Symbol Piece one, but I finally got it.
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— Anon on 11/27/2012 12:43:08 PM with a score of 1000
MAKE MORE! OH MY GOD THIS IS MY FAVORITE GAME! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE MORE!!! 8/8
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haledakota
on 9/13/2012 6:10:16 PM with a score of 342
Finally got 1000 out of 1000. Love the title. Fun game. :)
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Kiel_Farren
on 9/7/2012 2:52:23 AM with a score of 1000
well, i got the "premature ending". but i suppose practice makes perfect and i'll have another go!
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mort_love
on 8/21/2012 5:06:54 PM with a score of 313
awesome-sauce, it just took me... 5 tries to get the talisman pieces. wow
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MajestyofTime
on 7/21/2012 6:09:26 PM with a score of 1000
Try, try again. 1000/1000!
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madglee
on 7/8/2012 9:48:08 PM with a score of 1000
Good game, engaging story
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Xt1000305
on 6/18/2012 4:35:25 AM with a score of 707
Cool game, I would have wanted more choices in certain moments.
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Insanity66
on 3/5/2012 11:48:20 AM with a score of 533
I wish it was longer, I was really getting into it.
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— Charles on 3/3/2012 4:11:08 AM with a score of 735
Bo Approves.
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— ThisIsBo on 2/6/2012 2:38:48 AM with a score of 758
Very nice indeed
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RajR
on 2/4/2012 10:23:09 PM with a score of 516
it was ok
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bud3r64
on 2/4/2012 5:52:42 PM with a score of 783
Actually a pretty good game! Nice to see that the inventory and game-style of the story didn't go out of hand. An extremely good implementation of it, actually.
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bravetheheat
on 1/30/2012 7:26:38 AM with a score of 1000
Interesting ending, i think this story has alot of potential to be great. I would love to see an alternative side to this story.
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Meriko
on 1/30/2012 4:18:27 AM with a score of 769
Amazing. Definite 8/8 storygame.
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applegirl
on 1/15/2012 2:26:42 AM with a score of 1000
Really good, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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written_agreement
on 1/12/2012 3:59:51 PM with a score of 809
Smoothest running game I've seen so far - very well put together!
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BerkaZerka
on 12/27/2011 12:26:39 AM with a score of 1000
Sweet!
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jcam
on 12/20/2011 2:46:56 PM with a score of 859
Good, good.
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— safsdafdsaf on 11/30/2011 6:39:22 PM with a score of 748
That was amazing! I was so love choice games and that one was so graphic it was almost like you were actually there. I loved all three endings endings and you had to actually think about your decisions. Please make more games like this one.
Thank you,
Kitty
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— Katherine on 11/10/2011 9:31:15 PM with a score of 897
Playing through this storygame on lunch during a very stressful day at work provided the same sort of relief one gets from running down the streets of a popular series of games with a baseball bat. Only this is so much more personal and dark. Bravo! So well written!
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oldmankatan
on 11/1/2011 2:24:08 PM with a score of 582
I thought the story was very well-written (I expected a parade of typos, haha) and interesting. I still haven't been able to end it on a good note, though. So far I keep getting killed and it's pissing me off! Not the creator's fault though, obviously.
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— kelly on 10/27/2011 1:41:25 AM with a score of 319
A nice story line with some clever uses of objects. I highly recommend!
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Popgills
on 10/10/2011 5:16:57 PM with a score of 788
I was expecting a serial killing game to be honest... But this game was damn good. To be fair I usually rate fives, I meant to click seven. Shit happens. :)
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— DLove on 9/25/2011 12:29:05 AM with a score of 1000
Damn. I got the worst ending. But awesome game though. I was expecting Leon to do something sooner or later...
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angelofthefallen
on 8/30/2011 2:43:17 PM with a score of 422
I really really liked this!! it was really intriguing and i even learned a bit from it XD i got the best ending ;D ^_^Nicely done! Well written!!!
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ChaiHai
on 8/30/2011 1:32:34 AM with a score of 1000
i loved this story
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DarkentityOni
on 8/24/2011 11:20:44 PM with a score of 768
Very intriguing storyline! It would be interesting to see a prequel to this story, explaining the hints that were given to his past.
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bereothien
on 8/15/2011 9:22:42 PM with a score of 804
Only four accomplishments? I thought I would have gotten more. 10 psychosis, 5 psychedelic, and 45 sobriety. I drank all the beer at the airport when he needed to confiscate it, haha. Excellent story. One of my favorites.
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bucket
on 7/27/2011 7:11:22 PM with a score of 759
I love Mr. Pointy. Me and him had some times
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playa988
on 7/17/2011 9:45:05 AM with a score of 949
Cool, best ending first try!
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giamonic
on 7/6/2011 9:16:58 PM with a score of 738
Awesome story, surprised it didn't take that long to get the best ending.
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RenHaru
on 5/28/2011 11:17:11 PM with a score of 928
best fuckin game
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shaq
on 5/21/2011 2:53:16 PM with a score of 506
Amazing game! I loved the use of the items, very well done!
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MethodKid
on 5/10/2011 3:54:10 PM with a score of 1000
Best ending! Yay!
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— Jim Salary Man on 5/8/2011 7:38:24 PM with a score of 938
Yay - Replay = 1000/1000!
Angelic Destruction - on a load of cops.
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Forge
on 5/5/2011 2:07:15 PM with a score of 1000
Nice game, nice plot.
Nice endings.
Now I'll play it again.
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Forge
on 5/5/2011 1:48:53 PM with a score of 933
Wow. I have to go back and try for other endings. That was very fun, but now, I must get some sleep. I think teh story was well-developed, and the characters were enjoyable to the end.
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jkulibert2
on 5/3/2011 10:39:36 PM with a score of 733
Bo approves, mostly because he got the best ending
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ThisisBo
on 5/2/2011 11:01:15 PM with a score of 883
Awesome!
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— Ben Holman on 4/16/2011 1:31:42 PM with a score of 493
Great story...Could you help me with mine???
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DRBickham
on 4/9/2011 1:28:33 AM with a score of 663
This is the best game on the site!!!
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— xeroxin on 4/1/2011 4:28:58 PM with a score of 1000
What a great game! I can't think of words to describe this game. I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading, and it was far better than what I was expecting it to be. Great job!
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snyper1107
on 3/29/2011 10:30:00 AM with a score of 778
Incredible! Unbelievably immersing! Unsurpassed in entertainment value! Words seem inadequate to describe the sheer delight of playing this game!
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DWolfe1990
on 3/25/2011 12:17:31 AM with a score of 763
Soo fun :D
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— Jon on 3/16/2011 8:12:14 PM with a score of 763
wow! infinitly better than i anticipated. and i expected something pretty good to start with. I felt pro this was my first run through
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ugilick
on 3/13/2011 11:46:52 PM with a score of 1000
BEST GAME EVER
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CrapMan
on 2/24/2011 2:54:30 PM with a score of 804
It took me about twenty tries, but I got the "best ending." I hadn't thought of hitting somebody in the head with a cell phone.
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joshdragon
on 1/19/2011 7:28:27 PM with a score of 888
My page screwed itself at a crucial moment and I thought I'd pay for it. Then I got the best ending. All in all, a great story.
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Xanatos
on 1/11/2011 9:48:43 AM with a score of 1000
Amazing. I got a score of 600 and died a brutal death. Gonna play it again straight away!
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JoeDude
on 1/8/2011 6:49:36 PM with a score of 600
I enjoyed the overall game engine, especially the inventory integration. This was an intriguing and fun play.
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theryanlee
on 12/18/2010 3:17:40 AM with a score of 758
what a game!
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— weng on 11/28/2010 4:31:03 AM with a score of 783
i finished the game for the 600th or so time and i killed everybody i possibly could, SPOILER ALERT RIGHT AFTER THIS.i killed: the cops, leon,and serges army
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— spencer on 11/22/2010 12:25:51 PM with a score of 1000
Marvellous, beautiful. What I'd like to see is a walkthrough or thorough FAQ to this - I'm wondering what the items I didn't use may good for and what other ways there are to take but don't find the time to go through this 50 times trying out every last possibility.
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— quaker on 11/15/2010 4:03:32 PM with a score of 640
I found it to be a very phenomenal story, I was very supervised and engaged by how such minor decisions like drinking beer and downing pills would have such an impact on the story. Loved it. 8/8
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Greencloud
on 11/14/2010 6:08:13 PM with a score of 854
A superb story with plenty of replay value.
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Loon
on 10/19/2010 9:03:45 PM with a score of 626
Love it!
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Feiti
on 10/14/2010 11:11:10 AM with a score of 1000
A good game. I got the best ending! :D
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Carter12
on 10/9/2010 3:38:55 PM with a score of 1000
so badass! 10/10 thanks!
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— pomegralice on 10/7/2010 9:18:00 AM with a score of 588
I pity the drug addict who doesn't like this.
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fish
on 10/1/2010 10:40:19 PM with a score of 783
There are so many fun and interesting choices in the game. This game makes me want to play over and over again.
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TiChan
on 10/1/2010 2:14:53 PM with a score of 1000
Still my favorite! Hope it's back up to 8 now since I'm using a different computer... wait, never mind, same IP. Crap!
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jeff-backup
on 9/18/2010 9:35:53 AM with a score of 804
Hmm, I forgot some secrets to the point where I didn't get a perfect score. Nice. A pity some asses decided to purposely rate this low so it wouldn't be an 8, as it has been for 4 years. Still fun. Try to figure out how to build Mr. Pointy and kill cops!
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madglee
on 9/5/2010 2:47:58 PM with a score of 950
I don't see why some jealous loser could bring this, the best story on the site, down to a seven. I don't even see how someone couldn't bring themselves to rate it an 8. BEST STORY EVER, although it took me a while to figure out how to get the best ending. I guess cell phones aren't as useless as I thought. Excellent work madglee. I take back what I said about JFP, haha. Best game on the site, my new favorite, and I hope my 8 brought it back up to immortality. I'm still speechless.
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Jeff
on 9/1/2010 10:07:49 AM with a score of 784
Really great Storygame. It had a great story and game mechanics.
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xDante
on 8/29/2010 12:23:11 AM with a score of 231
I didn't really think the length was long enough to warrant the length it gave here. But anyway, amazing game.
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NeedleKnife
on 8/16/2010 3:14:33 AM with a score of 904
THE BREAKDOWN:
0 out of 100: Your level of psychosis
0 out of 10: Your psychedelic state
100 out of 100: Your level of sobriety
Your total score is 959 out of 1000
Your title is "Angelic Destroyer"
You achieved the best ending.
Awesome :D
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crazy-gaemer
on 8/8/2010 8:23:28 AM with a score of 959
Great game. I got the merciless killer ending. The only problem I had was that sometimes there weren't very many options, but I found the story so gripping that it didn't matter much.
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— ZY on 7/25/2010 11:21:52 PM with a score of 788
Very awesome. Definitely worth playing.
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— stirlock on 6/24/2010 12:58:29 AM with a score of 822
I just scored 1000!
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Old_Zangeif
on 6/13/2010 5:28:37 PM with a score of 1000
Wow. I'm sorry I waited so long to play this game (didn't think it would be a good idea to play at work) because it's really impressive and complex. Love the statistics and the use of the character sheet to track them and your accomplishments; it's a big turn-off when I start a game and discover I have to keep track of a lot of stats by hand.
Also liked that the correct choices are NOT random; they make a lot of intuitive sense and aren't left up to chance like picking which door leads to the exit and which leads to instant death.
Of course, now I'm going back and going to make horrible choices to see the bad endings... Great work!
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mandichaos
on 5/9/2010 12:13:22 AM with a score of 1000
nice game. :) i like it
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— adam on 3/20/2010 3:17:19 AM with a score of 738
Good story, I got the best ending with around 850 points. I wonder how to get the full 1000 haha anyways great game keep up the good work!
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iprototype
on 2/22/2010 10:26:11 PM with a score of 829
Not as big as described, but it's great! Keep it up!
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— rohitrocka on 2/6/2010 12:52:16 AM with a score of 859
I have no clue how long just the small part of the story that I finished took to make, but I'd still like to see a longer version. It is an excellent, well thought out story in my opinion. Keep up the great work!
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akjhurg
on 1/25/2010 2:04:49 AM with a score of 1000
A pretty good game!
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— Afen on 1/10/2010 3:37:12 PM with a score of 759
It was pretty sweet. Wonder how to get a score of 1000, though.
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— Orinks on 12/31/2009 1:02:04 AM with a score of 714
Excellent. Good character development, the story requires some thought to beat, and in general awesome. It seems a little short, but that's mostly because it is that good that I didn't want it to end.
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Trzcina
on 12/24/2009 10:32:46 PM with a score of 809
THIS GAME IS THE BEST I LOVE IT all i want is more traits to choose and more options with the items
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— ramsey on 9/29/2009 2:56:01 PM with a score of 1000
This is awesome
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urnam0
on 9/9/2009 12:52:27 AM with a score of 700
Great game! Frustrating at times, but the best ones always are.
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soylentg231
on 4/24/2008 10:31:32 PM with a score of 1000
it was AWESOME i got best ending, i wish it was longer
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kidgav
on 4/20/2008 10:28:49 PM with a score of 938
Poo, premature finisher. God I suck.
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Expander
on 2/10/2008 7:28:48 PM with a score of 220
how do i get the cops gun in the holding cells? i got mr pointy but thats the only weapon i found there
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jakster
on 12/16/2007 2:42:12 PM with a score of 890
great story really fun
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GreatLichLord
on 12/10/2007 1:06:44 AM with a score of 860
This is brilliant! Plot, characters, detail, writing skill, level of choice... I can't fault it on anything. I love it!
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Twiggy
on 11/30/2007 9:32:46 AM with a score of 1000
This game rocks!
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IceFireKirby
on 10/15/2007 4:37:17 PM with a score of 1000
i finialy got the 1000 points
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— geeky nerd on 9/16/2007 11:04:10 PM with a score of 1000
I understand now why so many people claim this to be the greatest story on the site. There were a few typo errors (like using the word either when you meant neither ("either am I") and such). There were a few parts where the freedom of the story was rather limited and streamlined, but otherwise this was an excellent story and an excellent read.
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donteatpoop
on 9/9/2007 7:25:34 PM with a score of 553
What an amazing game.I finally got round to playing it and i wish i had done it sooner
Kinda reminds me of the Lone Wolf Series.
I got the Ending: Angelic Destroyer
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Xfire
on 8/28/2007 8:03:10 AM with a score of 889
i've played before.....nothings changed. this game still rules
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deadly_sinner66
on 7/2/2007 4:12:37 PM with a score of 854
I finally got 1000! Awesome game madglee, it's freaking amazing. Great job!
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DarthVader_13
on 6/6/2007 1:00:25 AM with a score of 1000
i played the game again got 1000/1000. this game rules!!! you should make it longer tho. 8/8
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— sloth on 6/4/2007 7:32:29 PM with a score of 1000
This game fucking rules! i am gonna pkay it all night
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— sloth on 6/4/2007 1:29:41 AM with a score of 606
Freakin' Awesome...
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TheMagicDude
on 5/26/2007 3:15:40 PM with a score of 588
That was a damn fun game. Too bad I got the worst ending. Heheh.
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— Jake on 5/25/2007 11:09:11 PM with a score of 395
Yaaay I'm merciless
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Jimi_the_Z
on 5/21/2007 9:49:47 AM with a score of 538
WOW.
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primates
on 5/17/2007 7:05:47 PM with a score of 759
Cool, Its like a Tarentino movie
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— Chris on 4/2/2007 11:49:19 PM with a score of 488
this is truly the best /short/ story i have ever read. it only takes around 20-30 min. to finish but is really immersive. great job Baltz!
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— Barden on 4/2/2007 4:44:02 PM with a score of 707
Is this the highest score?
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Rommel
on 3/30/2007 10:47:10 PM with a score of 1000
I did better this time!
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DarthVader_13
on 3/21/2007 6:53:08 PM with a score of 984
My god, this was better than mattias the one knight,(No offence JJJ)8/8, not questions asked.
FYI: I got the best ending.
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SilverMan
on 3/21/2007 5:37:09 PM with a score of 869
I got 829, "Angelic destroyer" the way to raise your psycedelic state to 100 is to kill Leon.
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Rommel
on 3/21/2007 3:04:21 AM with a score of 829
Definetly a game up there, its so cool im definetly replaying this one...
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— tgan on 3/19/2007 6:27:31 AM with a score of 937
Greatl! This games is definetly one of the best
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th*mage*of*kings
on 3/11/2007 12:18:55 PM with a score of 371
This game is awesome, man. Definently an 8.
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DarthVader_13
on 3/7/2007 6:32:15 PM with a score of 778
Wow- this game lives up to the hype! Fantastic use of items, variables, great storytelling and multiple endings.
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Sethaniel
on 2/15/2007 7:18:45 PM with a score of 730
Absolutely incredible. This is a must-play!
The writing is riveting (well done!) and the game play is very transparent. An impressive feat, especially considering how open-ended the storygame is. I'm going to run through again later (if only I didn't have to go to work now).
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alexp
on 2/10/2007 12:28:00 PM with a score of 321
Good writing, Good Story, I'm not sure if I liked the vulgar shock factor but I admit it was graphic enough to put me in the story. I was confused at one point but it's a plot spoiler so I'll ask later. I need t play again.
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chocobot
on 2/8/2007 12:07:31 PM with a score of 1000
wow, what an emotional rush! that was great. there were a few grammatical errors. but very minimal. the complexity, the involvement, the whole thing was engaging. the best part of this story is the detail that you put into the character sheet. that was brilliant.
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Fleshnblood_78
on 2/2/2007 6:32:59 PM with a score of 549
Amazing game, awesome storyline, and wonderful gameplay. Everything was well planned and well made. Good job.
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Cake
on 1/29/2007 6:15:48 PM with a score of 360
Fun. This time I took more drugs.
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Nyarlathotep
on 1/29/2007 3:07:13 PM with a score of 1000
Hey, I finally found this thing. You kept babbling about it but never told me the URL. Dumbass. Anyway, great story. As always, I'm in awe of your writing ability.
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Nyarlathotep
on 1/29/2007 1:06:01 PM with a score of 652
This was extremely entertaining several times through. The descriptive writing painted the story so thoroughly I felt as if I was watching an interactive movie. When I thought I could predict the next catastrophe, a vivid spin kept me intrigued. Well done! Waiting for the next eloquent piece of chaos and mayhem. Strong!
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Apeiron
on 1/28/2007 6:36:28 PM with a score of 477
That game was awesome. Simply, it just was. I've rated this game an 8, seeing as there is no better rating I can give it. I've only given like 2 games an 8 before. Great work, and good luck in the contest, I believe the chances of you winning are very high.
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— Miccy2000 on 1/28/2007 2:01:09 AM with a score of 754
That was awesome! Made me smile, laugh, intrigued. Being my first time, your story went beyond my expectations! Stunning!I actually want to go back and try again. From an artists point of view, I loved the graphics (ps. it's Jackson Pollock :))I wanted everything to turn out for the good, but by doing so... I bored you and got myself killed!! Your writing is heart-stirring. Happy to have stumbled upon it tonight :) Congratulations.
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— your canadian friend on 1/21/2007 3:53:21 AM with a score of 245
This was awesome, you did a great job, well written tons of choces and just plain entertaning, I have zero complants, keep up the good work.
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— firestorm78 on 1/17/2007 11:25:35 PM with a score of 1000
Perfect.
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October
on 1/16/2007 5:23:30 AM with a score of 688
Alot of fun to read. I found myself edging closer and closer toward the computer screen as I weighed the consequenses of choosing one fate over another...
A great story.
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— Gaia on 1/15/2007 5:52:31 PM with a score of 913
Even though I couldn't find the correct ending, I still managed to have a good time with this. The storyline, and characters, everything. They are all done so well. I can't believe how well this story was done. It takes in so many mathematical formulas and creative writing traits, that if he took an IQ test, he'd have 150 or something like that. This has to be the best piece of work I've ever seen for choosing your own fate.
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Havacoman
on 1/15/2007 3:43:05 PM with a score of 294
Unbelieveably great game!
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ExiledPhoenix
on 1/15/2007 10:28:01 AM with a score of 1000
This was really well written! I thought the character sheet was a great story-game feature, and there was really good useage of items, character traits and stats. I really liked the little extra touches in descriptions, like russian text when someone spoke to me in russian! Madglee's BFA in Creative Writing shows. Definitely a maturity level of 7 though, kids.
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tsmpaul
on 1/13/2007 6:17:34 PM with a score of 809
wow... just wow
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ExiledPhoenix
on 1/13/2007 12:28:21 PM with a score of 921
My favorite game.
Goddam dude your the most fucking talented author I know including myself.
Man that game is amazing!
When I get to your age I plan on being at least as good!
Dont ever stop writing dude!
Fantastic game.
Contest winner without a fucking doubt!
god that was great!
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JJJ-thebanisher
on 1/12/2007 8:26:32 PM with a score of 893
That was very interesting. I like the fact that it's so open-ended. I just finished as an "Angelic Destroyer," but now I'm going back to the other window I have open, where I'm currently doing every bad choice I can think of.
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TsukiNoBara
on 1/11/2007 11:56:54 PM with a score of 1000
Haha i got the worst ending, i guess that what happens sticking to as much morals in the story as possible :P lol. This game is amazing and i would rate it number 1 on this site. The language is amazing! the plot is intriguing! have you considered becoming an author for real novels? Im sure you have based on what ive read! I will play it again and try to get the best ending!
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solostrike
on 1/11/2007 10:17:34 PM with a score of 400
Nice, seems fun to me! Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed designing it. Please post any constructive criticism so that I can improve my stories in the future. Thanks!
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madglee
on 1/11/2007 8:25:39 PM with a score of 1000
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