Player Comments on Mommy, Can I Go Out and Kill Tonight?

An old story but still one worth reading.

This was probably the first one I read when I first got here and I wasn’t disappointed by it. The use of the stats and items in the story are done well. The writing of course is good. Lots of different choices available and paths to take. It’s definitely expansive in that regard.

The main problems were sometimes the items were a little glitchy and I got caught in a “loop” but that’s a common problem with the item function on here. The “restart links” found in some portions of the story rather than proper ending links are annoying.

In any case it still has stood the test of time and worth a play through. I’m still finding things I hadn’t before in it.
-- EndMaster on 6/23/2018 4:07:15 PM with a score of 521
What an absolutely bizzare game. Great humor, nice puzzle-elements, and just insane overall. The end-scene felt a bit rushed, but the final pages felt very rewarding anyway.
Really glad that I read this over again. Additionally, the website really does put forth an interesting light about the mysterious talisman(s). I wonder if you're ever going to write another story relating to them, since you seem to have several write-ups on them already.
Regardless of association, I hope you write more story-games, since this was a lot of fun.
-- Tanstaafl on 11/11/2014 9:24:58 PM with a score of 1000
Playing through this storygame on lunch during a very stressful day at work provided the same sort of relief one gets from running down the streets of a popular series of games with a baseball bat. Only this is so much more personal and dark. Bravo! So well written!
-- oldmankatan on 11/1/2011 2:24:08 PM with a score of 582
-- Cool on 5/4/2020 12:37:14 PM with a score of 1000
Really good story, though I still can't figure out what to do with the talisman.
-- Bella1963 on 4/28/2020 9:13:00 AM with a score of 1000
pretty hard......
-- laniya on 12/27/2019 2:42:08 PM with a score of 537
I enjoyed this, Not many different choices that I see
-- Zach on 10/2/2019 2:57:45 PM with a score of 259
Its great I didn't even realize this site existed and it may be an old one, but Ill be on it for awhile.
-- CableX21 on 9/13/2019 4:14:41 AM with a score of 392

One of the hardest games I have played if you ask me.
Now, I slowly had to find out how and what by myself, and trying to get the talisman was a struggle.

I can see that there are a lot of people struggling, so I'll just give a hint:
Why not try to kind and try to be creative?

Anyway, I really thought there would be a difference in the ending when you get the talisman, but well, nope.
Still, a good game that makes you replay it a few times until you figure it out.
-- JonesJay41 on 6/23/2019 6:48:44 AM with a score of 1000
Good game.
-- Ambi95 on 3/5/2019 10:56:02 PM with a score of 269
Set in St. Louis I see, good choice
-- Anon on 2/18/2019 3:55:56 AM with a score of 350
had to try several times and read a lot of comments to figure out how to get the symbols. feels good when you manage to get the talisman, but i don't think it affects the ending. Maybe more endings exist where it is relevant?
-- Nitherion on 2/8/2019 3:45:54 AM with a score of 1000
Saw this on the Jenna and Julien Podcast and decided to give it a shot, I did way worse than them for sure but still had a lot of fun.
-- Cat on 10/27/2018 3:22:40 AM with a score of 224
very good story, it's a little hard to figure out at first and find all the hidden things. I wish there was a different ending to the story
-- star on 10/26/2018 12:12:57 PM with a score of 1000
def worth the $19.99
-- picklejoslyn on 8/20/2018 3:39:45 PM with a score of 395
it´s a great game!
-- Vera on 7/12/2018 7:31:44 PM with a score of 290
-- des on 7/2/2018 4:14:29 AM with a score of 450
do not... underestimate... your cellphone...
-- jae on 6/27/2018 3:22:56 AM with a score of 1000
Absolutely awesome game! Took a few tries, but it was so satisfying to finally get the best score.
*hint* You need all three pieces of /that one object/ to win. If the first one you get is "(2)" its best to just restart.
-- lau on 6/21/2018 5:35:55 PM with a score of 1000
-- Fay Debaillie on 6/21/2018 1:04:18 PM with a score of 300
I like it. :)
-- PinkTinkelbell on 6/20/2018 1:14:33 PM with a score of 233
I played this years ago and recently found it again due to the Jenna Julien Podcast. I finally completed all the endings!! So exciting!! This story is so interesting, I really enjoyed it.
-- Jane on 6/19/2018 3:34:43 PM with a score of 1000
Confusion....but in a good way.
-- Sarah Grieb on 6/19/2018 2:58:27 PM with a score of 295
it was alright
-- me on 6/19/2018 2:14:31 PM with a score of 350
it was good, i liked the many details that were added. it was intresting and good.
-- Olivia on 6/18/2018 11:57:32 PM with a score of 225
Really innovative. Thought it had a great storyline.
-- Vivid_Dreaming24 on 6/18/2018 9:11:41 PM with a score of 290
I would say this plays a little bit like a mystery. The object appears to be to solve the clues in order to assemble the Talisman / arrive at a 'successful' ending. As far as I can tell, the character build doesn't impact your ability to do that. You can ignore the advice the creator gives to make sure your stats match your traits.

Specific character builds are only needed to open up side plots.
-- Symphony on 5/24/2018 2:14:13 PM with a score of 1000
I think the first half of the storyline is great. A bunch of choices to go with, and a bunch of hidden parts and important choices that really affect the second half. In my opinion though, the second part was really forced and short in length. I may have gotten the best ending that's existing right now, but it doesn't feel like one, you know? The Talisman seems very useless, and I wish it would've had more involvement in the story. If more diverse endings exist, I think I would've liked it. Overall, I had fun. I loved the story, but I wished it had more content, as it felt rushed. I have noticed that other authors on this website do a lot better job at the endings, and I hope to find more improvement in future projects. I would rate the difficulty in excellence, because while the story is short, I loved the amount of attention to detail must be put in your decisions.
-- ZilexRed on 5/8/2018 12:29:50 PM with a score of 1000
too hard, can i request a walkthrough
-- saltyandsour on 12/21/2017 1:11:33 PM with a score of 235
I couldn’t stop playing until I found out how to get the Talisman. Instantly changed the whole game itself.
Very well assembled CYOA novel. A little weird, no doubt, but well assembled indeed.
Rivals that of a Reese’s Cup®
-- JonathantheEthereal on 11/16/2017 12:18:27 AM with a score of 1000
This is absolutely amazing! Every part is short, sweet and to the point, and I played this so fucking many times!!!!
-- Jesza on 11/10/2017 7:59:49 AM with a score of 344
why would you add a talisman option if it has nothing to do with the ploT
-- MegaUltraChicken on 9/27/2017 10:05:44 PM with a score of 551
Still died, damn!
-- MrSnuggles on 9/15/2017 4:18:27 AM with a score of 365
Excellent editing, the visuals were detailed even without pictures the images you portrayed through words gave me the sense that I was seeing, tasting, smelling, hearing, and touching things in person. Well done, you should be proud of yourself!
-- MrSnuggles on 9/14/2017 8:52:41 PM with a score of 1096
Damn that talisman was hard to figure out
-- DarkEagle4050 on 8/2/2017 10:47:33 PM with a score of 1000
This book was fantastic! I really liked how I was backstabbed by my friend Leon! Jesus, I swear in my next life I'm going to put poison in his beer. Otherwise, I really liked this book and the plot line was kewl!
-- them action expert on 6/4/2017 1:12:04 PM with a score of 360
The Talisman was arbitrary and didn't change anything. The second half of the story was too forced, it should have changed with your earlier decisions like the first half. Also too short.

Overall it was very entertaining but a lot of potential was wasted.
-- Angelic Destroyer on 4/4/2017 5:44:51 PM with a score of 1000
Yay, best ending and 1000 points. Also loved the Baldur's Gate reference.
-- aartbastiaan on 2/23/2017 12:25:44 PM with a score of 1000
1000 beat that
-- zavcex on 1/12/2017 3:10:44 AM with a score of 1000
Great work. Very complex and enticing.
-- SophiaDragonHart on 11/8/2016 11:14:53 PM with a score of 1000
This is a very addicting game
I really enjoyed it
-- DoomTomb56 on 11/2/2016 6:05:39 AM with a score of 1000
I had no idea what the Talisman did, nor did I know how to get 1000 points. Still a great story overall, though. 6/8
-- DaHatedHaterdatHates on 9/18/2016 5:19:49 PM with a score of 930
925 Angelic Destroyer!
-- BigRonn77 on 8/31/2016 10:11:52 AM with a score of 925
Played the game many times but wasn't able too get 1000pts. Anyway, my last game score is not bad but I still don't know the use of the talisman. :D

Your total score is 956 out of 1000

Your title is "Angelic Destroyer"

You achieved the best ending.
-- SimplyKatie on 5/25/2016 12:54:43 AM with a score of 956
Best game I won 1000/1000 plz mak longer
-- Marshy on 5/1/2016 1:47:35 PM with a score of 1000
Finally get the best ending. Woot! This is really fun!
-- IceQueen on 4/30/2016 8:16:07 AM with a score of 1000
woot, 1000 outta 1000
-- aadfg on 3/27/2016 3:57:43 PM with a score of 1000
Yay finally 1000 points. 7/8
-- CurseOfTime on 3/20/2016 1:28:07 PM with a score of 1000
I keep getting the worst ending ;-;
-- Sakurachan1 on 2/16/2016 12:18:02 PM with a score of 320
That was awesome. It took me quite a few times to find everything and get the best ending, and I enjoyed every one of them. Well done.
-- aartbastiaan on 1/15/2016 2:58:13 PM with a score of 1000
Keep getting killed by Leon at Serge's house...
-- drewfus813 on 1/12/2016 11:57:23 AM with a score of 692
A riveting story that constantly picks your brains and beckons you to continue no matter how many times you fail. The devil is in the details
-- ketienya on 1/6/2016 2:53:52 AM with a score of 785
Just finished this great story and now I have no idea what to do with my speeding ticket.
-- ario on 11/29/2015 2:21:41 PM with a score of 1000
What do the 'strange artifacts' do after you get them back from Korgan?
-- jason1stlegion on 11/4/2015 9:39:11 PM with a score of 1000
Please make a walkthrough!!! I can't seem to get the good ending. I played it loads of times and can't seem to get it right. :(
-- Angela on 10/17/2015 2:03:25 PM with a score of 592
it was fun
-- someboody on 10/6/2015 8:38:30 PM with a score of 242
Had to start over multiple times to get the good ending. This was a fun challenge.
-- inker2011 on 8/14/2015 2:29:23 PM with a score of 1000
Aww mannn, I know that I'm one of many who have already said this but this game is really a CYOA masterpiece. I mean, it's just the only thing I can say. My only problem would be the presumed uselessness of the talisman, I mean, have I just not discovered its use yet or what?

But otherwise, really great game here. I personally wish that we could have gotten to know Stacey better and to know the possible consequences of the last possible interaction between her and the protagonist,, but that's just me.

8/8, though.
-- DashingDeer on 8/5/2015 10:31:03 AM with a score of 1000
GR8 M8!
-- A guy on 7/22/2015 4:31:26 PM with a score of 245
-- Tim36D on 7/19/2015 6:21:46 AM with a score of 1000
Great story,

The Angel of Death
-- apocalypticTsunami on 6/19/2015 6:58:58 PM with a score of 1000
i try multiple time but in the end i still don't know the use of the talisman
-- anontheanon on 6/14/2015 11:34:54 AM with a score of 1000
This game just keeps getting better.
-- TheNewIAP on 6/10/2015 1:23:51 PM with a score of 1000
Well done overall, but falls short of its potential. Several problems: the path of the story seems circumscribed, there was no real decision on weapon usage and tactics (thus not much of a game portion), some traits were a LOT more useful than others etc. Overall it was still a very good story.

However, two real big problems exist, that stop me from giving an 8/8. They are (1) the uselessness of the amulet, and (2) the fact that making rational decisions does not result in a normal/realistic "boring" ending.
-- cavalier on 4/10/2015 7:30:26 AM with a score of 929
It was okay, but I was honestly expecting more.
-- nanayoung on 3/27/2015 7:37:24 PM with a score of 1000
I got Premature Death, and really don't want to go back and redo the story. (Sorry). But hey, I did like the game!
-- WaRDude999 on 2/20/2015 3:33:00 PM with a score of 371
Awesome. Tried many times, before looked the comments. Finished, with Merciless Killer.
-- Garuda120 on 2/13/2015 4:19:20 AM with a score of 771
Good game
-- Nigg on 2/7/2015 7:59:04 AM with a score of 322
It's pretty good, just too short! Also, I didn't really use some of my skills at all, and it went just fine, but as for other skills, I had to depend on them...a lot. Maybe it should be more balanced? Oh well, that's not my main concern. It really should be longer though.
-- EvangelineV on 1/24/2015 6:31:42 PM with a score of 1000
was definitely interesting, would play again
-- Mario on 1/16/2015 12:19:58 AM with a score of 850
Why is the significance of the talisman not explained in any way?played it loads and i want to know what the dwarf thing was all about. Someone tell me pleeeaaaze!im literally begging here.ok. im begging i hope that makes you happy that iv been reduced to this.
-- gravy on 1/7/2015 7:35:20 AM with a score of 865
Finding the talisman did not give me a different ending. Disappointing as its an otherwise amazing game.
-- gravy on 1/4/2015 9:18:18 AM with a score of 861
I cannot for the life of me find out how to get the talisman. I can tell the dwarf has it, but I don't know what he wants from me. I've tried multiple different things and the furthest I can get is killing or sparing Leon.
-- Natty on 11/28/2014 11:42:29 PM with a score of 450
It was fun
-- Jessie Lydy on 11/23/2014 8:11:31 PM with a score of 264
This was hard, and really interesting, but there are bugs when the policeman searches you, and the talisman was rather pointless.
-- Loki on 11/19/2014 4:22:03 PM with a score of 1000
Games way too short i think but then again i got the angelic ending
-- Bob on 10/31/2014 11:34:37 AM with a score of 1000
I thought it was interesting. the background story was superb and the plotline decent. However I thought the characters were lackluster, the swearing overused,and the cops unrealistic. No cop is gonna arrest you for swearing at him or my dad would have been arrested long ago. Overall score 7/8. This is probably only my fourth favorite game on the site. Sorry but that's my opinion and I'm not gonna change it.
-- mokaevans on 10/28/2014 12:57:09 AM with a score of 1000
Oh, this was such a fun adventure story. It's very hard finding stories like this these days. You, my friend, are an excellent writer. Job well done! I enjoyed it to no end. In fact I'm gonna go play it again (And again and again... and again and probably one more time... Until my thirst is satisfied) *Grins Devilishly*

ThanQ so much!!!
Keep up the great job!
Take Care, mate.
-- Timmy on 10/11/2014 1:41:32 PM with a score of 803
I have noticed a fandom to which I cannot be a part of due to my inability to get anything other than the worst ending. I don't see, what be be obvious to others, signs of improvement. I just don't. So I suppose I am stuck with my 538 score until I figure out how to not be killed in Serge's house, or at least not have to deal with Leon.

If there are any suggestions, any detailed one for the game, I will greatly appreciate it.
-- MikeNIke sweet on 9/20/2014 4:20:21 PM with a score of 668
Awesome story. But literally took me forever to beat the game. Lol, ten to twenty tries are no exaggeration. But just a question, how do you use the amulet after you finish it?
-- Lightmoon54 on 8/29/2014 11:12:40 AM with a score of 741
Very good. I noticed what appears to be an on-page scripting error when you use the phone to call your girlfriend. Aside from that, I have no complaints. 8/8.
-- jamescoker1226 on 6/15/2014 2:22:56 PM with a score of 1000
This was really fun.
-- A Ronnebaum on 6/9/2014 9:29:14 AM with a score of 245
great story
-- Bak2baraX on 5/30/2014 3:21:20 PM with a score of 1000
Lame. There was no option not to help leon so no option not to die. Weak.
-- trendsexual on 5/21/2014 1:18:33 PM with a score of 364
Awesome! i finally managed to achieve best ending! the talisman was tricky, but i finally got it!:D if anyone needs help beating this, let me know!
-- DarianF on 5/11/2014 10:10:41 PM with a score of 1000
1000/1000! Best Ending Ever!
-- SomeGuyNamedBob on 4/24/2014 1:50:37 PM with a score of 1000
With a plethora of pathways, this well-written and engaging story was quite fun! Descriptive with interesting characters, plentiful items, and great replay value. Thanks for a phenomenal game!
-- mek7 on 4/17/2014 1:03:52 PM with a score of 935
Took me forever (5 run-throughs or so) to find the first talisman...shame on me for overlooking it so many times. Got 1000 on the first try though, just by doing what made the most sense...

Fun game! I loved picking my stats and traits.
-- RainbowPaintbrush on 2/25/2014 6:25:19 PM with a score of 1000
Great story, very fun!
-- Nick on 1/16/2014 1:00:14 PM with a score of 404
Good game. The ending surprised the hell out of me though
-- James on 11/7/2013 10:07:49 PM with a score of 700
Great job! :D
-- ssj3gohan007 on 10/15/2013 12:05:40 PM with a score of 1000
The story was just great :O Even though I can't understand how anyone got a 1000, I still thoroughly enjoyed myself with my buddy Mr. Pointy :P
-- Niehm on 7/15/2013 6:41:49 AM with a score of 971
Wow, wasn't expecting it to end like that!! Guess I should have had a drink on the plane, oh well next time.
-- mchthp on 6/29/2013 8:29:03 PM with a score of 375
It is creative but much shorter than I would have liked. It's only long because you have to fund the Talisman which is a 3 piece amulet and you get it through being creative in the world. it was a letdown for me.
-- JCool on 5/29/2013 9:29:46 PM with a score of 1000
Fantastic game! I was a bit disappointed when I realized that having the talisman didn't actually have an effect on the ending, but it was still a very enjoyable play through.
-- AspiringAuthorCook on 5/20/2013 5:27:18 PM with a score of 955
took me a while but i got the perfect ending lol the tirck was the first secret item
-- bfkinf on 5/17/2013 1:32:32 AM with a score of 1000
It was a good story, but I have no clue as to how to get past the confrontation at Serge's house
-- Rossatronix on 5/13/2013 1:48:30 PM with a score of 320
I had the worst ending but enjoyed it, very good game and definitely one of the best I have played on the site.
-- Jgraeme1979 on 5/10/2013 1:33:10 AM with a score of 234
pretty legit
-- will on 4/30/2013 5:32:09 PM with a score of 1045
fun. but i died gotta go back.
-- mrannihalator on 4/18/2013 5:36:01 PM with a score of 319
Wow! I finally got the best ending, although it's not as happy as I would've thought.
-- Adam on 4/11/2013 3:05:24 AM with a score of 1000
Nice story. Was less dark than I expected after reading the description, which is both relieving and slightly disappointing at the same time.

However, I don't see the how the symbols affect the story despite getting all 3.
-- Telwyn on 3/11/2013 8:35:18 AM with a score of 1000
I really can't beat this game.
-- toni on 3/7/2013 10:25:20 PM with a score of 394
This game was very fun. Got all three symbols, but I never got to use the talisman. I am curious about its use, but other than that, the game was a pretty fun way to spend 15 minutes.
-- Uhebav on 1/17/2013 7:38:04 PM with a score of 1000
Hooray! Got the best ending ^^ Awesome story =D
-- Rayven22 on 1/11/2013 8:00:27 PM with a score of 1000
I loved this game. Difficult, and constantly challenging, it's probably one of the best games on the site. A difficult game, (especially since I needed help from the author) but the difficulty adds to the experience. 8/8
-- Aman on 1/3/2013 9:53:58 PM with a score of 1000
might be some spoilers,so stay away those who haven't played.
I played through it 2 times and found it to be quite good,however both the time I got sprayed by a mp5. the secondd time I got symble 2 and 3,but no idea about how to get the first one?and the cops gun too.tis a pretty awsome game,although I wouldn't mind some pointers.:D
-- grryfindore on 12/14/2012 12:29:43 AM with a score of 713
Great Game. Took like 10 tries to figure out Symbol Piece one, but I finally got it.
-- Anon on 11/27/2012 12:43:08 PM with a score of 1000
-- haledakota on 9/13/2012 6:10:16 PM with a score of 342
Finally got 1000 out of 1000. Love the title. Fun game. :)
-- Kiel_Farren on 9/7/2012 2:52:23 AM with a score of 1000
well, i got the "premature ending". but i suppose practice makes perfect and i'll have another go!
-- mort_love on 8/21/2012 5:06:54 PM with a score of 313
awesome-sauce, it just took me... 5 tries to get the talisman pieces. wow
-- MajestyofTime on 7/21/2012 6:09:26 PM with a score of 1000
Try, try again. 1000/1000!
-- madglee on 7/8/2012 9:48:08 PM with a score of 1000
Good game, engaging story
-- Xt1000305 on 6/18/2012 4:35:25 AM with a score of 707
Cool game, I would have wanted more choices in certain moments.
-- Insanity66 on 3/5/2012 11:48:20 AM with a score of 533
I wish it was longer, I was really getting into it.
-- Charles on 3/3/2012 4:11:08 AM with a score of 735
Bo Approves.
-- ThisIsBo on 2/6/2012 2:38:48 AM with a score of 758
Very nice indeed
-- RajR on 2/4/2012 10:23:09 PM with a score of 516
it was ok
-- bud3r64 on 2/4/2012 5:52:42 PM with a score of 783
Actually a pretty good game! Nice to see that the inventory and game-style of the story didn't go out of hand. An extremely good implementation of it, actually.
-- bravetheheat on 1/30/2012 7:26:38 AM with a score of 1000
Interesting ending, i think this story has alot of potential to be great. I would love to see an alternative side to this story.
-- Meriko on 1/30/2012 4:18:27 AM with a score of 769
Amazing. Definite 8/8 storygame.
-- applegirl on 1/15/2012 2:26:42 AM with a score of 1000
Really good, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
-- written_agreement on 1/12/2012 3:59:51 PM with a score of 809
Smoothest running game I've seen so far - very well put together!
-- BerkaZerka on 12/27/2011 12:26:39 AM with a score of 1000
-- jcam on 12/20/2011 2:46:56 PM with a score of 859
Good, good.
-- safsdafdsaf on 11/30/2011 6:39:22 PM with a score of 748
That was amazing! I was so love choice games and that one was so graphic it was almost like you were actually there. I loved all three endings endings and you had to actually think about your decisions. Please make more games like this one.

Thank you,
-- Katherine on 11/10/2011 9:31:15 PM with a score of 897
I thought the story was very well-written (I expected a parade of typos, haha) and interesting. I still haven't been able to end it on a good note, though. So far I keep getting killed and it's pissing me off! Not the creator's fault though, obviously.
-- kelly on 10/27/2011 1:41:25 AM with a score of 319
A nice story line with some clever uses of objects. I highly recommend!
-- Popgills on 10/10/2011 5:16:57 PM with a score of 788
I was expecting a serial killing game to be honest... But this game was damn good. To be fair I usually rate fives, I meant to click seven. Shit happens. :)
-- DLove on 9/25/2011 12:29:05 AM with a score of 1000
Damn. I got the worst ending. But awesome game though. I was expecting Leon to do something sooner or later...
-- angelofthefallen on 8/30/2011 2:43:17 PM with a score of 422
I really really liked this!! it was really intriguing and i even learned a bit from it XD i got the best ending ;D ^_^Nicely done! Well written!!!
-- ChaiHai on 8/30/2011 1:32:34 AM with a score of 1000
i loved this story
-- DarkentityOni on 8/24/2011 11:20:44 PM with a score of 768
Very intriguing storyline! It would be interesting to see a prequel to this story, explaining the hints that were given to his past.
-- bereothien on 8/15/2011 9:22:42 PM with a score of 804
Only four accomplishments? I thought I would have gotten more. 10 psychosis, 5 psychedelic, and 45 sobriety. I drank all the beer at the airport when he needed to confiscate it, haha. Excellent story. One of my favorites.
-- bucket on 7/27/2011 7:11:22 PM with a score of 759
I love Mr. Pointy. Me and him had some times
-- playa988 on 7/17/2011 9:45:05 AM with a score of 949
Cool, best ending first try!
-- giamonic on 7/6/2011 9:16:58 PM with a score of 738
Awesome story, surprised it didn't take that long to get the best ending.
-- RenHaru on 5/28/2011 11:17:11 PM with a score of 928
best fuckin game
-- shaq on 5/21/2011 2:53:16 PM with a score of 506
Amazing game! I loved the use of the items, very well done!
-- MethodKid on 5/10/2011 3:54:10 PM with a score of 1000
Best ending! Yay!
-- Jim Salary Man on 5/8/2011 7:38:24 PM with a score of 938
Yay - Replay = 1000/1000!

Angelic Destruction - on a load of cops.
-- Forge on 5/5/2011 2:07:15 PM with a score of 1000
Nice game, nice plot.

Nice endings.

Now I'll play it again.
-- Forge on 5/5/2011 1:48:53 PM with a score of 933
Wow. I have to go back and try for other endings. That was very fun, but now, I must get some sleep. I think teh story was well-developed, and the characters were enjoyable to the end.
-- jkulibert2 on 5/3/2011 10:39:36 PM with a score of 733
Bo approves, mostly because he got the best ending
-- ThisisBo on 5/2/2011 11:01:15 PM with a score of 883
-- Ben Holman on 4/16/2011 1:31:42 PM with a score of 493
Great story...Could you help me with mine???
-- DRBickham on 4/9/2011 1:28:33 AM with a score of 663
This is the best game on the site!!!
-- xeroxin on 4/1/2011 4:28:58 PM with a score of 1000
What a great game! I can't think of words to describe this game. I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading, and it was far better than what I was expecting it to be. Great job!
-- snyper1107 on 3/29/2011 10:30:00 AM with a score of 778
Incredible! Unbelievably immersing! Unsurpassed in entertainment value! Words seem inadequate to describe the sheer delight of playing this game!
-- DWolfe1990 on 3/25/2011 12:17:31 AM with a score of 763
Soo fun :D
-- Jon on 3/16/2011 8:12:14 PM with a score of 763
wow! infinitly better than i anticipated. and i expected something pretty good to start with. I felt pro this was my first run through
-- ugilick on 3/13/2011 11:46:52 PM with a score of 1000
-- CrapMan on 2/24/2011 2:54:30 PM with a score of 804
It took me about twenty tries, but I got the "best ending." I hadn't thought of hitting somebody in the head with a cell phone.
-- joshdragon on 1/19/2011 7:28:27 PM with a score of 888
My page screwed itself at a crucial moment and I thought I'd pay for it. Then I got the best ending. All in all, a great story.
-- Xanatos on 1/11/2011 9:48:43 AM with a score of 1000
Amazing. I got a score of 600 and died a brutal death. Gonna play it again straight away!
-- JoeDude on 1/8/2011 6:49:36 PM with a score of 600
I enjoyed the overall game engine, especially the inventory integration. This was an intriguing and fun play.
-- theryanlee on 12/18/2010 3:17:40 AM with a score of 758
what a game!
-- weng on 11/28/2010 4:31:03 AM with a score of 783
i finished the game for the 600th or so time and i killed everybody i possibly could, SPOILER ALERT RIGHT AFTER THIS.i killed: the cops, leon,and serges army
-- spencer on 11/22/2010 12:25:51 PM with a score of 1000
Marvellous, beautiful. What I'd like to see is a walkthrough or thorough FAQ to this - I'm wondering what the items I didn't use may good for and what other ways there are to take but don't find the time to go through this 50 times trying out every last possibility.
-- quaker on 11/15/2010 4:03:32 PM with a score of 640
I found it to be a very phenomenal story, I was very supervised and engaged by how such minor decisions like drinking beer and downing pills would have such an impact on the story. Loved it. 8/8
-- Greencloud on 11/14/2010 6:08:13 PM with a score of 854
A superb story with plenty of replay value.
-- Loon on 10/19/2010 9:03:45 PM with a score of 626
Love it!
-- Feiti on 10/14/2010 11:11:10 AM with a score of 1000
A good game. I got the best ending! :D
-- Carter12 on 10/9/2010 3:38:55 PM with a score of 1000
so badass! 10/10 thanks!
-- pomegralice on 10/7/2010 9:18:00 AM with a score of 588
I pity the drug addict who doesn't like this.
-- fish on 10/1/2010 10:40:19 PM with a score of 783
There are so many fun and interesting choices in the game. This game makes me want to play over and over again.
-- TiChan on 10/1/2010 2:14:53 PM with a score of 1000
Still my favorite! Hope it's back up to 8 now since I'm using a different computer... wait, never mind, same IP. Crap!
-- jeff-backup on 9/18/2010 9:35:53 AM with a score of 804
Hmm, I forgot some secrets to the point where I didn't get a perfect score. Nice. A pity some asses decided to purposely rate this low so it wouldn't be an 8, as it has been for 4 years. Still fun. Try to figure out how to build Mr. Pointy and kill cops!
-- madglee on 9/5/2010 2:47:58 PM with a score of 950
I don't see why some jealous loser could bring this, the best story on the site, down to a seven. I don't even see how someone couldn't bring themselves to rate it an 8. BEST STORY EVER, although it took me a while to figure out how to get the best ending. I guess cell phones aren't as useless as I thought. Excellent work madglee. I take back what I said about JFP, haha. Best game on the site, my new favorite, and I hope my 8 brought it back up to immortality. I'm still speechless.
-- Jeff on 9/1/2010 10:07:49 AM with a score of 784
Really great Storygame. It had a great story and game mechanics.
-- xDante on 8/29/2010 12:23:11 AM with a score of 231
I didn't really think the length was long enough to warrant the length it gave here. But anyway, amazing game.
-- NeedleKnife on 8/16/2010 3:14:33 AM with a score of 904

0 out of 100: Your level of psychosis
0 out of 10: Your psychedelic state
100 out of 100: Your level of sobriety

Your total score is 959 out of 1000
Your title is "Angelic Destroyer"
You achieved the best ending.

Awesome :D
-- crazy-gaemer on 8/8/2010 8:23:28 AM with a score of 959
Great game. I got the merciless killer ending. The only problem I had was that sometimes there weren't very many options, but I found the story so gripping that it didn't matter much.
-- ZY on 7/25/2010 11:21:52 PM with a score of 788
Very awesome. Definitely worth playing.
-- stirlock on 6/24/2010 12:58:29 AM with a score of 822
I just scored 1000!
-- Old_Zangeif on 6/13/2010 5:28:37 PM with a score of 1000
Wow. I'm sorry I waited so long to play this game (didn't think it would be a good idea to play at work) because it's really impressive and complex. Love the statistics and the use of the character sheet to track them and your accomplishments; it's a big turn-off when I start a game and discover I have to keep track of a lot of stats by hand.

Also liked that the correct choices are NOT random; they make a lot of intuitive sense and aren't left up to chance like picking which door leads to the exit and which leads to instant death.

Of course, now I'm going back and going to make horrible choices to see the bad endings... Great work!
-- mandichaos on 5/9/2010 12:13:22 AM with a score of 1000
nice game. :) i like it
-- adam on 3/20/2010 3:17:19 AM with a score of 738
Good story, I got the best ending with around 850 points. I wonder how to get the full 1000 haha anyways great game keep up the good work!
-- iprototype on 2/22/2010 10:26:11 PM with a score of 829
Not as big as described, but it's great! Keep it up!
-- rohitrocka on 2/6/2010 12:52:16 AM with a score of 859
I have no clue how long just the small part of the story that I finished took to make, but I'd still like to see a longer version. It is an excellent, well thought out story in my opinion. Keep up the great work!
-- akjhurg on 1/25/2010 2:04:49 AM with a score of 1000
A pretty good game!
-- Afen on 1/10/2010 3:37:12 PM with a score of 759
It was pretty sweet. Wonder how to get a score of 1000, though.
-- Orinks on 12/31/2009 1:02:04 AM with a score of 714
Excellent. Good character development, the story requires some thought to beat, and in general awesome. It seems a little short, but that's mostly because it is that good that I didn't want it to end.
-- Trzcina on 12/24/2009 10:32:46 PM with a score of 809
THIS GAME IS THE BEST I LOVE IT all i want is more traits to choose and more options with the items
-- ramsey on 9/29/2009 2:56:01 PM with a score of 1000
This is awesome
-- urnam0 on 9/9/2009 12:52:27 AM with a score of 700
Great game! Frustrating at times, but the best ones always are.
-- soylentg231 on 4/24/2008 10:31:32 PM with a score of 1000
it was AWESOME i got best ending, i wish it was longer
-- kidgav on 4/20/2008 10:28:49 PM with a score of 938
Poo, premature finisher. God I suck.
-- Expander on 2/10/2008 7:28:48 PM with a score of 220
how do i get the cops gun in the holding cells? i got mr pointy but thats the only weapon i found there
-- jakster on 12/16/2007 2:42:12 PM with a score of 890
great story really fun
-- GreatLichLord on 12/10/2007 1:06:44 AM with a score of 860
This is brilliant! Plot, characters, detail, writing skill, level of choice... I can't fault it on anything. I love it!
-- Twiggy on 11/30/2007 9:32:46 AM with a score of 1000
This game rocks!
-- IceFireKirby on 10/15/2007 4:37:17 PM with a score of 1000
i finialy got the 1000 points
-- geeky nerd on 9/16/2007 11:04:10 PM with a score of 1000
I understand now why so many people claim this to be the greatest story on the site. There were a few typo errors (like using the word either when you meant neither ("either am I") and such). There were a few parts where the freedom of the story was rather limited and streamlined, but otherwise this was an excellent story and an excellent read.
-- donteatpoop on 9/9/2007 7:25:34 PM with a score of 553
What an amazing game.I finally got round to playing it and i wish i had done it sooner
Kinda reminds me of the Lone Wolf Series.
I got the Ending: Angelic Destroyer
-- Xfire on 8/28/2007 8:03:10 AM with a score of 889
i've played before.....nothings changed. this game still rules
-- deadly_sinner66 on 7/2/2007 4:12:37 PM with a score of 854
I finally got 1000! Awesome game madglee, it's freaking amazing. Great job!
-- DarthVader_13 on 6/6/2007 1:00:25 AM with a score of 1000
i played the game again got 1000/1000. this game rules!!! you should make it longer tho. 8/8
-- sloth on 6/4/2007 7:32:29 PM with a score of 1000
This game fucking rules! i am gonna pkay it all night
-- sloth on 6/4/2007 1:29:41 AM with a score of 606
Freakin' Awesome...
-- TheMagicDude on 5/26/2007 3:15:40 PM with a score of 588
That was a damn fun game. Too bad I got the worst ending. Heheh.
-- Jake on 5/25/2007 11:09:11 PM with a score of 395
Yaaay I'm merciless
-- Jimi_the_Z on 5/21/2007 9:49:47 AM with a score of 538
-- primates on 5/17/2007 7:05:47 PM with a score of 759
Cool, Its like a Tarentino movie
-- Chris on 4/2/2007 11:49:19 PM with a score of 488
this is truly the best /short/ story i have ever read. it only takes around 20-30 min. to finish but is really immersive. great job Baltz!
-- Barden on 4/2/2007 4:44:02 PM with a score of 707
Is this the highest score?
-- Rommel on 3/30/2007 10:47:10 PM with a score of 1000
I did better this time!
-- DarthVader_13 on 3/21/2007 6:53:08 PM with a score of 984
My god, this was better than mattias the one knight,(No offence JJJ)8/8, not questions asked.

FYI: I got the best ending.
-- SilverMan on 3/21/2007 5:37:09 PM with a score of 869
I got 829, "Angelic destroyer" the way to raise your psycedelic state to 100 is to kill Leon.
-- Rommel on 3/21/2007 3:04:21 AM with a score of 829
Definetly a game up there, its so cool im definetly replaying this one...
-- tgan on 3/19/2007 6:27:31 AM with a score of 937
Greatl! This games is definetly one of the best
-- th*mage*of*kings on 3/11/2007 12:18:55 PM with a score of 371
This game is awesome, man. Definently an 8.
-- DarthVader_13 on 3/7/2007 6:32:15 PM with a score of 778
Wow- this game lives up to the hype! Fantastic use of items, variables, great storytelling and multiple endings.
-- Sethaniel on 2/15/2007 7:18:45 PM with a score of 730
Absolutely incredible. This is a must-play!

The writing is riveting (well done!) and the game play is very transparent. An impressive feat, especially considering how open-ended the storygame is. I'm going to run through again later (if only I didn't have to go to work now).
-- alexp on 2/10/2007 12:28:00 PM with a score of 321
Good writing, Good Story, I'm not sure if I liked the vulgar shock factor but I admit it was graphic enough to put me in the story. I was confused at one point but it's a plot spoiler so I'll ask later. I need t play again.
-- chocobot on 2/8/2007 12:07:31 PM with a score of 1000
wow, what an emotional rush! that was great. there were a few grammatical errors. but very minimal. the complexity, the involvement, the whole thing was engaging. the best part of this story is the detail that you put into the character sheet. that was brilliant.
-- Fleshnblood_78 on 2/2/2007 6:32:59 PM with a score of 549
Amazing game, awesome storyline, and wonderful gameplay. Everything was well planned and well made. Good job.
-- Cake on 1/29/2007 6:15:48 PM with a score of 360
Fun. This time I took more drugs.
-- Nyarlathotep on 1/29/2007 3:07:13 PM with a score of 1000
Hey, I finally found this thing. You kept babbling about it but never told me the URL. Dumbass. Anyway, great story. As always, I'm in awe of your writing ability.
-- Nyarlathotep on 1/29/2007 1:06:01 PM with a score of 652
This was extremely entertaining several times through. The descriptive writing painted the story so thoroughly I felt as if I was watching an interactive movie. When I thought I could predict the next catastrophe, a vivid spin kept me intrigued. Well done! Waiting for the next eloquent piece of chaos and mayhem. Strong!
-- Apeiron on 1/28/2007 6:36:28 PM with a score of 477
That game was awesome. Simply, it just was. I've rated this game an 8, seeing as there is no better rating I can give it. I've only given like 2 games an 8 before. Great work, and good luck in the contest, I believe the chances of you winning are very high.
-- Miccy2000 on 1/28/2007 2:01:09 AM with a score of 754
That was awesome! Made me smile, laugh, intrigued. Being my first time, your story went beyond my expectations! Stunning!I actually want to go back and try again. From an artists point of view, I loved the graphics (ps. it's Jackson Pollock :))I wanted everything to turn out for the good, but by doing so... I bored you and got myself killed!! Your writing is heart-stirring. Happy to have stumbled upon it tonight :) Congratulations.
-- your canadian friend on 1/21/2007 3:53:21 AM with a score of 245
This was awesome, you did a great job, well written tons of choces and just plain entertaning, I have zero complants, keep up the good work.
-- firestorm78 on 1/17/2007 11:25:35 PM with a score of 1000
-- October on 1/16/2007 5:23:30 AM with a score of 688
Alot of fun to read. I found myself edging closer and closer toward the computer screen as I weighed the consequenses of choosing one fate over another...

A great story.
-- Gaia on 1/15/2007 5:52:31 PM with a score of 913
Even though I couldn't find the correct ending, I still managed to have a good time with this. The storyline, and characters, everything. They are all done so well. I can't believe how well this story was done. It takes in so many mathematical formulas and creative writing traits, that if he took an IQ test, he'd have 150 or something like that. This has to be the best piece of work I've ever seen for choosing your own fate.
-- Havacoman on 1/15/2007 3:43:05 PM with a score of 294
Unbelieveably great game!
-- ExiledPhoenix on 1/15/2007 10:28:01 AM with a score of 1000
This was really well written! I thought the character sheet was a great story-game feature, and there was really good useage of items, character traits and stats. I really liked the little extra touches in descriptions, like russian text when someone spoke to me in russian! Madglee's BFA in Creative Writing shows. Definitely a maturity level of 7 though, kids.
-- tsmpaul on 1/13/2007 6:17:34 PM with a score of 809
wow... just wow
-- ExiledPhoenix on 1/13/2007 12:28:21 PM with a score of 921
My favorite game.
Goddam dude your the most fucking talented author I know including myself.
Man that game is amazing!
When I get to your age I plan on being at least as good!
Dont ever stop writing dude!
Fantastic game.
Contest winner without a fucking doubt!
god that was great!
-- JJJ-thebanisher on 1/12/2007 8:26:32 PM with a score of 893
That was very interesting. I like the fact that it's so open-ended. I just finished as an "Angelic Destroyer," but now I'm going back to the other window I have open, where I'm currently doing every bad choice I can think of.
-- TsukiNoBara on 1/11/2007 11:56:54 PM with a score of 1000
Haha i got the worst ending, i guess that what happens sticking to as much morals in the story as possible :P lol. This game is amazing and i would rate it number 1 on this site. The language is amazing! the plot is intriguing! have you considered becoming an author for real novels? Im sure you have based on what ive read! I will play it again and try to get the best ending!
-- solostrike on 1/11/2007 10:17:34 PM with a score of 400
Nice, seems fun to me! Hope you all enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed designing it. Please post any constructive criticism so that I can improve my stories in the future. Thanks!
-- madglee on 1/11/2007 8:25:39 PM with a score of 1000
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