a guide to a dumbass girl

Very good!

So reading this, it’s pretty clear that you’re the problem. Implying the reader doesn’t respect you simply because they came to this site to read stories and not be trauma dumped is egotistical and narcissistic.

Now let’s go into each and every single reason why you suck as a human being, and remember: you’re the one who broadcast this.

For starters, if you’re lying to someone and saying you don’t hate them completely, the implication is that you’re not particularly fond of them. How do you, as a human being capable of reasoning skills, get upset when they say the feeling is mutual?

“I did literally nothing to her.” You literally just admitted to lying to her and expressing distaste. Is this satire of some kind, or are you completely ignorant of your own behavior?

“So. I have tried my absolute fucking best to be nice to people, and sometimes it includes insulting them as a friend.” Oh look. More shitty behavior. Ignoring the obvious statement of sometimes people don’t like to be insulted, allow me to ask you two questions:

1. Did you explain to them that you weren’t trying to be malicious and was just trying to tease?
2. When you saw that they were upset anyways, did you apologize and refrain from making such jokes in the future?

Part of the reason why she told you to jump is cause you’re a furry? Yeah, furries get dunked on a lot. Did you try just giving her the middle finger and moving on with your life instead of crying to strangers on the internet?

Oh my God. Bitch, call a suicide hotline if you can’t afford a therapist. Even if you’re not actually suicidal, you’ll be better off talking about your problems to someone who actually cares about your well being.

“Yes, I’m a lesbian, fuck off.”
Nobody here really cares who you fuck. But I will say if your own partner is having trouble wanting to be around you, then I still don’t get why you thought a bunch of people on the internet was a good idea. Can’t you, idk, vent to her or something?

Look, man. I bust my ass at work to make enough money for food cause this government shutdown has got my household in a precarious situation. So when I come here for a quick escape and the first thing I see is some carpet muncher whining about problems I would gladly trade my own for? It’s a little frustrating.

I’m too done with this drivel to read about your interests. Look, it’s clear you need to talk to someone about your problems, so either get a therapist or take your friend’s advice and jump.

Hey TenBinsOfMercury,
First off, I'd just like to say, thanks for sharing this and I'm sorry about all the shit that you're going through.

It sounds like you're having a rough time of it, and I don't blame you for being frustrated.

You sound like a kind person who wants to do better but is dealing with a lot. I think with regards to comforting people, all I can say is just being there is half the battle. Don't beat yourself up about how you comfort your girlfriend. if you're trying, then I feel like you can only get better with time. You sound like a someone who has a lot to offer the world, so don't be discouraged.

I think rather than publishing this piece on the site, it might be better to talk to someone. Talk to a therapist or a counsellor, or your IRL friends. They will be better suited to help you out. You will come out of these difficult circumstances, you just got to find a way to cope with everything that's going on in your life.

Keep your chin up, and keep writing games! Your bombardat game made me laugh, but I would like to see how you would approach more serious writing. I think you should write an earnest story for a change, I'm sure it would do quite well. I'm sure you have ideas. If you need help, post on the forums. Maybe you can post excerpts of your writing, and people can help with specific aspects like character, plot, narrative, and style.

I bet you got some great stories. Write them! The world deserves to be enriched by your talent!

All the best!

Uhm...what did I just fucking read?
1) It's mostly your fault, ever heard of saying "I'm sorry but I need a little time" or BEING KIND FOR ONCE IN YOUR LIFE
2) ARE YOU LIKE TEN?! It's your fault that you're hanging around these people, and it's your fault you're how you are
3) Blaming other people is crazy....Reading this from your perspective just made people hate you more.
4) NO ONE CARES ABOUT FOR FUCKING BITCH ASS DRAMA, SO SHUT THE HELL UP, WE AREN'T YOUR THERAPISTS

"Even fools who keep silent are considered wise; when they close their lips, they are deemed intelligent." - Proverbs 17:28

I'm not sure what to make of this. The plot was all over the place, the main character unlikable and the theme non-existent. There's an overreliance on the crutch word 'fucking' that makes the writing fucking terrible. The narration cannot make up its mind: the description states the author doesn't care what others think of her, but the rest of the story shows otherwise. There's also a broken link (part 3: the apology doesn't work---both literally and figuratively), which on this site means your 'story' will be unpublished for being incomplete.

Alright, to the author, if you're still reading this comment, congrats! You're not as thin-skinned as I initially thought. Here's some actual advice.

First, journaling may help if you find it therapeutic, but not everything you write has to be shown to the world. It's better to keep some thoughts to yourself. This is especially true if you fluctuate between fuming because of what others think of you to loudly pretending nothing anyone says affects you whatsoever.

If you want someone to listen as you trauma-dump, instead of getting the reader to click encouraging 'go on' links like some sort of dystopian, one-sided replacement for human interaction, I suggest therapy. Understanding any repressed emotions and limiting beliefs you have would help you overcome them. Most schools should have a counselor you can talk to about your issues.

Lastly, this is a writing site, so any feedback you receive would be judging you on the quality of what you have written. If you do not want comments from people who disagree with you, leave your storygame unpublished. Share the link to it with specific people if you want the comment section to be an echo chamber of hollow praise and exaggerated pity, whatever floats your boat---or bins, I suppose.

I don't care.

SYBAU🗣🗣🗣🗣💔💔🥀🥀

Gaaaaaay

Well first off, you said nothing of importance and you're saying too much of it. As usual you contribute nothing and are offended by everything.

Also you claimed you were a degenerate bisexual in your profile and then in this you said you were a BIG FAT lesbian. Make up your fucking mind.

That's the problem with your retarded generation today, you run around on your little gay rainbow spectrum thinking none of this shit matters and have no fucking commitment to anything. It's probably why your little girlfriend doesn't like you.

Lol, fag.

Oh okay then, we'll probably just delete this later and then ban you since you don't care.

Didn't want a comment? Tough shit. Shouldn't have tempted fate.