Great read. Just sent over my notes. Would make an excellent CYS if you ever wanted to convert it. ;-)
Haha You're welcome! Had a fun time doing it and looking forward to the next set of chapters. :-)
Great set of chapters again. Excellent action, plot, pacing, and dialogue. Hope you find my full feedback useful. Looking forward to the next set.
And thanks again for your prelim notes on mine. Very helpful already. :-)
I'm curious how you're going to work out the Fantasy Physics for this Novella. Will Time be truly STOPPED or will it just be slowed down like in the H.G. Wells story "The New Accelerator"? I ask only because if Time is stopped, how will the protagonist see anything, since light takes time to travel? I'm just nitpicking. Sorry about that. If you want to send me some chapters, my e-mail is firstname.lastname@example.org . Best of luck in your story!
There are some who might beg to differ: https://youtu.be/sO5gV_vmabM
Worth the effort, imo.