It is good.
Is this supposed to be a cliffhanger or do people chime in with their opinions of what he should do?
We're supposed to say what we want him to do, and then I guess whichever option has the most votes is what happens.
He should embrace his death and haunt the forests.
I agree. That would be awesome.
Get in there and wack the dominant wolf. Wear its hide and become leader of the pack.
Jach distracts the attacking wolves. No creature deserves this end. As the wolves begin to surround the alpha, he quietly climbs a tree. The first wolf strikes while Jach cuts off a limb. The others are about to follow when he hurls it into the forest. The wolves perk up their ears and go to investigate, but he knows they won't be gone for long. He cuts off another limb, a long one, and drops from the tree. The trapped alpha growls fiercely. "You idiot. I'm trying to help you," Jach mutters under his breath. He wedges the stick into the trap and...
(I wanted to try my hand at writing the story.)
*slaps me with a virtual ruler*
Ow! Okay, okay, I'll be good, I promise.
Why are you hitting yourself?
Hey cupcake, get an avatar so we don’t confuse you with the normal noobs.