Alright, if anyone cares, here's the first page of the story. Yes, the beginning is kind of like Fallout 3 with the whole being born and the "You're SPECIAL" book, but I think I did a good job in length and most likely description, but I want to see what all of you think of it. Well here it is:
You are in a dark and comfortable place. You hear voices from outside. You don't know who they are from, but they attempt to comfort you, which you don't find comforting. One day, you hear the scream of a woman. She quickly gets up and a man asks her what is wrong. She says her "Water broke".
They walk to another building and the woman lays on a table. You are pushed out of your home and get blinded by a bright light. You scream "Put me back!" but it comes out as just a cry. The more you ask, the more they smile, as they think of it as a sign of health for some reason. A man in a lab coat with a medical mask walks near you. "It's a boy! We've got a son, Sophia!" You hear him say. You soon learn he is what is called your "father".
"Oh Frank, we did it, our beautiful son... He needs a name, though. Did you think about it?" A woman asks. She is what they call your "mother". "Yes, and I've come up with a name. Albert! It fits him perfectly." Your father says. They bring you into another room full of glass cribs. They put you in a glass crib and put a face mask on you. You are observed by your parents.
"This isn't life, right?" You think to yourself. Why would you be pulled out of your comfortable home and put in an uncomfortable one? You're not going to be like this for the rest of your life, right? You soon find out the answer is thankfully no. Life will get harder on you though, remember that.
AGE 1
You are sitting in the playpen playing with your toys when a woman walks through the door. She walks up to you and gives you a kiss on the cheek. She then sits down at the big desk near your playpen and writes something down. She turns the chair around and watches you play with your toys. You give her a smile and she returns the gesture. You don't know where you are, other than you're in a playpen in a room that would look like a house all in one room.
Your father comes through the door and kisses the woman, who you remember is your mother. Your mother picks you up and carries you out the door. You are on the outside for the first time in your life! Surprisingly, the outside looks like the inside. Odd.
Your mother brings you into another room full of children your age. You crawl around and see children playing with toys and some just drooling. "How disgusting." You think to yourself.
You find a small picture book titled "You're SPECIAL". You grab it and open it. It notifies you of all the things that matter in your life: Strength, Perception, Endurance, Charisma, Intelligence, Agility, and Luck.
You have points left.
Strength is
Perception is
Endurance is
Charisma is
Agility is
Luck is
I will put variables in the empty boxes. I might need someone who is good with variables to be a co-author.
EDIT: I changed the beginning and made the game have nothing to do with complicated variables and code now. Thanks for reading (If you did)!
